BSS: Very well done production wise. I found it a little on the slow side, which is just a taste thing, it's not a bad song at all. This is a vote. Freezing Hands: I should have used the lyrics thread listening to these, I can't understand the vocals. It's loud, I'll give it that lol. Not my vibe (p...

Unfortunately, the title didn't inspire anything for me this time. I'll catch you next time.

I saw only 1 set of reviews were done for the last fight so I hope me doing these will convince others to follow suit. Keep in mind I know very little about criticizing other people's work considering my own low level of knowledge so please don't be offended if you were nitpicked. Thank you. Blue Hy...

Not My Vibe - Rone Rivendale You can use your cars and your truck to drive But I'm a pedestrian that's not my vibe You think your tattoos and piercings jive But I'm a clean cut dude that's not my vibe You have your way And I have mine Eat your vegan diet to keep yourself alive I love my sweets too m...

Caught the writing bug again. I'm in with one late.

I guess if no one else makes it, you win by default

*peeks in*

No, I didn't forget about you guys. But I'm so out of practice again. Let's see what happens.

sleepysilverdoor wrote: ↑

Fri May 20, 2022 6:06 am

the panna cotta army wrote: ↑

Fri May 20, 2022 2:54 am

I’ve come to the realisation that I can’t write a song titled bunny hop that would appeal to anyone other than a 3 year old so I’ve decided I’m sitting this out.

That just means you needs to write a song for a three year old, clearly.

Yeah, i don't see the problem with this. Go for it!

Leon's reviews! Phlub: I enjoyed the music. The intro kinda tricked me into thinking it's was going to be a fun, chirpy rap or something... it went dark, quick... and stayed there! Almost had a Crash Test Dummies feel to it. Toby Roktot: ...and the award for the saddest song goes to... especially t...

Oh snap, I just learned FLStudio has a built in electric guitar plugin. No need for a free sample this fight, I already got my own groove going. Just needs lyrics which I'll work on tomorrow. It's super late as I write this.

Wrote my own beat, hated it. Decided to look up free beats. Found one I loved more than life itself. Wrote lyrics, and I'm in.

Good to finally be out of my songwriting funk, having missed a few/several fights.

Rone Rivendale Whispers in the wind Shadows on the wall Who is the greatest of them all Sword by my side Potions in my belt No one can stop the damage I have dealt Hiding with stealth Dagger at the ready But you are not ready you are not ready It's time to fight The blood will be a sight I am the al...

I'm out. So aggravated. Bought a pocket amp for the new guitar I bought from Amazon. Doesn't work. So I go acoustic even though I can't hide my giant flaws without noise to cover everything up. Guess what, wrote a song around "Head On" instead of "Head First". Now I've trashed t...

I'm out. So aggravated. Bought a pocket amp for the new guitar I bought from Amazon. Doesn't work. So I go acoustic even though I can't hide my giant flaws without noise to cover everything up. Guess what, wrote a song around "Head On" instead of "Head First". Now I've trashed tw...

In with some seriously cheesy pop. Def looking forward to that. So, if I submit it's going to be a late entry tomorrow nite. I have a certain item that is supposed to be arriving from Amazon tomorrow and if it does I'll be able to do something 'different' with my entry. I had a rap written for this...

I have problems doing reviews too. I'm not a technical person when it comes to instrumentation and I feel like all I have to say is either "I like how this sounds" or "I don't like how this sounds" or "This sounds like INSERT BAND HERE". And yeah, for some of the long t...

Rone Rivendale - if you're going to use stock samples you should mess them up so they don't sound like a keyboard demo. I don't get sure why you looped this for so long without any changes. You don't listen to a lot of Techno/electronica do you? lol It's ok, my next song is going to be VERY differen...

Not new but Pigfamer Jr has really been killing it lately.

Rone Rivendale is in. Very much experimental. I didn't call this a feature despite there being a 2nd vocalist. I went back and forth on this, but the vocals are built-in to FLStudio and so I presume they are no string attached to use. For the record, as I included in my lryics, the wonderful lady is...

Rone Rivendale (with built-in vocals provided by FruityLoops f. Laurie Webb) Ahhh Ooooh Yeah One minute closer to you Can't wait to be next to you Ahhh Ooooh Yeah One minute closer to you Can't wait to be next to you Ahhh Ooooh Yeah One minute closer to you Can't wait to be next to you Ahhh Ooooh Ye...

Congrats to Owl.

My opinion doesn't mean much but I think Phlub was slept on, I found his entry to easily be the best of the fight.

Considering only 1 person has done reviews for the last fight. I'll pass on this hard title.

edit: And before anyone says "and that 1 person wasn't you." I was live at the listening party giving feedback in real time. Thanks.