Balance Lost
Really catchy, nice energy. The vocal recording quality is low, obviously, but it's not getting in the way of me understanding the lyrics, nor enjoying the song. Well done!
Banging Betty
So, the ID3 tag says this song is called Aphrodisiac Bubble-Gum. Um? Regardless, the lyrics on this are clunky and also clunkily delivered. The guitar part sounds pretty generic to me.
Beefwestern
Think the lead vocal delivery is well done for what you are going for. The ahs at the beginning are horribly off key, though. Not a huge fan of the backing music, it's not as "on" as the vocal is. When the lyric gets to the point of just insulting GWB, I get less interested. It's not that I completely disagree with you or anything, it's just not very compelling to listen to at that point.
Boxer B
The music isn't terrible. There are some sloppy bits in the performance here and there, but for the most part it's competent enough. The lead vocal is not very good. The lyrics don't draw me in, neither does the delivery. This "spacey" bit at the end just isn't grabbing me.
Chopped Liver Meat God
At first I was annoyed by what sounded like yet another crappy distorted guitar song, but then it got to the part where you start singing. I'm gonna go ahead and call this pretty great. It comes across to me as not only a song mocking the title in a way that isn't "oh I'm on songfight and this title is dumb", but ALSO a mockery of crappy distorted guitar songs. Maybe I'm reading it wrong, but if not, well done sir. Also quite fond of the streetfigher breakdown, though after reading the lyrics I didn't understand why those lines were there.
Crack My Jaw
This would work pretty OK as an interlude on an album. As a standalone song, prob not something I'd listen to very often.
Doscientos
Vocals are intelligible, yay! Mix sounds WAY back, but whatevs. It's a fun, energetic song, but not at all in the realm of what I typically listen to. It's not eliciting an "oh god awful" feeling from me, though, so it's prob ok.
Ford's Theater Disaster
Lead vocal totally puts me off this one. Sounds like you are being over affective with your voice and also you're not really singing notes. There's a distorted guitar part that is kind of quiet, just off center to the right. It just sounds like static back there.
Future Boy
Not very happy with the mix on this one. Will probably revisit it. Also want to rerecord the vocals so I don't have to compress them so much. Wonder if the song is a bit too slow. This recording hurts my ears.
Gooey Caramel Centaur
This is a nice song. The vocal rhythm on the verses is maybe not as tight as it could be. I say, practice it more, get yourself a better mic situation, and rerecord it. Oh, right, when I read the lyrics was really not a fan of the kerfuffle / snuffle rhyme. It's not too bad when it occurs in the song, but I think I'm still opposed to it on principle.
Looking For Alaska
Generally not a fan of this kind of sleepy folky thing. That aside, I don't like the way you drop off in pitch on the last note of every phrase, rather than just holding the note until you stop singing it. Maybe this is a stylistic thing, but I would not describe it as good singing. Or, at the very least, if you are going to do that for affect, limit it to places where it makes the most sense musically and emotionally. Right now it just sounds like something you've gotten in the habit of doing without thinking about it.
Lord of Oats
These lyrics are pretty much godawful, read to me out of a DMV manual why don't you? The one-note, poor singing doesn't help. Not very fond of the music, really. It's not terrible, seems to be mixed relatively well, it's just kind of bland, nothing really hooks me in. This is George Carlin at the end, is that right? I mean, he's cool and all, but I'm not sure how using this much of him makes the song any better/more potent/more compelling.
Marrs and Denny
Someone has been watching auto-tune the news. Not very nice to bite someone else's gimmick. Also, it's not as good.
Mister Shot
Music is kind of fun. Vocal is too low in the mix. Rapping could be tighter. Not much more to say about this.
Naked Philosophy
By this point in the fight I'm pretty tired of listening to lo-fi distorted guitar songs, which puts you at a disadvantage. Song didn't really grab me at all.
Paco del Stinko
Not very fond of the lyrics on this one. Don't remember having a super negative reaction when reading them in the forum, so maybe it's just how you've set them to music. Mostly just tired of listening to this song after a couple minutes.
Pathetic Wannabees
This song is collapsing under the weight of the recording quality. However, I can imagine this might be fun to see live.
Rone Rivendale
This vocal is bad. Really, it's not good at all. Might I suggest that you collaborate with someone who can sing better? Not overly fond of the lyrics, but I think probably someone who is actually carrying a nice tune could make them palatable. The music doesn't really cohere and your panning choice seems odd.
Ross Durand
This is a nice song.
The Semolina Pilchards
The odd meter on the verse doesn't groove as well as I'd like. The doubled vocals are nice but more time getting the multiple takes matched in terms of rhythm, consonant placement, and note lengths would have been worth it. That's something I agonize over in my own stuff, though, so maybe other people won't notice as much. Chorus is good, though I fully expect the last word to rhyme with "job", but then the last word is "me", which makes me feel a little let down.
Smile Case
I having trouble hearing a song in all of this. It sounds like some buzzy thing along with meadering guitar strumming and meandering vocals that seem totally unrelated to the guitar.
Swilington
Synth stuff doesn't become as cool as I was hoping for, given how the song started. Could do without the Bush clips at the beginning. Mix seems really off once you start actually singing. Drums in particular are way too quiet, IMO. The lyrics are too straightforward, not in concept, but in the way you say what you are saying, if that makes sense. I mean, it's a song, try to be a little bit poetic or something.
Walrus Gumble
Shoe-horning the title into a song that has nothing to do with it? Why is everything over in my right ear?
The Weakest Suit
Didn't really like the lyrics when I read them, like them even less in this delivery. If you are going to write such a bland chord progression, the lyrics and melody better be pretty gripping. They are not, therefore I find myself unable to care about this song.