This will come in pieces:Paco del Stinko
: Jeez Louise...it is Paco the frickking Tank Engine. This has no business succeeding. But it does. This is a beautiful piece of work. Well done. A dumb song that oozes genius.Frankie Big Face:
Like Paco - this should not work. I had pre-determined that I did not want this title to tell me about Patients 1 to 6. And I do not like MaCartneyesque warblings at the best of times. But I liked this. I have no effing idea what the lyrics are about - but they were intrguing enough to keep me interested. Easily my favourite of yours so far in this comp. Great cacophony. That is what I wanted to hear.Ross Durand
: Now, unlike Paco and Frankie - this sounded like it should have worked - but did not quite connect with me. Purely personal taste here - it is beautifully written, sounds great, and I rate this the BEST cacophony of the round - the horns give it a "Laughing Clowns" type feel - but the guitar rock stuff just didn't grab me. As I said - just personal taste.Merisan:
This is a dull song that fails the challenge. Erin's voice is still good - but it only gets you so far.John Klobodanz:
Great use of challenge. Not what I expected - but it works for me. I liked this as a song - I found the lyrics a bit weak. But it was still a good listen.Wreckdom:
I was hoping you would give a tender piano ballad in perfect pitch - and then use as your defense "It sounds like cacopony to me - here are 100 Songfight entries by WreckdoM that sound melodic to me"
Whatever - this is great. Great song, great performance, and great use of challenge (which would have been no challenge to you).DJRangerDen
: On first listen I thought - "oh, girl with great voice - this is Merisan"
- then was surprised to hear Erin pop up a bit later. I really liked this. You pass the challenge ....JUST
- and that is what annoys me. This song would be awesome with some real light/shade stuff. You need real cacophony. I want to hear you go APESHIT and smash those frickking piano keys until tiny pools of blood appear as you scream like a banshee....and then.....it goes quiet again and your nice song comes back in.
...well, that's what I want to hear anyway.....
.....I will update this as time permits.....
dantes wrote:You edited your post without adding a review of my song? For shame!
Patience GrasshopperBran Tant
This was really pretty enjoyable. Got a bit sloppy in parts - but sloppy in a Velvet Undergroundy sort of way - which is acceptable. Limited lyricwise - but still quite effective despite that.Worldly Self Assurance:
This is a dull song that fails the challenge.Billys Little Trip:
Wow! This is spooky in its prescience.
Billy's Little Trip wrote:No one will miss me when I'm gone
You are gone - and you are right - we don't miss you!
Just kidding - this is great. You should not be gone. Obviously some of the judges here are as useless as a condom full of cum. Your best song of the competition for mine. I liked the lyrics, and I liked how you met the challenge by singing painfully out of tune....sorry, joke again - couldn't resist it - this is actually one of the best vocals I have heard from you. It all sounds pretty good to me. And the discordant guitar does pass the cacophony test for me.