Hat_man wrote:-Wages- B+
-Wtf is with the lyrics? B+
a bebop a rebop wrote:Wages - your voice is swinging, a little and your guitar isn't at all, it's a little unsettling. The guitar sound is really pretty though. I don't like the nerdiness of most of it, it doesn't fit the rootsy mood of the rest of the song. Nice overall effect though, it's really raw.
Wages wrote:What do you mean by "swinging" vocals? Also, how would the guitar swing?
a bebop a rebop wrote:Wages wrote:What do you mean by "swinging" vocals? Also, how would the guitar swing?
Swinging is when you don't play the 8th notes straight. In other words, the eighth notes that aren't on the beats (1-2-3-4) are slightly held-back.
glennny wrote:Wages- You have a great voice! You're a great singer. However every submission the guitar playing ruins it for me. Can you track the guitar with a click track? Then sing solidly as you do over it? Anyway, it's particularly upsetting because there's soooo much potential , but the execution of your entire back up band (the guitar) brings it down. A good song, you should sell it.
a bebop a rebop wrote:Hat_man, are you sure you're not switching mine and Wages' songs up? Because my lyrics were pretty incoherent, I guess, and I felt his were fairly straight-forward. Also, "actual guitar skill" re: my song is a bit of a stretch. Thanks for the review and the high marks though!
blue wrote:I think you may have a tuning issue between right and left instruments, as well
blue wrote:The center of the mix is this giant wash of mud and goo, and the piano really suffers for it.
hat dude: bitter? was that directed at me? i've been rude to hundreds of people and thousands, literally, of songs. it's not bitterness, it's my love for good music.
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