Hi -- I wrote lyrics 4 Convalescence & posted them in the "Lyric Mart," in the "Ye Old Lyric Archive" -- ta

Here's lyrics for the song to which I have no music... Convalescence It was something about the size of the diamond or the gem that didn’t suit her It might’ve been the restaurant choice or the way they diced the fruit or Maybe it was because the moon was in the house of Jupiter — I don’t know — All...

...I listened to all entries -- but when faced with commenting on so many I failed to get the job done -- now I'm out of time but wanted to say: a) PdelS's lead guitar work is crazygood, and b)Space Dust entered a brave & beautiful epic -- congratulations. very much good work,my vote would be to...

to wormsweater -- sorry, no, I think I liked the song, even though longish (sometimes it helps to set a mood), I just couldn't hear it well enough. I've always been able to (if I can't hear sufficiently) download the thing & crank the volume, but for some reason this time it didn't work...

One definition of pathetic fallacy I found via google: "The ascribing of human traits or feelings to inanimate nature for eloquent effect, especially feelings in sympathy with those expressed or experienced by the writer." The more typical example is "it was a dark & stormy night&...

Chin Music sez: There were so many… Sorry if my comments are a little brief, a little not-very-bright regarding technique, and… (looks down at pages) (shuffles pages) I was impressed as usual by this group, so this will be just a brief (drops pages on floor, drops to knees to retrieve them) ah, ...

1933 field recording of Ignorance is Bliss I drove uptown down Venice Avenue Ran over a man with my new Terraplane I said how can I help you sir, what can I say? He said say no more Ignorance is Bliss Don’t remind me, maybe it’ll all go away I had a brand new hookah, shiny as a pin We were firin...

To most people, Mr Bojangles (Bill Robinson) was Shirley Temple's tap-dancing partner in films of the 1930s. Yet he also was one of the country's foremost and best-loved vaudeville headliners. "Mr Bojangles" was also a hit in 1968 by Jerry Jeff Walker, the melody of which your tune is like...

Chin Music intones: Caravan Ray — Sounds like Brian Wilson on a good day, and this track would make a perfect segue with Sloop John B. Daddybop — Musically clever; lyrically thin, I’m afraid. Keep boppin’. Tam Lin Music — Leonard Cohenish, nice character-driven tale. “How to make her sad...

Rhymes With Lucia Maria stared at the bruised and abused sky as she walked for miles on the street It rained so much in Oakland this year and everyone’s tears flow to the sea I may not know much, but I know this much is true You can’t walk out on the sad girl blues. She never chose who she was u...

The Brush Pickers – Simple but good reggae, I like it, if I don’t understand it, but perhaps understanding isn’t the point. Did not fall into the “if you see Kayâ€

Dave sez: "JAK :- After reading your lyrics for Proud! if your song isn't a showtune, I will be sad." --prepare for sadness. It's more pitched towards TAMI Show, we think. Chin Music also believes we missed our target, musically, and sheer enthusiasm might not have saved the day... Also sw...

PROUD! You know I have to shout it ‘cause you know it makes me want to be so Proud To be a certified member Proud To be the one that dogs look up to And you know that every time another species goes extinct I say it loud! I’m so proud to be a human — You know back in the time, the time of Alle...

Hi -- one of our band is incapacitated -- but we hads writ already -- please take if you want change it, whatever -- you don't have to ask permission (I'm off the net for some days, I'm sorry 2 say) -- best, good luck, and so forth -- This is a double-post (also posted in "JotI" lyrics thr...

Yoohoo -- one of our band is ill, so we posted lyrics to "Jesus on the Intercom" in the lyrics archive -- one of you musical geniuses, if you're stuck for words, and don't mind these -- change as you like, whatever -- best, jak

Hi -- one of our band is incapacitated -- but we hads writ already -- please take if you want change it, whatever -- you don't have to ask permission (I'm off the net for some days, I'm sorry 2 say) -- best, good luck, and so forth Jesus on the Intercom I was sailing the submarine of state Into ocea...

2 Many 2 Judge with any depth… Frankie Big Face — Didn’t love the piano solo; pretty good words(mithing), for example the line about checking out every mirror in this town. The problem with taking a drum intro from another and quite brilliant song is that the listener can’t help but compare ...

Pretend it’s just a ride, he said, Like down at CarneytownUSA. You remember the rides my sweet girl? Imagine you on the carney fairway. But I could only remember one ride And I tried to make it come true. It was a wonderful journey to space And best part was Stairway to the Moon. And so when my mo...

…ChinMusic, commenting on today’s hits and picks to click… Wreckdom: …Am I a precedent, or just an accident? is a very good line, summing up the human condition as it does. Best use of dog, best Slim Pickins. Yeah, ‘cause I didn’t recognize Lovitz I didn’t get the reference, and wouldâ...

Big Success I was optimistic enough as the new kid in town I earnestly penned a semi-autobiographical story I shopped it around to all the bigtime houses I spent long evenings dreaming of authorial glory But I only got one form letter back and it thanked me for thinking of their imprint They couldnâ...

Sorry this is late, and being mostly unqualified to comment, I offer the following comments: Johnny C’s Evil Twin: Wins the spooky kids in the haunted hall prize. MCMilk+: OK! Outrageously sharp, entertaining mostly, filled with no mistakes. Dollar Bill & the Inkpots: Translated from the Germa...

Bad Cat Dictator supplicant noisemaker lovemaker imitator judge and midnight housebreaker I could go on he’s also an explorer and faker shrill in his pleasure at finding hidden delights He might be closeted in prayer or dancing in the public square there’s no such thing as a bad cat — he just ...