You Got To Be Kind - William Lane Ive found the little things in life make it all worth while make you truly smile The saddest thing I ever saw was a heart made of stone that ended up alone You got to keep your head when your talking with the angels You got to see the road you left behind Its hard t...

Glenny - No review for DJ Ranger Den or Hortus Ortus?

William Lane - indifferent - Well executed. I had high hope for this at the start, but it never took off. Needs doubled chorus vocals or some harmonies a dynamic change-up ... it didn't hold my interest. I agree, I love the way it starts but it never took off for myself either but what I felt like ...

All this talk about reviews, and William, you and I are the only ones who have actually _>>>>__DONE ANY__<<<<__!! I was just reading over these post and had just thought to myself the same exact thing. I was thinking, is anyone else going to write a review? and then I scrolled down and read this. I...

Please do not take any offense..... I didn't. It takes a lot to offend me. You don't have to explain to me why you didn't like the song. I just wasn't sure how I'd inspired Ear Pain. I'd never gotten that one before. I'm thinking from your reply that it's hyperbole for the purposes of expressing an...

I don't have a universally lovely woman-voice Thank goodness! Because I don't have a universally lovely musical style. Yet, BatP is a universally lovely collaboration. Go figure. ;) “We cannot change the cards we are dealt, just how we play the hand.” ~Randolph Frederick "Randy" Pausch I ...

Hortus Ortus wrote:Thanks William Lane!!

Darren of H.O.

YW and if your voice had been a little louder and equal in the song, you woulda got my first ever Kick Ass grade...lol. I know it means a lot

I thought "Fantastic" was better than "awesome". I think they are equal. https://i.chzbgr.com/maxW500/5626744576/hB83DC7A1/ Nooooooo nothing is better than awesome except totally awesome...and nothing is better than totally awesome except kick ass...there is one thing better tha...

First of all, I think it's a little silly that my song would have caused "ear pain." I actually was honestly taken aback because it seemed to come from the left of the field. If you'd (Mr. William Lane) said "you didn't spend any time on this song (which you couldn't have known) and ...

when I review your song I do it as much for me as for you. Funny, I was coming back online just now to write the very same thought. I've learned way more by reviewing other people than by getting reviewed. (Not to say I don't love that dopamine rush when I get a good review, I'm still living off so...

There are no rules on how one reviews a fight. Any review is better than none. But hey, you like it or you don't. Nobody owes anyone an explanation. It's a privilege, not a right. Besides, reviews are mostly biased opinions, unless they are pointing out the obvious. Like, hey, you hit a sour note. ...

Even American Idol has 3 judges....How many times has Simon said someone was awful while the other two said they were great? Sheesh, I just wanted to give my review in the manner in which I liked because to me a person may or may not get my music and thats fine...For instance Jims review of my song ...

I guess I don't get it. There are five hundred reasons why one might give a song "C plus-minus" or whatever. Maybe the guitars are too loud, or the lyrics are corny, or the vocals are sharp, or the chorus is too repetitive, or the clavichord is panned to far, or the tune is boring, or the...

Hey everyone, William Lane doesn't want any thoughtful reviews, with, like complete sentences blah blah blah. Sorry, William, I've adjusted my review for you below. Hope it's more helpful! This is very true, I personally don't want any thoughtful reviews because I find them pointless but that is ju...

I got tired of having my drumming called "sloppy" (which, of course, it is) so I tried to tighten it up this week. Wish me luck! No worries, I enjoyed the shit out of your submission of C&S. I think Hortus Ortus has the best song in the fight but you gave em run for the money. Both of...

I wont bore you with a lot of blah blah blah as I am sure most people are a lot like myself and try to avoid sucking tornado's that absorb stuff and spew it out into a pile of garbage. Key A plus - kick ass A - totally awesome A minus - awesome B plus - fantastic B - great stuff B minus - good stuff...

Commitment And Sacrifice by William Lane Commitment and sacrifice Makin the world go round We all have to roll the dice Sometimes were lost sometimes were found We buy our memories through the years There is no second chance We pay with our blood, sweat and tears Giving and taking is the name of the...

I am going to enter and its going to start out like this...

Im giving all my commitment and sacrifice
To the fabled three blind mice
So they can see and get a slice
From the hot azz farmers wife

OMG did I just commit lyrical genius?

Mind you... I was just watching the diving - and damn they have some good camera angles - but the competitors are mostly only 15 or 16 so I don't want to sound creepy or nothing... so just to even everything up - here is a photo of Usain Bolt's cock http://www.king-mag.com/online/wp-content/uploads...

William, what is your problem with apostrophes? And contractions of the words "you are"? Reading your lyrics makes me think less of you before even listening to your song, which is pleasant enough but not something I care to listen to more than once. Welcome to Song Fight! :) JB Awe come ...

Havent seen that cartoon in years...too funny!

I, Sir William, son of Ray, hath posted that my presence from this day forward be knowst throughout the SongFight kingdom and that all shall bend an ear to my entrancing arrangements of musical notes and lyrics and from that day on, shall hear and despair!

Sir William