Billy's Little Trip wrote:

Hortus Ortus wrote:Billy's Little Tip

Oh, you and your puns.


...and it's not that little.

OOPS! Sorry bout dat!!

Billy's Little Tip, Blindmine, Foobar.....Thank you for the tips. I really appreciate it and BLT, I am gonna try that!

Foobar [/url] The beginning sounds very much like the Bloodhound Gang's Discovery Channel song. I like the lyrics and phrasing. (repeating words...cool) I like this song all in all, the only real negative thing might be the vocals. A tad pitchy and a tad too high in the mix for me. Hip Hop Anonymou...

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I like the guitar tone, but sometimes it goes sour to my ears.

Thanks for the review. I am definitely interested in improving my guitar tone, I wasn't totally happy with it, but what do you mean by "sour"?

The day began as usual Toothpaste tainted orange juice We weren’t ready for the hell Of vengeful robots on the loose. The president and God in Heaven Could not stop the rampage Scientific 7 It’s a new age Scientific 7 They’re smarter than you. Trans-dimensional aggression Sent from beings bent on ve...

Reviews from Darren of Hortus Ortus yo! Jay String and DJ Whiz......Some interesting sounds here. Some good creativity going on here. Creative lyrics. This is a fun song. Enter It In The Art Show....Cool guitars...Voice sounds cool. Nice melody. Cool arrangement. This might get a vote. Bombernaughts...

Hey all,

I made a video of the images that prompted the direction of our song. Thought I would post it here for you guys to see. It is a pretty interesting story.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6fQ_iW99WIM

Teresa

Thirty years ago, you disappeared from sight The rains washed over you, you gave up the fight Fleeing men, women, and children alike Had to leave you all alone CHORUS Come out from the water, brush off the salt Show us your story before it came to a halt A life long gone, a flood brought about Come ...

WREEVYEWZ Regarding our song..yep, the vocals are mixed wayyy too low. Very true. That's what I get for getting up in the morning and doing a final mix with a hangover, one hour before deadline. Anyway, thanks for all the input. Tyler Zahnke....Funny. Recorded on a potato?? Banana Dan....Well done i...

Some good entries. My two fav's this time were Tuners Union and Foobar. Tuners Union: I love the chords, harmony, and really a 60's good time folk feel with a mix of Chicago and the blend is awesome! Foobar: Good song and excellent lyrics. Great message and thank you for writing that. I actually had...

Ok....look out...one half of Hortus Ortus here (Darren)...... REVIEWS! Jim Of Seattle.....I really like what you are doing with your voice(s). You used the word "somnambulant" for our song. I think the word applies to yours as well. It's a very nicely composed song with an interesting hook...

Thanks William Lane!!

Darren of H.O.

DJ Ranger Den: I really like the tonality of your voice. I also like the simplicity of what sounds like a Wurlitzer piano. Nice.

Paco del Stinko: I like the energy behind your song and the strings really are a great addition.

Teresa of H.O.