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by grumpymike
Wed Jun 15, 2022 8:53 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round Three "Can't Let It Go"
Replies: 65
Views: 5337

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round Three "Can't Let It Go"

Super short and to-the-point reviews. Sorry shadows - only got so much time in a day. Vom Vorton - I've been waiting for this song. Thank you for not writing about cats or boat contests. Strength: personality, hooks Weakness: some pitchiness, mastering The Alleviators - This is very nice. The story ...
by grumpymike
Mon Jun 13, 2022 8:15 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round Three "Can't Let It Go"
Replies: 65
Views: 5337

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round Three "Can't Let It Go"

the lowest bitter wrote:30 degree heat
Metric lyrics? Instant fail.
by grumpymike
Wed Jun 01, 2022 2:28 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round One "Deified"
Replies: 78
Views: 6021

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round One "Deified"

I’m almost too embarrassed to share my realization that it’s a Song Fight song. Surely, you never heard Melvin’s Love Me a Little Bit More. Quite a lot of similarity when you put the surface aesthetics aside.
by grumpymike
Wed Jun 01, 2022 2:11 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round One "Deified"
Replies: 78
Views: 6021

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round One "Deified"

Speaking of borrowed compositions, what does Stacking Theory remind me of this round? I’ve been wracking my brain trying to figure it out.
by grumpymike
Tue May 31, 2022 12:29 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round Two "Floating In the Water"
Replies: 53
Views: 4288

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round Two "Floating In the Water"

The intention is to give perspective from at least two different time periods significantly apart and weave them into a coherent song. Whether it’s fictional or not doesn’t matter so long as you aren’t so off-the-rails that it’s not recognizable as being different time periods. The original suggesti...
by grumpymike
Mon May 30, 2022 6:26 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round One "Deified"
Replies: 78
Views: 6021

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round One "Deified"

Welp, this is one of those rounds where as soon as I start listening to everyone else's songs, I immediately kick myself for not googling the most basic thing - how to fucken pronounce deified. I just assumed it was DAY-ified with a long "a" (like it is in Latin - Deus Ex Machina), but ha...
by grumpymike
Sun May 29, 2022 8:02 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round One "Deified"
Replies: 78
Views: 6021

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round One "Deified"

No ABBCBBA (7 notes, 3 tones)? I guess that's too similar to just being ABCBA. I’d give that a strong “depends” how well it’s done. If it feels like ABCBA with an awkward addition that doesn’t really belong there, not a huge fan. That said, I won’t be strongly indexing on the challenge as a penalty.
by grumpymike
Sat May 28, 2022 5:31 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round One "Deified"
Replies: 78
Views: 6021

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round One "Deified"

I can’t speak for the other judges. I will accept any phrase that contains at least 3 distinct tones and is at least 6 notes in total length. In other words, I think the minimum phrases follow the forms ABCCBA (6 notes, 3 tones), ABCDCBA (7 notes, 4 tones), ABACABA (7 notes, 3 tones).
by grumpymike
Fri May 27, 2022 3:16 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round One "Deified"
Replies: 78
Views: 6021

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round One "Deified"

I’ll also be pretty liberal in my judging, so don’t toss out whatever you were doing. Just saying, I’ll judge harder if it’s obviously part of another phrase. Because then I don’t consider it a phrase in and of itself, which means it doesn’t follow the text of the challenge “palindromic musical phra...
by grumpymike
Fri May 27, 2022 12:55 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round One "Deified"
Replies: 78
Views: 6021

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round One "Deified"

Any instrument or track. However, I will be looking for a complete phrase. For example: an 8 beat melody with 6 notes palindromic and 2 completing the phrase does *not* qualify.

Edit: removed the use of “measure”
by grumpymike
Wed May 25, 2022 9:16 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round Zero "Friday the 13th"
Replies: 41
Views: 4182

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round Zero "Friday the 13th"

At the risk of pissing everyone off, I figure I owe you all some thoughts. I listened to the songs multiple times and had different front-runners at different times. The things I looked for were: * execution - technically how well you composed, performed, engineered, produced * concept - how well th...
by grumpymike
Tue May 24, 2022 4:03 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round One "Deified"
Replies: 78
Views: 6021

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round One "Deified"

This pairing, in retrospect, screams Gregorian chant to me. To be clear, Gregorian chant should be chanted - not screamed.
by grumpymike
Mon May 16, 2022 5:40 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein X-Seven
Replies: 10
Views: 1779

Re: Nur Ein X-Seven

The website has Round 0 up. I have a forum post in the moderation queue. Sorry for the bumpy start, folks.
by grumpymike
Mon May 16, 2022 5:39 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round Zero "Friday the 13th"
Replies: 41
Views: 4182

Nur Ein XVII Round Zero "Friday the 13th"

Submit an original song by May 22 at 11:59 PM (EDT) that fits the following criteria

Title: Friday the 13th
Challenge: write a feel-good song with happy lyrics and upbeat music

Send your MP3 to nurein.sidefight@gmail.com

Good luck!
by grumpymike
Tue May 10, 2022 9:44 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein X-Seven
Replies: 10
Views: 1779

Re: Nur Ein X-Seven

Website updated and ready to roll. https://nure.in
by grumpymike
Tue Apr 12, 2022 9:18 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII: The Feeling Out Process
Replies: 15
Views: 1796

Re: Nur Ein XVII: The Feeling Out Process

I'll judge. I won't be able to do much else.
by grumpymike
Wed Jun 23, 2021 8:20 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVI Round Five "The Only Way Out"
Replies: 36
Views: 4395

Re: Nur Ein XVI: Round Five "The Only Way Out"

C4D929B2-364C-436A-BAB7-4E406F948367.gif Yawn. If I’d known you didn’t know what you wanted I might have had time to make a better song. Instead, I bugged the heck out of Cybronica for her educated opinion on music theory. I knew I would get panned for only having 2 hours to record. I considered no...
by grumpymike
Tue Jun 22, 2021 8:17 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVI Round Five "The Only Way Out"
Replies: 36
Views: 4395

Re: Nur Ein XVI: Round Five "The Only Way Out"

However, you establish the key of C and then go up to Gm in both chords and melody. That's an upward modulation in my book. When you bike up and down a hill, and someone asks “did you bike down that hill?” do you say “no! I only biked up!”? I don’t really anticipate making it through this round for...
by grumpymike
Mon Jun 21, 2021 7:25 am
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Nur Ein XVI - The Only Way Out
Replies: 13
Views: 1135

Re: Nur Ein XVI - The Only Way Out

Challenge: My verse is in C and my chorus is in Gm. The transition back to C involves Adim -> D7 -> C. Which is downward. I hope you didn’t mean to specify something else that isn’t a technical definition of modulation! Verse After years of repeating the same mistakes You’re convinced there is no es...
by grumpymike
Thu Jun 10, 2021 8:44 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVI Round Three "Pleasant Row"
Replies: 69
Views: 7962

Re: Nur Ein XVI: Round Three "Pleasant Row"

Thanks, judges, furrypedro, Tommy G, and everyone else who's shared their reaction to this song. I had no idea it would catch on. My wife has been singing "NEIN! WE ROW!" all week. At first I was going to do some lame Penny Lane inspired song and toss in some foreign lyrics - probably Fren...
by grumpymike
Tue Jun 08, 2021 7:06 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVI Round Four "Waiting For The Sun To Fall"
Replies: 73
Views: 8010

Re: Nur Ein XVI: Round Four "Waiting For The Sun To Fall"

omg. I read that whole thread and it was hilarious. Mean as hell but the insults were pretty funny. Haven’t read it in years… wow, that was hilarious! …in retrospect. Y’know, new people come around and think these forums can be heated… but today it’s mostly friendly jabs compared to back then. We’v...
by grumpymike
Mon Jun 07, 2021 2:59 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVI Round Four "Waiting For The Sun To Fall"
Replies: 73
Views: 8010

Re: Nur Ein XVI: Round Four "Waiting For The Sun To Fall"

JonPorobil wrote:
Mon Jun 07, 2021 12:04 pm
And I don't mind telling you guys, if I'd been a judge that year, I'd have made the same call.
👀