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Johnny in the Corner Aside from the missing bass ..... There's a bass there. Real bass. Jack even got me to turn it up in the mix. or do you mean it's gone missing as in it's all over the place? yeah I know it's there dude, and it's not all over the place as far as I can tell, I just couldn't hear ...

Adam Dachis I love the "Oh how I want a million things melody" section and the beautifully Joanna Newsom La la la/na na na section, however the rest of the song (which is a trifle long for the point you're trying to get across), is rather monotonous probably because the general mood of th...

- Compression would really make the mix more listenable (
- Some of the harmony vocals were out of tune and should have been resung (or dropped)
- Some of them were good
- The Volume jumped around a lot on the song, making it hard to enjoy.

WeaselSlayer wrote:I'm trying, but I don't speak asshole I'm afraid.

Don't want criticism? Don't write songs and post them on the internet.

Or put down the shaker, whichever is easiest for you.

Boltoph I like your voice, kinda reminds me of the guy from that Len song "Steal My Sunshine", your little backing harmonies are pretty too. This whole thing is well recorded and I like that little 7th coffee shop chord in the chorus. This is really well executed summery acoustic guitar p...

Sell crazy got my vote. not much of a review, I guess I felt most of the others went for a cheap laugh here or there (or all the way through). Sell crazy seemed like the most fully formed concept, especially outside of the obvious Britney spears references. i appreciated that. Thank you Also, being...

Dopant - If Courtney Love was singing this it would be great. The voice needs to be a bit more lived-in. Specifically really reminds me of 'Celebrity Skin' Hole which features a song called 'Hollywood', natch! The singing is fine but it sounds like you've never been drunk, nevermind drunk on someon...

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make sure you enter just http://www.songfight.org into your browser and not /blue or red. I had the same problem earlier.

EightLeggedOedipus wrote:Dopant
--- skip at :24 ---

Thanks for that. There;s actually a whole chunk of song after you checked out.

We Are All Famous - Dopant We Are All Famous here in Hollywood Ain't got the time or the piece of mind but hey boy I wish I could break out of this dead ghost town and meet somebody real Ain't got the time or the piece of mind to tell you just how I feel I wake up late but I'm still Drunk On You. I...

In for We Are All Famous

I think the guitar things you're hearing is that I had a SM57 on the cab grille and a condensor backed off a ways for natural room verb that I think I left too high in the mix. The tracks may be out of phase, too, which can thin the sound. Apologies if you know this stuff already, but here's a good...

Dopant: Solid song overall, especially the performance. Nice and tight. I'd like to hear the drums a lot louder, and the guitar is doing some phasing thing I can't put my finger on. Did you double it? hey thanks :o, It was a case that I recorded everything the Saturday, mixed the Sunday and thought...

Prep School - dopant When half past three rolls round you know I'm not like the others ones They pack me off to that damn prep school, my friends they don't notice I'm gone Stuck in a room with no windows or sun And no-one ever makes any sound - but they're singing "Do your homework son and sit...

I'm in for Prep School as "dopant"

we're still on for this...

The Likely Lads - You guys are nuts!! But I love it. Tell me, it it really only one guy???? Anyway, I like the counterpoint in the chourus. You have a fan here. Have a good 2005. 15 and 17/18 stars Hey thanks for the kind words.. there's actually two of us on this recording, myself and Gareth (gdun...

I'm just gonna poke my nose in for mister likely mike - Bubba Ho-Tep is a movie wherein an aging Elvis Presley battles an undead mummy. Also JFK, maybe kinda sorta. You Decide! Great movie anyway. http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0281686/ hahah cool, that looks decidedly random. Unfortunately any simila...

Likely Lads: Mellencamp/Springsteen vox meet mid90's Empire Records Soundtrack slo-jam feel (sort of Gin Blossoms/Innocence Mission type pop). I wish there was a little keyboard part. A simple one. This song seems like the type to rely on its lyrics so I feel they could be a little fresher. We're a...

Leablit - Heavy rock, not really my thing. The bit when you try and get a bit more poppy with the breakdown and harmonies doesn't sound all that great because the pitch of the vocals isn't very strong. Well recorded and tasty drumming, but about as far from my cup o tea as can be... Luke Henley - I...

Block City by Mike Livesley/Gareth Duncan We all live in this city made of tiny blocks Take a ride it don't look pretty, feel that deep down rot The brainless kids they all sell crazy, but we are all stocked up Keep your head down son amaze me - don't let them fuck you up Our Block City sleeps all ...