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by Cybronica
Thu Dec 17, 2020 4:04 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: What was that? (Disembodied Voice reviews)
Replies: 101
Views: 2571

Re: What was that? (Disembodied Voice reviews)

Congrats, add and hostess mostess ! I didn’t manage to get reviews on all the songs written, but here are what I did manage! Disembodied Voice: Lichenthroat: the verse melody is repetitive, but the fact that I can hear it well enough to make that comment shows improvement from the last time i Heard-...
by Cybronica
Thu Dec 03, 2020 10:35 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: What was that? (Disembodied Voice reviews)
Replies: 101
Views: 2571

Re: What was that? (Disembodied Voice reviews)

Words More words I appreciate this advice. I tried singing along to an instrumental melody last time, but I couldn't even get close to it. In this week's song, as usual, the vocal melody is developed intuitively, and I have no idea what notes I'm singing, or supposed to be singing. I think I may ha...
by Cybronica
Thu Dec 03, 2020 10:23 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: What was that? (Disembodied Voice reviews)
Replies: 101
Views: 2571

Re: What was that? (Disembodied Voice reviews)

Number two: you have a strong tendency in your vocals of smearing the pitches, i.e. at the start of the note you need some time to "warm up" to the right pitch. This is partially due to technique, but it's also habit. Simply by doing some occasional practicing hitting notes faster (without trying t...
by Cybronica
Tue Dec 01, 2020 8:13 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Who's that?! (Disembodied Voice prefight)
Replies: 36
Views: 838

Re: Who's that?! (Disembodied Voice prefight)

Truth and I submitted under a new name: Conspiracy of Joy. This ones inspired by Princess Diana, after a 3 day binge of the Crown season 4 and the “In her own words” documentary on Netflix.
by Cybronica
Mon Nov 30, 2020 7:01 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Disembodied Voices
Replies: 20
Views: 511

Re: Disembodied Voices

Disembodied voice By Conspiracy of Joy Running through these palace hallways Never looking back or sideways Wishing I could find the door That opens up my mind And the voices whisper follow me Come my darling, we could be Happy here, happy dear Don’t you love me? X2 And they whisper, ‘never ever aga...
by Cybronica
Sun Sep 06, 2020 12:28 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Don't bring me down with your (High and Higher reviews)
Replies: 30
Views: 1268

Re: Don't bring me down with your (High and Higher reviews)

Congrats, Pannacotta army! Well deserved win. :) Thank you also to everyone who wrote reviews! Mandibles : This immediately has very Musical Theatre vibes. It’s feel reminds me a lot of the song “Ring of Keys” from Fun Home. Your vocals feel a little low in the mix, but that being said, I can clearl...
by Cybronica
Wed Sep 02, 2020 7:12 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Don't bring me down with your (High and Higher reviews)
Replies: 30
Views: 1268

Re: Don't bring me down with your (High and Higher reviews)

Reviews: Phlebia: I like what you did with your vocals. They are indecipherable, but the PinPointable tunefulness of them Balances out the organized din of the rest of the arrangement. Higher and higher is really pretty. Whispering interludes is trippy and cool. I voted for This, mainly because it w...
by Cybronica
Mon Aug 24, 2020 8:50 am
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: High and Higher
Replies: 12
Views: 507

Re: High and Higher

High and Higher By Mandibles Screaming Laughter, untied Shoes Summer sky’s awash in blues Loft plans lie just beyond Before the day has come and gone I feel the wind rush by Kicking my legs into the sky I’m swinging high And higher are my hopes and dreams In the sky Their guiding light is taunting m...
by Cybronica
Thu Aug 06, 2020 8:00 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Last warning: (Please Scream Inside Your Heart reviews)
Replies: 17
Views: 922

Re: Last warning: (Please Scream Inside Your Heart reviews)

Ok, it took a while, but here’s my reviews, no particular order: Robyn Mackenzie: the best part is when you add in the layered vocals. From there to end it much more interesting. The solo vocal sound a bit exposed, and under supported. It really emphasizes the pitchiness, too. The pitchiness isn’t t...
by Cybronica
Wed Jul 29, 2020 2:07 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Last warning: (Please Scream Inside Your Heart reviews)
Replies: 17
Views: 922

Re: Last warning: (Please Scream Inside Your Heart reviews)

Cybronica – ...I mean I can’t fault the production or the technical ability, it’s all performed and put together superbly... Woo hoo! Honestly, I wrote the song in an evening, and spent the rest of my time making this a case study for working to improve my production skills, so I am delighted by yo...
by Cybronica
Wed Jul 29, 2020 9:31 am
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Please Scream Inside Your Heart
Replies: 9
Views: 441

Re: Please Scream Inside Your Heart

Cybronica Please Scream Please scream Please scream inside your heart x3 Needle in a flame Stained a sterile grey Pierce my waiting lips The ones that you had kissed A single silken thread Slowly staining red Weaves a wicked spell Ensuring I won’t tell Please Scream Please scream Please scream insid...
by Cybronica
Tue Jul 28, 2020 3:35 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: We implore you (Please Scream Inside Your Heart prefight)
Replies: 22
Views: 832

Re: We implore you (Please Scream Inside Your Heart prefight)

Coming out of the woodworks to say that I am IN with a song that was mainly done to practice my mixing technique (thanks to Grumpy Mike for the feedback!)
by Cybronica
Fri Jul 03, 2020 6:02 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XV Round Six "Homestretch"
Replies: 76
Views: 3253

Re: Nur Ein XV Round Six "Homestretch"

grumpymike wrote:
Fri Jul 03, 2020 1:10 pm
Right now I'm re-constructing Mandibles' song and documenting it. Maybe at a future date I'll reveal a shiny new rendering to Abigail during a podcast? Seems like people might be interested in that.
Im totally in!
by Cybronica
Fri Jul 03, 2020 4:53 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XV Final Round "Pistols At Dawn"
Replies: 79
Views: 3889

Re: Nur Ein XV Final Round "Pistols At Dawn"

crumpart wrote:
Thu Jul 02, 2020 2:11 am
Video
This is great! I mentioned this elsewhere, but I just want to say this is my favorite song of yours. It’s beautiful, with a good momentum and a lovely swell, and the way you incorporate the photo’s back story into words is really well done. Thank you!
by Cybronica
Wed Jul 01, 2020 5:28 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XV Final Round "Pistols At Dawn"
Replies: 79
Views: 3889

Re: Nur Ein XV Final Round "Pistols At Dawn"

Congratulations Jon Eric! What a way to make a comeback! :)
by Cybronica
Thu Jun 25, 2020 8:19 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XV Round Five "North Beach Vampires"
Replies: 91
Views: 3892

Re: Nur Ein XV Round Five "North Beach Vampires"

Podcast! Yay! Thank you for putting this together- I always love listening to what you guys think of all the songs. :)
by Cybronica
Mon Jun 22, 2020 2:34 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: NUR EIN XV - Homestretch
Replies: 12
Views: 551

Re: NUR EIN XV - Homestretch

Mandibles This song grapples with the feeling of hopelessness when awful things are happening- a broken relationship, a crisis of self, and the dispelling of the vision of the life you thought you were going to live. People keep telling you that it will be ok, that things will go back to normal, tha...
by Cybronica
Mon Jun 22, 2020 7:42 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XV Round Six "Homestretch"
Replies: 76
Views: 3253

Re: Nur Ein XV Round Six "Homestretch"

Niveous wrote:
Mon Jun 22, 2020 7:31 am
Cybronica wrote:
Mon Jun 22, 2020 5:36 am
Hey, Mandibles sent in a shadow just before midnight, but I’m not seeing it in the line up. Did it get left off?
FIXED.
Thank you!!
by Cybronica
Mon Jun 22, 2020 5:36 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XV Round Six "Homestretch"
Replies: 76
Views: 3253

Re: Nur Ein XV Round Six "Homestretch"

Hey, Mandibles sent in a shadow just before midnight, but I’m not seeing it in the line up. Did it get left off?
by Cybronica
Wed Jun 17, 2020 8:10 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XV Round Five "North Beach Vampires"
Replies: 91
Views: 3892

Re: Nur Ein XV Round Five "North Beach Vampires"

I am sad that we are out, but it was bound to happen! Good job to everyone who made it through- it’s a playing field filled with talent! I’m glad that Glenn didn’t hate it! Is it safe to say you might have even... enjoyed some of it? :lol: Vom thanks also for the Reviews- and im really happy that yo...
by Cybronica
Mon Jun 15, 2020 9:22 am
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: NUR EIN XV - North Beach Vampires
Replies: 13
Views: 602

Re: NUR EIN XV - North Beach Vampires

North Beach Vampires By Mandibles ‘Cause we’re the north beach vampires We spent the whole spring stuck inside Yeah we’re the north beach vampires The sun is out; there’s no reason to hide! For the past few months I’ve felt sallow and wan All in all awful since this shit began Now I’m finally gonna ...