I'm entering for first time in a long time next week, and noticed that there haven't been many reviews lately. Just my thoughts, take them for what they're worth. Inflatable Vegetables – I recommend adding about .5 seconds of silence to beginning of your track as best practice. The change of texture...

Vanishing Twin - John Gillespie Wasn’t me who tore the meat from the gosling Wasn’t me who took a coin from the offering Wasn’t me who stole the show I could never nail that baritone No, the master of these sins Is my vanishing twin Emerging from within and imbuing me You can find him sniffing round...

I'm in again this week. My life was back to being extremely mundane this week with lots of time to work on the track, after some surprises the week before that threw off my workflow. Put more effort into the mix per the comments from this week's fight, I definitely still have a lot to learn there th...

I often start SongFights but rarely finish. I just happened to be toying around with a blues-rock type riff lately that was *perfect* for this title ... when I saw "Lightning Rod" was the title I knew I had to do it. Total AC/DC, Ted Nugent, ZZ Top, sort of pastiche. Didn't have time to re...

Lightning Rod - John Gillespie As I prepared to leave Father came in, sat down, yet turned from me Child, out there you can’t be as you’ve been Better to live with greed Than be the victim of your sympathies Walking the high road’s lonely If you stand up tall and proud, Then life will find you, beat...

I've only listened about halfway through thus far, but damn that My Social Uniform track is great!

Good Trouble - JTTJ Doe-eyed Naïve we go Before us lie Uneven roads Thrown by Misleading tomes We try to find A place to call our own Is this Good Trouble? Or is it a barricade We make ourselves We came so far We walked so long To reach your door But no one’s home Unobserved We toil onward Is this f...

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Tue Jun 02, 2020 3:14 pm

I desperately want to write The Best Ever Death Metal Bond Out Of Denton now. Genius.

Yo I live in Denton TX and I can assure you, Dentonites would love to hear this!

Wow there were a LOT of well-done entries this time. Sober though, you legitimately moved me emotionally, so I definitely gotta give it up for that. Really well-done lyrics and production. My Shutdown, a couple things frustrate me. I mastered poorly, way too quiet. Then I never got around to actuall...

The roof of the highrise Bathe in the warm light The prisoners outside Drunk on their new rights Today might be breezy But nothing good’s easy Delay for the meantime Let’s take it outside Infinity pool glows With fire through the windows A scream’s distant echo It’s nobody we know Today might be bre...

How could it be, I almost lost my patience With the only pleasure left to me? How many weeks since I’ve had a conversation? How many nights I cannot sleep? They got the city on shutdown Nobody out in the street We spend our days in the house Watching death on TV And now my life is on lockdown, Nobod...

Okay, I found others' review of my stuff the last couple times, to be very very helpful. I will try to return the favor in kind. Absolutely Credible – I struggled for quite some time to come up with something nice to say … and failed. So, I’m just going to be completely honest with you. This is stra...