Balance Lost should get special immunity for singlehandedly increasing Nur Ein engagement by 500%!

chewmeupspitmeout - that’s a heavy theme. The cohesion of the sample and the music is good, but i don’t feel the title requirement is met. I think you missed the joke in my title. You'd expect a song called "My Family are the Best People" to be a nice song about my loved ones but, in this...

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Mon Jun 03, 2024 4:23 am

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Sun Jun 02, 2024 11:28 pm

@Niv - FYI You forgot to include my shadow when uploading the songs

FIXED.

Merci beaucoup!

@Niv - FYI You forgot to include my shadow when uploading the songs

My Family are the Best People (shadow) by chewmeupspitmeout (feat. Charles Manson) I originally planned to write some lyrics about someone meeting Charles Manson and being drawn into his cult, interspersed with the samples of Manson. I never quite got them right though, so here's a truncated versio...

Factory Reset by chewmeupspitmeout We're due a factory reset Some time soon Though we tried to change the course It looks like we're doomed We're predisposed to seek out entropy A society beset by apathy We just can't wait for the apocalypse To find us To beat us down Eviscerate and grind us Ambiva...

Is This a Joke to You? by chewmeupspitmeout I put the car in reverse And said "This really takes me back" That hackneyed line still made you smile As my car's wheels squealed on wet tarmac When I tried to change the mood And speak seriously You laughed at me not with me Is this a joke to ...

For Your Consideration by chewmeupspitmeout You lost yourself And fell down a rabbit hole Gave up the ghost Lost all sense of reason Whatever conforms To your agenda Delusion embraced All sense surrendered Its not your fault That you can't think critically No-one ever taught you how So ignore all m...

Choose Your Own Adventure by chewmeupspitmeout I could build a cathedral A pointless Monument to you I wonder if you feel invisible too? The ground feels so cold Beneath my shoulder blades Mossy rocks river spray Fly away Little bird Fly away My diurnal love Gone into twilight You can choose... An ...

Partly Fiction by chewmeupspitmeout I'm made up of phrases I'm made up of words Consonants and vowels Nouns and verbs I'm made up of metaphors And contradictions Drawn from real life But still partly fiction I'm just a character Without a story I need a parable Or allegory Partly fiction I'm just a...

Co-pilot by chewmeupspitout (feat. Crown Shy) aka crownmeupshymeout Do you remember me? Do you remember us? You just deserted me Sadly superfluous Vapor trails split the sky Sunlight seared into our eyes As we pierced through the clouds Screamed the things We couldn't say out loud Staring at the ce...

Just to check, does this mean the guest has to do all the lead vocals or can they be shared in a duet?

Blind Spot by chewmeupspitmeout I'll be your blind spot perennial long shot Little forget me not Ignored afterthought Maybe baby You'd just forsake me If you'd notice me first Given enough Old rope Same old tired trope No value left in my false hope If there ever was Thinking lately Maybe you'd hate...

Welcome to episode 264 of my obsession with 17th century witch trials! I had planned to try to write some funkier stuff this year but the link between the crops failing when the seasons change and the swimming of witches was too much for me to resist. Sink or Swim by chewmeupspitmeout Snowflakes fel...

Wowzers and I thought the last round was tough to rank! I've gotta say, absolutely everyone nailed the challenge and it's a real shame that only two could go through as I think any of you would've been worthy finalists. Vom Vorton I saw your admission of accidental Gruff Rhys plagiarism but what thi...

Well, this was a ridiculously difficult round to judge! I feel like every song would've sailed through the earlier rounds and the gap between them all is absolutely wafer thin. Elks of the Economy I've not really got a great deal of criticism to level at this song other than I feel like the intro mi...

Extr-ee! Extr-ee! Read all about it! Dan pulls his finger out and actually finishes writing some reviews I think this was comfortably the hardest round to judge,as it feels like everyone is really raising their game now. This is borne out in every judge picking someone different for their top spot....

While you're all waiting for last minute deliberations to be concluded, here are some reviews for you. Sorry I've been so rubbish as getting these out. I promise I'll catch up on the other rounds I've not reviewed yet. Vom Vorton Songs drawn from personal experience almost always turn out to be the ...

Also, the name of my shadow is incorrectly displayed. It should be chewmeupspitmeout, as opposed to in separate words/capitalised.

June Moon by chewmeupspitmeout (shadow) I've been away/busy with work the last few weeks but it's calming down now, so I thought I'd actually do a shadow! I'll try to get some reviews out in the next few days for the weeks I've missed. I think of that night sometimes when I'm lonely On Jacksons fiel...

Internal rhymes are fine in my book and I definitely think you can repeat sections etc as I'm way more interested in hearing cool songs than pouring over lyrics hunting for a word that rhymes with a line two verses ago!

I can confirm that is indeed raining and I have been singing