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by SamECircle
Wed Mar 17, 2021 12:22 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: I'll be your (Go Between reviews)
Replies: 25
Views: 3891

Re: I'll be your (Go Between reviews)

If anyone's interested, Vermillion was Erin D, Wayne G, and me. Not sure what the corresponding screen names are, if those folks are active on the forums. Erin took lead on songwriting, and I came in to add to and revise the chorus; Wayne took lead on instrumentation and mix, with Erin on vocals and...
by SamECircle
Wed Mar 17, 2021 12:18 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Go Between
Replies: 10
Views: 1180

Re: Go Between

This is very late, but for all the completionists, Vermillion was Erin D, Wayne G, and me. Erin took lead on songwriting, and I came in to add to and revise the chorus; Wayne took lead on instrumentation and mix, with Erin on vocals and me on keyboard. Here are our lyrics! V 1: I won’t negotiate The...
by SamECircle
Mon Mar 01, 2021 4:18 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: You can only avoid (Potential Consequences reviews)
Replies: 53
Views: 5152

Re: You can only avoid (Potential Consequences reviews)

At the last minute, here are my reviews. Night Sky: Really lovely lyrics. Strong production, too. I think the chord progression is the weak point here; it feels almost pre-resolved and so it's hard to get into the emotion of the piece. Brown Word & The Big Whine: REALLY smart to rhyme "even...
by SamECircle
Thu Feb 18, 2021 10:05 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Potential Consequences
Replies: 18
Views: 1380

Re: Potential Consequences

Potential Consequences - Lean To Am Dm7 you've been hoisted by your own suspenders F Em7 Dm7 all your plans are up in smoke Am Dm7 you've been bested by the best contenders F Em7 D you're a jester with no joke Dm and all the plans you laid out Am backfired in your face now G Em so you can get to men...
by SamECircle
Thu Feb 18, 2021 3:37 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: You face (Potential Consequences prefight)
Replies: 29
Views: 2199

Re: You face (Potential Consequences prefight)

I'm in! Hope you enjoy. Got lots of great mixing help from the discord
by SamECircle
Sat Feb 13, 2021 4:33 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: From Grey to Gandalf (The White Morph reviews)
Replies: 42
Views: 4339

Re: From Grey to Gandalf (The White Morph reviews)

"Lean To: I’m on board for the whole piano part and it’s all I paid attention to on the first listen. It reminds me of a song by Crash Kings (“It’s only Wednesday” or “Mountain Man,” or maybe a little both). Ok, my second listen and paying attention: I think the vocals need some of the reverb ...
by SamECircle
Thu Feb 11, 2021 5:04 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: From Grey to Gandalf (The White Morph reviews)
Replies: 42
Views: 4339

Re: From Grey to Gandalf (The White Morph reviews)

lean to - i like the classic feel of this, the vocal feel really works for me. reminds me a bit of later Royal Trux… some really nice surprising piano chords. the whole thing feels very cohesive, energetic and earnest. you have a cool voice too Thx much! Hadn't listened to Royal Trux b4 but i'm lis...
by SamECircle
Thu Feb 11, 2021 12:16 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: From Grey to Gandalf (The White Morph reviews)
Replies: 42
Views: 4339

Re: From Grey to Gandalf (The White Morph reviews)

Eh, off tomorrow morning and nothing better to do with my late night than listen to these! Phlebia - Siiiick instrumentation! Couldn't possibly be heavier. And the lovely, death cab style vocals on top, even if mixed low, add complexity. Your lyrics are very cool and psych-metal-appropriate; sometim...
by SamECircle
Mon Feb 08, 2021 10:01 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: White Morph
Replies: 15
Views: 1225

Re: White Morph

my first songfight hope you like! :) snow geese (the white morph) by Lean To _________________________________ well the schoolyard is a river of white there's no one here and it's late at night the cold earth rubs against your skin if you don't move a muscle you can fit right in C any other year Am ...
by SamECircle
Mon Feb 01, 2021 5:00 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Come on, Pa! Tell me about those (Better Days Reviews)
Replies: 102
Views: 8321

Re: Come on, Pa! Tell me about those (Better Days Reviews)

OK, i'm a brand-newcomer to songfight so forgive any trespasses & don't take me too seriously but here are my thoughts on the songs! pigfarmer: Great recording quality esp the guitar tone! I think something to experiment with is internal rhyme and multisyllabic rhyme, IE having more than just th...
by SamECircle
Mon Feb 01, 2021 3:15 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Rare and unusual (The White Morph prefight)
Replies: 40
Views: 2791

Re: Rare and unusual (The White Morph prefight)

Brand new to songfight but I just wrote and recorded a very rough version of my song for this week! Going for kinda 'hiss golden messenger' vibes. I'm always much happier with my songwriting skills than my production skills though, in part because i can't really play instruments except a little pian...