Everybody Hurts Guitar work is skillful and that really carries this one all the way to the end, along with the fine bass. “Burn down dreams and warning signs” is a good lyric. I feel the power and the passion in this song, and it helps that its sections noticeably move from one level, to the next, ...

With the piano line so close to the melody this felt like it was intended for a play. A play might contextualize it too -- I had trouble telling what I was supposed to make of the allegory or where it was pointing. I thought it might be communicating a national/societal "where do we go from he...

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The Mellfire Trifecta Next Exit If you fell off the back of our truck I’m not sure that we noticed ‘Cos we weren’t trying to transport you Don’t get me wrong We’re probably able to support you It’s just not part of the plan Which is to decommission this very model While we’re in it Then re-tool prod...

Working on something. Should hit that there deadline!

Congrats to the Rivals!

Berkeley Social Scene : This has a good groove throughout, with even better than usual BSS guitar playing/inventiveness. Good bass/vocal/drums and no complaints with this mix. I am a great fan of the verse, pre-chorus, chorus and solo breaks. I do think the bridge feels a bit out of place - a too-h...

Up To My Neck The Mellfire Trifecta When I was just a boy I had a favorite dog That leash was an extension of my arm When I turned 17 she broke my heart by mistake Expiring one night on the floor of the barn It took some time to handle heavy feelings of hurt To let myself be quiet in my mind I tried...

I’ll be done late tonight!!

Chili Dogs and Rum The Mellfire Trifecta I can wear a funny hat And serve you nothing but junk I can take away your right To know what products have shrunk There’s nothing that can stop me From appreciable gains As you scramble round the aisles Seeking someone to blame At least you know there’s opti...

Mellfire done whipped somethin up and delivered it to the FM.

You are right about that sir.
MellyP

Pigfarmer Jr. Interesting low-key beginning is powerful and I enjoyed the plinking piano being more prominent than it is in later sections. I like your chorus chord progression and your guitar fills throughout are tasty. Additional listens got this chorus good and stuck in my head. Think my neighbou...

Sorry About the Mess The Mellfire Trifecta People want to move in mysterious ways Never really knowing what gives or who pays What’s the point of following plans? Throw it up, see where it lands All I ever wanted was clear in my mind Somebody who knew the value of time When to put the babies to bed ...

The Trifecta is in. Couldn't make the optional challenge fit -- or make it fit the challenge.

Pigfarmer Jr I needed a couple of listens but this one got under my skin. The production is awesome. This offers a great arrangement, great vocal, nice harmonies, a perfect bridge, and you have changed the strumming at times to keep things moving. Really nice guitar playing and tones. The only thing...

Just a Theory The Mellfire Trifecta Looking at my face as I stare into space My teacher tries, apace To reach me in this world Can’t fly with this bird I’m jumping high on my trampoline And in a movie scene Where a beauty queen’s on the sidewalk, all eyes on the sidewalk God bless the wind, my enabl...

Mellfire Trifecta is in. There's repeated stuff to meet the challenge. I repeat: there's stuff.

the idiot king wrote: ↑

Thu Aug 08, 2024 5:15 am

Holy hell, the first TIK win!!

Congrats!

the idiot king wrote: ↑

Sat Jul 27, 2024 5:02 pm

Congrats again, Mellfire!

Thanks v much!

The Evertree Forest I’m loving the guitar on this, especially in the verses. So clear and bright. I thought your chorus was going to stay bouncy and light – maybe go faster/busier – but you took an interesting turn before the zippy musical section. Smooth vocals when you do your low singing. Nice! M...

Another week, another cool-ass Mellfire Trifecta song. The song structure is unique, the lyrics are great, and is that a real accordion? My only complaint is that the mix is a bit flat; some more compression would make that kicks bass stand out a bit more, and would give the drums the toughness to ...