There seems to be some difficulty with the title, and since my firewire card is FUBAR I am unable to do much more than write. Thus, I submit for consumption the following three lyrical snippets. There may be some rhythmical challenges with the following but this is what 30 mins and three cups of cof...

Saw some of the show. Looked like fun.

Overall a strong showing. Jeremy Dean Remnicent of 80's metal hair-band acoustic ballad. Well mixed. Was waiting for a big crash into a large, whole band section. The solo was a pleasant surprise. The sharp snap of a snare sidestick on the 2 & 4 might pep it up a bit. Greater variety in chord change...

Fortunato wrote:Granting that, a "serious" song from me will have a very different sound from a silly song. Either way, I'm sad he didn't like it since I honestly felt like I turned a corner musically this week as far as composition and arrangement are concerned.

I liked it.