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by Evermind
Mon Mar 25, 2024 6:32 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: A Grand Parade
Replies: 58
Views: 1222

Re: A Grand Parade

Moody Vermin - A Grand Parade wag your little tail big eyes for all the people up there pull against your chain they all need to see you and your grand parade march on and on and on in all directions over the horizon no intersection short man wave your hand doling out imagined commands expecting to...
by Evermind
Sun Sep 17, 2023 4:24 pm
Forum: SpinTunes
Topic: SpinTunes 21 Round 1 Challenge - 'Y-Axis'
Replies: 19
Views: 1561

Re: SpinTunes 21 Round 1 Challenge - 'Y-Axis'

Because that bit is the crux of the song, and one of the perspectives is engineering, I wanted that part to feel like it was breaking, especially as the rest of the song is very structural. Whether I was successful in that is highly subjective. :) Got it! Now I see what you were going for there but...
by Evermind
Sun Sep 17, 2023 2:22 pm
Forum: SpinTunes
Topic: SpinTunes 21 Round 1 Challenge - 'Y-Axis'
Replies: 19
Views: 1561

Re: SpinTunes 21 Round 1 Challenge - 'Y-Axis'

There's one track that is an electric guitar picking high notes occasionally with Logic's "Experimental Guitar" "Cascade" preset on it, which has all sorts of weird delays and ring shifts. I think that might be what you're referring to, but I'm not sure. There's also a gradually...
by Evermind
Sun Sep 17, 2023 9:22 am
Forum: SpinTunes
Topic: SpinTunes 21 Round 1 Challenge - 'Y-Axis'
Replies: 19
Views: 1561

Re: SpinTunes 21 Round 1 Challenge - 'Y-Axis'

Before I get into reviews and rankings, I want to mention that I have a personal scoring rubric for rating and ranking songs based on five categories, where each category receives a score from 1 to 5 which are then added to produce a final score. I will not be publicly posting individual category sc...
by Evermind
Tue May 02, 2023 8:04 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVIII
Replies: 18
Views: 1490

Re: Nur Ein XVIII

heid wrote:
Mon May 01, 2023 9:22 am
Oooooh I am quite tempted to join in this year.
I'd love to hear the return of heid!
by Evermind
Sat Jul 09, 2022 8:19 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round Six "Summer Robot"
Replies: 42
Views: 3283

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round Six "Summer Robot"

Elks of the Economy ... The timing gets a tiny bit loose in the percussion past the three minute mark, but only slightly. Moss Palace ... Timing on the percussion feels a bit late in the last chorus. I'm not sure what you're hearing. I did the percussion for the MP song (obvs) and I also did a lot ...
by Evermind
Wed Jul 06, 2022 5:29 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round Six "Summer Robot"
Replies: 42
Views: 3283

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round Six "Summer Robot"

The Alleviators Interesting intro. Kick is a little blippy, could use just a teensy bit slower attack to fix that, but as I write this it's already starting to grow on me. Scansion is really weird in various places, like "securiTY's vulneraBLE". Vocal timing is off at times. I don't feel ...
by Evermind
Wed Jun 29, 2022 9:42 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round Five "Novel"
Replies: 37
Views: 2664

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round Five "Novel"

I was very excited to hear what y'all would do with this challenge and I was not disappointed. These are all fantastic songs and it was very difficult to rank them. I hope that y'all have found a new tool for your musical toolbox, or at least sharpened one already there. The Alleviators I like how c...
by Evermind
Sun Jun 26, 2022 9:35 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round Six "Summer Robot"
Replies: 42
Views: 3283

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round Six "Summer Robot"

For those who may be asking: No, you don't need to find a new vocalist. Keeping your existing vocalist(s) is fine, and will not count against you in the challenge, for practical reasons.
by Evermind
Wed Jun 22, 2022 7:26 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round Four "June Moon"
Replies: 46
Views: 3041

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round Four "June Moon"

The Alleviators Snare sounds a little boxy. Scansion issue: "what anSWER you're lookin for". Vocals are pitchy at times, such as 1:35, on the word "wane". Mix feels a bit unbalanced to the right. I like the overall vibe of the song. I like that you've written in "June Moon&...
by Evermind
Tue Jun 21, 2022 8:23 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round Five "Novel"
Replies: 37
Views: 2664

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round Five "Novel"

I will also chime in and say that the samples do not need to be recognizable after processing, but if you choose to process your samples in such a way that they are unrecognizable such as turning samples into synths using something like a wavetable synth (e.g. Vital), please tell us what you did in ...
by Evermind
Wed Jun 15, 2022 11:20 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round Three "Can't Let It Go"
Replies: 65
Views: 4505

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round Three "Can't Let It Go"

I had kind of expected that everyone would reach for the obvious "failed relationship" interpretation of the title and I'm pleasantly surprised how few of you did. There were a lot of very good songs this round. Just a brief reminder, I judge songs on a one-to-five scale based on Songwriti...
by Evermind
Thu Jun 02, 2022 2:35 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round One "Deified"
Replies: 78
Views: 5313

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round One "Deified"

Adam Adamant Kick drum rings out too long, may be a side effect of compression. Off-key melody on the refrain. Pitchy vocals. Vocals could use some high passing, they're very boomy. I don't hear any palindromic musical phrase in here, and I don't have any lyrics/liner notes to reference. I did post...
by Evermind
Wed Jun 01, 2022 9:16 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round One "Deified"
Replies: 78
Views: 5313

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round One "Deified"

Adam Adamant Kick drum rings out too long, may be a side effect of compression. Off-key melody on the refrain. Pitchy vocals. Vocals could use some high passing, they're very boomy. I don't hear any palindromic musical phrase in here, and I don't have any lyrics/liner notes to reference. The Allevia...
by Evermind
Wed May 25, 2022 5:59 pm
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII Round Zero "Friday the 13th"
Replies: 41
Views: 3432

Re: Nur Ein XVII: Round Zero "Friday the 13th"

Hello all you lovely folks. Here are my round one reviews. I will be ranking entries based on five points: Songwriting: Melodies, harmonies, song structure, lyrics, etc. Concept: What did the song seem to be trying to achieve? Execution: How well made was the song? (performance, mixing, mastering, s...
by Evermind
Fri May 13, 2022 8:02 am
Forum: Nur Ein
Topic: Nur Ein XVII: The Feeling Out Process
Replies: 15
Views: 1529

Re: Nur Ein XVII: The Feeling Out Process

Count me in for judging.
by Evermind
Wed Mar 09, 2022 10:25 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: The Doomsday clock says we're (One Minute Closer reviews)
Replies: 42
Views: 3495

Re: The Doomsday clock says we're (One Minute Closer reviews)

gizo and the ADADADAD --- Love the crunchy feel out of the gate. I get the name joke now. The way the chorus hits is nice. I like the simple structure. The song doesn't outstay its welcome. Nice one! Moody Vermin --- That's us! I've been in some kind of funk for months now and haven't been able to ...
by Evermind
Wed Nov 03, 2021 7:08 pm
Forum: Sidefights and Highlights
Topic: sonofgearfight #3 "Beneath a Cold Sky"
Replies: 18
Views: 2056

Re: sonofgearfight #3 "Beneath a Cold Sky"

After some deliberation, I've decided to declare Phlubububulbulbubbuububub the winner of this SonOfGearfight. As the winner, Phlub gets: Origami Wavefolder Distortion Toob Resonant Decimator And everyone who submitted, reviewed, or organized gets these plugins: Rand LCG Distortion Pyooter Wave Embig...
by Evermind
Sun Oct 17, 2021 11:04 am
Forum: Sidefights and Highlights
Topic: sonofgearfight #3 "Beneath a Cold Sky"
Replies: 18
Views: 2056

Re: sonofgearfight #3 "Beneath a Cold Sky"

Hey y'all! Just a quick reminder to everyone, deadline is coming up and I have a number of plugins made for prizes!

I'll also be giving some of the plugins to those who helped organize the fight, as a thank you for their efforts.

Thanks and good luck to everyone who submitted!
by Evermind
Mon Sep 20, 2021 7:37 pm
Forum: Sidefights and Highlights
Topic: sonofgearfight #2 "Access Denied"
Replies: 36
Views: 4862

Re: sonofgearfight #2 "Access Denied"

Hanky Code Upbeat intro! Robot voice is a little boomy, probably could shave a bit of low end off of that. It's a little hard to tell what the lyrics are, but I can tell there are some. You might mix a little of the original signal in with the vocoded version. They're a little clearer around the ti...
by Evermind
Fri Jul 23, 2021 9:11 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Ready and willing (To Die On This Hill reviews)
Replies: 23
Views: 3804

Re: Ready and willing (To Die On This Hill reviews)

Moody Vermin - There is a lot going on here. I am definitely too square for how experimental this is, but I can imagine that if I was in the right state of mind, the section starting at 2:20 might transport me to another dimension. Yeah, I'm putting this one in my forum sig. :D Moody is nothing if ...
by Evermind
Thu Jul 22, 2021 8:47 pm
Forum: Sidefights and Highlights
Topic: sonofgearfight #1: "These are the Jokes"
Replies: 59
Views: 6105

Re: sonofgearfight #1: "These are the Jokes"

Regarding my chorus, without getting defensive, I can't argue that it's not weak. I had three part backing vocals doing a kind of response there, different lines and rhymes, but they were just awful, too crowded. So 11th hour drop at mix time leaving just the lead vocal. Sometimes ya just don't rea...