i don't know how jack feels about it, but you can't rap. work on your timbre. your voice is hard to listen to.

i actually used to post here all the time back in the day. but apparently y'all got a new board, cus my username didn't exist anymore. so i got a new name.

Andy Balham: Spend more time on singing, guitar tone, guitar playing, and drums, and you might have something listenable! Anti-M: Nice, subtle production. That little flying saucer sound is mixed in perfectly. Vocals sound good. I don't know how you could do this song better. Bjam: Melody is too rep...