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by nobodyetal
Fri May 25, 2012 10:41 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: ...Step Back From That Ledge, My Friend (WYW Reviews)
Replies: 68
Views: 10669

Re: ...Step Back From That Ledge, My Friend (WYW Reviews)

Sorry I didn't have a ton of time to review these. If I can get more time to listen I'll come back and edit. BSS - I like the jazzy chord changes in the verses. Chorus is a nice changeup from that. Burden/bourbon is an interesting rhyme that's a little nonesensical but works. Angsty enough to suit t...
by nobodyetal
Mon May 21, 2012 2:57 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: I heart President Taft (Fat Man reviews)
Replies: 48
Views: 7664

Re: I heart President Taft (Fat Man reviews)

NeA : After the intro it needs drums and bass behind the vocals. For what it is its good, but it sounds like you forcefit the fat man reference into an otherwise poignant story. I would think this would have been better if referencing a sad soul who lost the love of his life instead of fatty. Howev...
by nobodyetal
Thu May 17, 2012 9:00 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: ...Submit a Song! (prefight)
Replies: 13
Views: 1467

Re: ...Submit a Song! (prefight)

I'm in and submitted. I know I'm not going to have time to mess with it between now and next Tuesday.
by nobodyetal
Wed May 16, 2012 6:17 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Wish You Would
Replies: 16
Views: 2379

Re: Wish You Would

Wish You Would Nobody, et al. Nothing I can say Is gonna make you stay But I wish you would I wish you would No words I can find Can make you change your mind But I wish you would I wish you would Always on the road Never going back Gonna miss the train Gonna jump the track Never moving forward Neve...
by nobodyetal
Fri May 11, 2012 9:19 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: I heart President Taft (Fat Man reviews)
Replies: 48
Views: 7664

Re: I heart President Taft (Fat Man reviews)

Naked Philosophy - fade in at the beginning is neat. Chorus has a nice REM sort of feel. The full stops ("hits"?) are a nice contract to the straight-ahead feel the rest of the song. There's some good imagery in the chorus and bride, fat getting fatter, thin wasting away, playing games, laying track...
by nobodyetal
Sun May 06, 2012 8:06 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Calling Dr. Strangelove (prefight)
Replies: 24
Views: 2227

Re: Calling Dr. Strangelove (prefight)

I'm in - nasty cold knocked me and the whole family on our butts this weekend so I didn't get the chance to do the cleanup/post production I would have liked. Hopefully it's still listenable. :)
by nobodyetal
Sun May 06, 2012 8:01 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Fat Man
Replies: 8
Views: 1296

Re: Fat Man

Nobody, et al. Fat Man Little boy They told me of your smashing success Like death's own angel in the morning You were full of joy. I was frightened when they told me I was next Pulled from the darkness without warning. I remember when we traveled in the States Those miles of rails through the deser...
by nobodyetal
Thu Apr 19, 2012 8:40 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: You got a week (pre-fight)
Replies: 19
Views: 2196

Re: You got a week (pre-fight)

Um yeah, it ain't gonna happen this round. 7 days got away from me too quickly. :oops:
I got all high concept and then it fizzled out and now the next couple days are spoken for.
Blah. Next time.
by nobodyetal
Sat Apr 14, 2012 7:48 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: You got a week (pre-fight)
Replies: 19
Views: 2196

Re: You got a week (pre-fight)

I'ma do my best to get something in.
Keep me honest, folks.
by nobodyetal
Fri Apr 13, 2012 8:51 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Write It Up (Beat Me Up Reviews)
Replies: 28
Views: 7867

Re: Write It Up (Beat Me Up Reviews)

I tried to get into these songs in order to do a decent review, and actually pay attention to the lyrics, which doesn't come easily to me necessarily. We're all here to get better, right? BSS - riffy electric intro, I like the solo break, it's got sort of a pentatonic feel. The chorus is a little aw...
by nobodyetal
Sat Apr 07, 2012 8:10 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Beat Me Up
Replies: 4
Views: 665

Beat Me Up

Beat me up Nobody, et al. V1 Don't pull your punches now This has to look good Don't pretend you don't know how Or that you don't think you should When the comandante enters and sees that you've escaped And I'm not almost dead he'll know I helped you. Now the guard is changing shifts With any luck y...
by nobodyetal
Sat Apr 07, 2012 8:03 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Who's gonna beat who? (prefight)
Replies: 10
Views: 862

Re: Who's gonna beat who? (prefight)

I'm in on this one.
by nobodyetal
Mon Feb 27, 2012 10:14 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Ctrl+X ("Cut It Out" reviews)
Replies: 16
Views: 5159

Re: Ctrl+X ("Cut It Out" reviews)

Take these with a grain of salt, eh? I always give props for anybody who can write/record/produce a song in 10 days. Dollar Bill -Kinda low-fi and wierd but I like it. Echoey and stereo bouncy, with a synth juxtaposed against a fairly organic whole-rest-of-the-song and the Biblical lyrical content. ...
by nobodyetal
Fri Feb 24, 2012 12:06 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Cut It Out
Replies: 8
Views: 1338

Re: Cut It Out

She caught a ride east from Vancouver In the cab of a twenty ton semi truck With a load of pine logs headed for Alberta She had no destination it was just her luck That when they reached the pass Of the highest peak The road was blocked By fallen trees So the driver turned his beard to her and said ...
by nobodyetal
Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:37 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Paper Doll Prefight
Replies: 21
Views: 1864

Re: Paper Doll Prefight

I'm in on this one. Song submitted.
It's been a while. Feels good to get into the fight again.
by nobodyetal
Mon May 17, 2010 8:09 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: $2.50, same as in town (what kind of love reviews)
Replies: 59
Views: 7521

Re: $2.50, same as in town (what kind of love reviews)

Since I've been enjoying the reviews but not posting any, I thought I'd take a bit and share some love. Schoolgirls rhythm is not super tight, but the lyrics are somewhat clever in a stereotypical hiphop rapping about sex way. You've met a lot of assholes, well here's one more. Not bad. Martyrs Not ...
by nobodyetal
Fri Apr 30, 2010 8:21 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Feeling Down? How about writing a song? (prefight)
Replies: 13
Views: 1504

Re: Feeling Down? How about writing a song? (prefight)

I'm down.

Er, I'm in? Songfight newb here, stoked about my second submission EVER. Love this site.