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by LibraryDogs
Sat Jun 09, 2012 10:38 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: It gets upset easily (Be Careful With That reviews)
Replies: 96
Views: 18845

Re: It gets upset easily (Be Careful With That reviews)

Hell yeah! Lets do it. I have a recording already done for "Father and Child Reunion", but the vox suck( to the point of possibly being offensive) Maybe I can transfer .wav's via Dropbox account. if you PM me your private emails I can send you an invitation. :) Hey I sent you a PM last ni...
by LibraryDogs
Fri Jun 08, 2012 2:58 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Parental Pre-Fight
Replies: 24
Views: 3988

Re: Parental Pre-Fight

Barring some unfortunate disaster that would prevent me from recording the rest of this tune between now and next Friday, I ought to have something for this. And it's gonna be folk-alicious (sorry j$). :D
by LibraryDogs
Fri Jun 08, 2012 2:52 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: It gets upset easily (Be Careful With That reviews)
Replies: 96
Views: 18845

Re: It gets upset easily (Be Careful With That reviews)

Billymojo wrote:So Cody. We gotta collab! We'd be sure to offend at least one person. Perhaps to the point of self harm.
Dude. Can I get in on that?
by LibraryDogs
Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:33 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: It gets upset easily (Be Careful With That reviews)
Replies: 96
Views: 18845

Re: It gets upset easily (Be Careful With That reviews)

Nobody, et al. [/url] : I really enjoyed the lyrics. I have a penchant for super villains. Nicely done. Vote. Thanks - it was fun to write. Villains are great to write because they're the protagonist of THEIR story. The best ones you can sympathize with, even if you cheer when they lose. On a simil...
by LibraryDogs
Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:25 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: It gets upset easily (Be Careful With That reviews)
Replies: 96
Views: 18845

Re: It gets upset easily (Be Careful With That reviews)

To: Songfighters From: Dumbass I can't get a good snark on unless somebody shows me how to do that thing where you include a quote from a prior post in your post. An assist please. Thanks. If you're logged in, there's a button labeled "Quote" in the top right hand corner of each post. If ...
by LibraryDogs
Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:14 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: It gets upset easily (Be Careful With That reviews)
Replies: 96
Views: 18845

Re: It gets upset easily (Be Careful With That reviews)

Nobody, et al. [/url] OK i like your clean/clear vocal and guitar 9Actually, overall production) Melody is fresh. you have a unique sound that i like. I think if you are going with the full drumset rounte, you need some Bass (Or more Bass?)guitar. the drums seem to take away from your excellent arr...
by LibraryDogs
Mon Jun 04, 2012 4:18 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: It gets upset easily (Be Careful With That reviews)
Replies: 96
Views: 18845

Re: It gets upset easily (Be Careful With That reviews)

Acapella Annie [/url] A little pitchy for a capella, but probably about as well I could have done. I'm sure any one of the songfighters would be happy to help with a simple backing track next time if you want. Kind of a sweet lyrical treatment, a la "The Morning After"; narrator is hesita...
by LibraryDogs
Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:12 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: It gets upset easily (Be Careful With That reviews)
Replies: 96
Views: 18845

Re: It gets upset easily (Be Careful With That reviews)

My song's missing too.
I sent it on Friday night - I'll resend.
by LibraryDogs
Fri Jun 01, 2012 10:07 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: It's loaded. (prefight)
Replies: 12
Views: 1707

Re: It's loaded. (prefight)

Submitted. Sorry for all my drivel about needing drums.
by LibraryDogs
Fri Jun 01, 2012 10:05 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Be Careful With That
Replies: 11
Views: 2113

Re: Be Careful With That

Be Careful With That by Nobody, et al. Strange to think That it won't be my nemesis who conquers me How could I have failed to see I'd be undone by your beauty But now the door is locked. I will not be mocked. How is it That I believed Anything you said to me I turn my back and one two three You've ...
by LibraryDogs
Sun May 27, 2012 8:58 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: It's loaded. (prefight)
Replies: 12
Views: 1707

It's loaded. (prefight)

Apologies to Spud who usually posts the Prefight thread (and is welcome to nix this one and replace with his own). Be Careful With That Due: Saturday, 06/02/12 9:59am pst mp3 with artist name sent to fightmaster@songfight.org I'm in on this one but the song I came up with calls for something a littl...
by LibraryDogs
Sat May 26, 2012 3:39 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: ...Step Back From That Ledge, My Friend (WYW Reviews)
Replies: 68
Views: 15373

Re: ...Step Back From That Ledge, My Friend (WYW Reviews)

I think we have drastically different songwriting approaches, j$, so I'm not sure how valuable this will be. My un-asked-for advice follows, for the benefit of anybody following the thread :) Your song paints a good picture of the couch potato super hero, but like Elaine alluded to, doesn't give me ...
by LibraryDogs
Fri May 25, 2012 10:41 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: ...Step Back From That Ledge, My Friend (WYW Reviews)
Replies: 68
Views: 15373

Re: ...Step Back From That Ledge, My Friend (WYW Reviews)

Sorry I didn't have a ton of time to review these. If I can get more time to listen I'll come back and edit. BSS - I like the jazzy chord changes in the verses. Chorus is a nice changeup from that. Burden/bourbon is an interesting rhyme that's a little nonesensical but works. Angsty enough to suit t...
by LibraryDogs
Mon May 21, 2012 2:57 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: I heart President Taft (Fat Man reviews)
Replies: 48
Views: 11939

Re: I heart President Taft (Fat Man reviews)

NeA : After the intro it needs drums and bass behind the vocals. For what it is its good, but it sounds like you forcefit the fat man reference into an otherwise poignant story. I would think this would have been better if referencing a sad soul who lost the love of his life instead of fatty. Howev...
by LibraryDogs
Thu May 17, 2012 9:00 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: ...Submit a Song! (prefight)
Replies: 13
Views: 1924

Re: ...Submit a Song! (prefight)

I'm in and submitted. I know I'm not going to have time to mess with it between now and next Tuesday.
by LibraryDogs
Wed May 16, 2012 6:17 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Wish You Would
Replies: 16
Views: 3415

Re: Wish You Would

Wish You Would Nobody, et al. Nothing I can say Is gonna make you stay But I wish you would I wish you would No words I can find Can make you change your mind But I wish you would I wish you would Always on the road Never going back Gonna miss the train Gonna jump the track Never moving forward Neve...
by LibraryDogs
Fri May 11, 2012 9:19 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: I heart President Taft (Fat Man reviews)
Replies: 48
Views: 11939

Re: I heart President Taft (Fat Man reviews)

Naked Philosophy - fade in at the beginning is neat. Chorus has a nice REM sort of feel. The full stops ("hits"?) are a nice contract to the straight-ahead feel the rest of the song. There's some good imagery in the chorus and bride, fat getting fatter, thin wasting away, playing games, la...
by LibraryDogs
Sun May 06, 2012 8:06 pm
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: Calling Dr. Strangelove (prefight)
Replies: 24
Views: 2984

Re: Calling Dr. Strangelove (prefight)

I'm in - nasty cold knocked me and the whole family on our butts this weekend so I didn't get the chance to do the cleanup/post production I would have liked. Hopefully it's still listenable. :)
by LibraryDogs
Sun May 06, 2012 8:01 pm
Forum: Ye Olde Lyric Archive
Topic: Fat Man
Replies: 8
Views: 1643

Re: Fat Man

Nobody, et al. Fat Man Little boy They told me of your smashing success Like death's own angel in the morning You were full of joy. I was frightened when they told me I was next Pulled from the darkness without warning. I remember when we traveled in the States Those miles of rails through the deser...
by LibraryDogs
Thu Apr 19, 2012 8:40 am
Forum: Fight Discussions and Reviews
Topic: You got a week (pre-fight)
Replies: 19
Views: 2971

Re: You got a week (pre-fight)

Um yeah, it ain't gonna happen this round. 7 days got away from me too quickly. :oops:
I got all high concept and then it fizzled out and now the next couple days are spoken for.
Blah. Next time.