Nur Ein II Round One "Sister Cocaine"

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mkilly wrote:Yeah, crap, dude. And you were going to give me that prize at songfight live except that I can't hold my liquor? I'll acknowledge neither of my songs so far have that same INTENSE ROCK FURY OF ROCK, but why you gotta break my balls all the time, son?
Marcus, it is time you knew. I was sent here from another galaxy soley to torment you. I am your nemesis. I have no other purpose in life. That is why my low rankings of your songs are so obviously out-of-step with the general consensus.

frankie big face wrote:Oh yeah? Well, here's how I see it:

1. Frankie Big Face
2-5,999,999,999. Everyone Else in the World
6,000,000,000. Caravan Ray

What do you think of that!!?! :P

:D
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Caravan Ray, the Antikellis.
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so...it's Satuday morning. I'm out of bed. Where's the new title?
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I am officially becoming a supporter of The Bovine Recyclery. I will make signs and buttons and promote in the street, and they will be nur ein!

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Thanks for the supportive words folks, I swear I wasn't fishing for compliments.... :oops: ....
But it sure is nice to get them and for each of you that did, right back atcha.

B-Jam, how come you're not doing Nur-Ein?
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Caravan Ray wrote:so...it's Satuday morning. I'm out of bed. Where's the new title?
stuck in the future, like the rest of fucking civilization.
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blue wrote:
Caravan Ray wrote:so...it's Satuday morning. I'm out of bed. Where's the new title?
stuck in the future, like the rest of fucking civilization.
don't you mean "stuck in the past"? or am i confused.

hey, how do you like that cool drumming on my Nur Ein track?
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erin. wrote: B-Jam, how come you're not doing Nur-Ein?
No time. Boring excuse ;) I should say "Oh, well, I'm climbing the Himalayas right now, and I left my portable recording studio and guitar and drums and everything at the last cave. My B."
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Man after listening to the songs this week I was just blown away... It'll be a miracle if i stay in with this competition. Thanks for the good placement Durand!

Seriously i love the Bovine Recyclery, (and sadly I'm on a compe where i can't listen again so I'm going off memory)

the one that made me think of Reel Big Fish "Beer",
Furry Pedro's project here is amazing! Its like I'm competing with the arcade fire every week... SERIOUSLY!!

Man i hope I'm seen as the great song with terrible production values that everyone always talks about. :D
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Puce wrote: BK, whoever you are, for reminding me of Beer by Reel Big Fish.
You're welcome . . . and thanks. Here are my top 5 (not necessarily in order 1-5)

The Bovine Recyclery
Merisan
Puce
Paco del Stinko
Ross Durand

Again, I'm impressed by the songs and level of production you guys can achieve in just a week.

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Caravan Ray wrote: sausage boy - I loved your song last week - but this one is a little too grating. And I have no idea what you are talking about
Grating, yes.

The whole sound was mostly inspired by the subject.

The subject, the story of the song, is Sausage Boy's greatest folly in life (besides not getting past two entries in Nur Ein).

EDIT: Oh, and my favourites so far are Cynthia Size, Billy's Little Trip, Calfborg, Wreckdom. Tex's and Balance Lost/Balance Regained are pretty good too.
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bck15 wrote: Again, I'm impressed by the songs and level of production you guys can achieve in just a week.
I'm impressed that after I suggested that you should get chucked out in Round Zero - you come back with a great song and forcibly jam my ill-formed opinions right up my arse! Well done!
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This morning I put all the songs in a playlist and have been shifting them around throughout the day with each passing listen. I am sure there would be more movement given more listening time, but here is my current lineup with some quick comments. Overall, things are pretty strong; I would much rather sit through a set of Nur Ein songs than an equally sized standard SongFight! title.

1. The Bovine Recyclery - consistently incredible and fun sounding songs
2. Merisan - wonderfully tasteful and balanced sound with great vocals
3. Frankie Big Face - awesome vocal work, very classic sounding
4. Puce - great buildup in the chorus, love the falsetto and lyrics
5. Thank Glenny for the Frisbee - liked the accompaniment and high vocal sound, and the mandolin is nice touch
6. Paco Del Stinko - great sounding guitars and animated vocal work and range, love that "sister cocaine had a nasty habit" line
7. Bryan Kandel - great sound, stepped things up nicely for this round
8. Jim Tyrrell - nice change up with the electric guitars, fun lyrics
9. Ross Durand - lovely acoustic sound if maybe a little too folky, alliteration stands out in a fun way, quite enjoyable all around
10. Billy's Little Trip - great sounding mix, arrangement and instrumentation keeps things interesting
11. WreckdoM - a sonic blast at this point in the mix, that Wreckdom style of energy sits well here
12. Abominominous - the mellower sound of this has been growing on me, but I am looking forward to the guitar assault next round (challenge permitting)
13. Balance Regained/Balance Lost - like the sound and vocals, nothing quite grabs me, but it still sounds good
14. Calfborg - another song that has been growing on me, not so much a fan of the vocal approach, but the synth work pulls it together nicely
15. Rabid Garfunkel - "Queasy Listening" says it all, as usual great blend of oddness and laid-back edginess
16. Cynthia Size and the @eclectic sp00ns - interesting sound and not that bad, but the electronic style keeps me at a distance
17. Tex Beaumont and the Dirty Hearts - fun lyrics the first time through, but the gimmick of the alliterative coupled words eventually wore too thin
18. Mr. Lostman - generally pleasant, but nothing that grabbed me enough to push it up the list
19. Steve Durand - nice horns and good sound, but it is the style on this one that detracts for me
20. The BeWells - taking a cue from Tex, I will put myself in that last safe spot even if I like it a little more than that; incidentally this was the first time I recorded and used real drums on a song
21. Ice 9 - the lyrics are good, but the music and sound doesn't work for me, the backing ambient effects in particular are distracting; would like to hear this song done at a much faster tempo
22. Jolly Roger - like the intent with the heavier sound, but it all feels a little undercooked to me, especially the vocals
23. Marcus Kellis - the alliterative parts like "Unique New York" are fun the first time, generally a little too repetitive
24. Sausage Boy - this is too raw sounding for me with nothing stylistically that hooks me into the song
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well, the last nealy 48 hours has been pretty busy - I've enjoyed listening to the songs but didn't have the time to sort out a ranking. Some that I think would be in my top five this week are (in no particular order):

Paco
Merisan
Bovine Recyclerey (or however you spell it)
Frankie Big Face

I look forward to the results in, what is it? two hours - and hoping to move on to round two. Best of luck all!

Thanks everyone for the positive comments and decent proposed rankings. I wasn't sure how the folk would work in such a rocky fight, and I'm glad the song came through.

Lostman - I don't get your Durand comment, was that directed to me or Steve?

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mr_lostman wrote:Man i hope I'm seen as the great song with terrible production values that everyone always talks about. :D
If nothing else, your bass was mind blowing :D
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Caravan Ray wrote: your new signature
Hahaha. Now that's the response I was looking for!
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mr_lostman wrote:Man i hope I'm seen as the great song with terrible production values that everyone always talks about. :D
I think it put in somewhere near that category.

Other notes:

BLT: love the "In god we trust" line

Jim T: No more "70's at 7" for you! ;-)
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And here I thought I was ripping off Green Day. Man I'm old.
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jury is late!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I see Ross, Jim, and Sam and myself waiting. Hey Jim, I'll head over to chess.
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hmm, being watched - perhaps I should log out :-)
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Ross, in my book anyway, your song was tops... it did take multiple listens to sink in (ah, folk. It's insidious), but brilliant fucking words, man, and the rest quite solid too.
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