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I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Sun Sep 22, 2019 10:19 am
by Lunkhead
Long Story Short
Due: Wednesday, 10/02/19 9:59am PDT
optional challenge: Piano plus synth pad
yourbandname_lss.mp3 sent to fightmaster@songfight.org
Subject: Long Story Short
Body: (your band name)

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Wed Sep 25, 2019 2:17 am
by gizo
Well I’m really struggling with this :(

I’ve got something about “long story short - the little fella threw the ring into a volcano and the elves all buggered off home” or a tale of woe about lost friends which ends “long story short - everyone you love will leave you”

And neither of those make me want to write any more :(

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Wed Sep 25, 2019 2:23 am
by crumpart
gizo wrote:
Wed Sep 25, 2019 2:17 am
Well I’m really struggling with this :(

I’ve got something about “long story short - the little fella threw the ring into a volcano and the elves all buggered off home” or a tale of woe about lost friends which ends “long story short - everyone you love will leave you”

And neither of those make me want to write any more :(
Go with the third option, which is stealing your child’s idea. It’s a good one.

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Wed Sep 25, 2019 5:23 am
by Æpplês&vØdkã
gizo wrote:
Wed Sep 25, 2019 2:17 am
Well I’m really struggling with this :(

I’ve got something about “long story short - the little fella threw the ring into a volcano and the elves all buggered off home” or a tale of woe about lost friends which ends “long story short - everyone you love will leave you”

And neither of those make me want to write any more :(
Why not a 15 minute epic about the life of Martin Short?

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Wed Sep 25, 2019 7:18 am
by furrypedro
gizo wrote:
Wed Sep 25, 2019 2:17 am
Well I’m really struggling with this :(

I’ve got something about “long story short - the little fella threw the ring into a volcano and the elves all buggered off home"
Dammit, there goes my LOTR 10-second song. I guess there's always Tolstoy...

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Wed Sep 25, 2019 8:01 am
by Æpplês&vØdkã
furrypedro wrote:
Wed Sep 25, 2019 7:18 am
gizo wrote:
Wed Sep 25, 2019 2:17 am
Well I’m really struggling with this :(

I’ve got something about “long story short - the little fella threw the ring into a volcano and the elves all buggered off home"
Dammit, there goes my LOTR 10-second song. I guess there's always Tolstoy...
I like how the first thing anyone things of for this title is how long winded Tolkien is...

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2019 8:35 am
by crumpart
Hey @Æpplês&vØdkã, really like your lyrics for this one so far.

(Mine is also done, but I'll post the lyrics when I actually push the button on sending the email.)

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2019 8:39 am
by Æpplês&vØdkã
crumpart wrote:
Sat Sep 28, 2019 8:35 am
Hey @Æpplês&vØdkã, really like your lyrics for this one so far.

(Mine is also done, but I'll post the lyrics when I actually push the button on sending the email.)
Thanks! Yeah I went ahead and sent mine in...I ran out of ideas on things to change/improve so I figured do it while it's still on my mind! Also I decided to get out my banjo for this one :p

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2019 10:55 am
by Pigfarmer Jr
I sent something in because I've got other obligations this week. And I already hear something I want to change. *sigh*

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Sat Sep 28, 2019 1:10 pm
by Pigfarmer Jr
Sent in a new render with a couple of small tweaks.

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Sun Sep 29, 2019 2:16 pm
by crumpart
In with the opening track from my new album, "My Year 10 Religion teacher said I was cool".

Mah huzzzbnd also sent his in for the first time in ...8?... years. He refused to show me his lyrics until he was done.

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Sun Sep 29, 2019 3:02 pm
by gizo
crumpart wrote:
Sun Sep 29, 2019 2:16 pm
In with the opening track from my new album, "My Year 10 Religion teacher said I was cool".

Mah huzzzbnd also sent his in for the first time in ...8?... years. He refused to show me his lyrics until he was done.
Excitement! If I can get my vocals recorded in this house of a hundred holidaying childrens we’ll the have the full 34,890 (or, there and back again)

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Sun Sep 29, 2019 9:17 pm
by gizo
The kids are playing cricket in the sun and I recorded vocal takes.

I’m in.

I wrote this one on the ukelele but in deference to @ Æpplês&vØdkã, I played keys on my laptop instead. I’ve also tried to make sure it’s mixed a little nicer than Pocket Full Of Bones, because lots of people told me that I had that one too loud.

Hopefully this is easier on everyone’s ears

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Mon Sep 30, 2019 4:04 am
by Æpplês&vØdkã
gizo wrote:
Sun Sep 29, 2019 9:17 pm
The kids are playing cricket in the sun and I recorded vocal takes.

I’m in.

I wrote this one on the ukelele but in deference to @ Æpplês&vØdkã, I played keys on my laptop instead. I’ve also tried to make sure it’s mixed a little nicer than Pocket Full Of Bones, because lots of people told me that I had that one too loud.

Hopefully this is easier on everyone’s ears
Aww, you didn't HAVE to avoid the uke just for me. Plenty of people enjoy them! I'm just...not particularly one of them. I dug your song last week, excited to see what you came up with!

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2019 1:20 pm
by lilysloane
Martin and I are in. Just submitted! Because why do the work I'm supposed to be doing when I can do this?

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2019 1:42 pm
by crumpart
lilysloane wrote:
Tue Oct 01, 2019 1:20 pm
Because why do the work I'm supposed to be doing when I can do this?
(Long) story (short) of my life.

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2019 2:08 pm
by Æpplês&vØdkã
crumpart wrote:
Tue Oct 01, 2019 1:42 pm
lilysloane wrote:
Tue Oct 01, 2019 1:20 pm
Because why do the work I'm supposed to be doing when I can do this?
(Long) story (short) of my life.
Yep, I think many of us resemble this...

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2019 2:12 pm
by crumpart
Æpplês&vØdkã wrote:
Tue Oct 01, 2019 2:08 pm
crumpart wrote:
Tue Oct 01, 2019 1:42 pm
lilysloane wrote:
Tue Oct 01, 2019 1:20 pm
Because why do the work I'm supposed to be doing when I can do this?
(Long) story (short) of my life.
Yep, I think many of us resemble this...
It's worse when you're self employed...

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2019 2:15 pm
by Æpplês&vØdkã
crumpart wrote:
Tue Oct 01, 2019 2:12 pm
Æpplês&vØdkã wrote:
Tue Oct 01, 2019 2:08 pm
crumpart wrote:
Tue Oct 01, 2019 1:42 pm


(Long) story (short) of my life.
Yep, I think many of us resemble this...
It's worse when you're self employed...
True, I don't think there's much penalty for daydreaming about song ideas in staff meetings. But I really ought to clean my garage...

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2019 1:37 pm
by vowlvom
Sneaking in (slightly) late with something ridiculous.

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2019 1:48 pm
by Dark Son
Hey all , sent in a slightly late submission from Leppakron .
Got it in on the right day at least....

Re: I could go on all day (Long Story Short prefight)

Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2019 2:12 pm
by Æpplês&vØdkã
vowlvom wrote:
Wed Oct 02, 2019 1:37 pm
Sneaking in (slightly) late with something ridiculous.
Those lyrics are hilarious, I can't wait.