the chorus vocals were the last I recorded, and i had a particularly melody stuck in my head that I just couldn't shake, it quite clearly was completely wrong but, again, I spent too much time on the instruments, particularly the drums, and it got to the stage where I had to mixdown where I was or miss the fight, and hell, I have no shame so I went for it. live and learn.HeadShot wrote:Mantzfield – I was going to vote for this...But the chorus came in and suddenly the vocals didn’t match with the instrumentals.
I'm so glad someone picked out the bass, it's easily my favorite part of the song!Authors Of wrote:MantzfieldThe bass is right in there too, playing some really crazy riffs.
ha! I seem to have been living on that cusp for most of my lifefishsticks wrote:MantzfieldI have a hunch you're on the cusp of a large improvement leap.
that is a bizarre, incredibly awesome, yet oddly comforting thing to say...mico saudad wrote:Mantzfield - Wow. totally a Nintendo boss fight scene. Like the end boss.
thanks to the reviewers so far, I'm surprised at the positive comments as I really can't listen to the chorus (it literally makes me want to hurt myself), I have an instrumental mixdown for my personal pleasure! so yea, thanks for them, and for the criticisms, it all helps! Onwards with my own reviews then:
before the fire - bizarre, which is good, but I'm unsure what it was and nothing really happened, though I did like the end.
berkeley social scene - musically liked it a lot, it has a nice flow. I'm not usually fan of synths, it's far too easy for them to sound really out of place, but the synth really makes this song. only weak point is that the vocals are a little weak but that doesn't ruin the song.
chopped liver meat god - the intro instantly reminds me of smashing pumpkins... the rhythm guitars could be a little more distinct. enjoyed the breakdown, if the violin sounded a tiny bit smoother it would've been perfect. change in the second half was a little odd, but i liked the outro.
cthonic pop ensemble - didn't mind the song, particularly the ending. the breakdown part was a little drawn out, and the kick-in not enough to justify it.
cnthonic youth - quite enjoyed the pacing and 'bounce' of the song, then the pacing started bugging me a little, and once it started it didn't stop.
crank radio - funky melody, seems a little bland but the ending definitely won me over. VOTE
Elaine Dimasi - really like the lyrics. One part of me was screaming for some subtle reverb, or stereo widening, but overall i really like the simplicity of the song.
howl down the chimney - sounds a little like Mark Lanegan to start with. nice subtle musical overlays, and the banjo is genius. little dragged out, but it works well.
jon titterington - liked it, i was slightly put off by the odd timings in the middle, they seemed a little out of place, but its quickly back to where I wanted it to be.
king arthur - instantly I'm thinking 80's country rock, no major complaints with the song, its just not my thing
light with heat - enjoyed the beginning. tambourine sounds a bit loud until the distortion kicks in. again no complaints, I just felt like it needed something else towards the end.
lyric burgler inside your head - seemed a little lacking, though I liked some points. I'm a sucker for a crazy feedback ending, but it missed out on a vote.
noah mclaughlin - nothing wrong, quite liked the guitar, though the bass could've been a tadge more prominent for my liking, the song just didnt grab me.
paco del stinko - really nice start, enjoying the simple but funky bass, and liked the 'classic country'-sih edge it has.
pathetic wannabees - too old school for me, vocals seemed slightly over-prominent and i felt like i was missing out on the instruments.
ripping hammer - really good start, very Modest Mouse. liking the subtle percussion. short but effective
rone rivendale - interesting ideas, but the chorus timings killed it for me.
shitload of dolphins - simple, very nice, and I liked the guitar riff. also I did actually laugh at the band name...
water bill - enjoying the slightly aggressive vocals over the simple, subtle and effective music.
weakest suit - probably the fastest song, which is a bonus in my books, but i didn't really get on with it, can't figure out why, on paper I should love it but I've listened to it a few times and it's just not working for me.