Um, misrepresent much? The REST of my review, which is in plain view, went as followsRone Rivendale, taking a single line of a review out of context, wrote:RONE RIVENDALE no comment.
"Oh since you’re an artist, all I can offer beyond “be better” is don’t hard pan the drums EVER and your little chord sequence should be dirtier and bassier – without a bass line this sounds weaker and thinner than it might do with a low-end. Also, I recommend not writing about writing songs – a casual listener doesn’t care enough about you in particular to be engaged in listening about it, and it also gives the impression (probably erroneous) that you have no ideas about what to sing about.
Maybe there’s a posthumous career as a Daniel Johnston Lite Outsider for you.
All that said, I have seen people offer you spot-on, helpful criticism in more than one occasion, much more useful than mine, and you clearly have never even bothered to try and take it on board, so asking for detailed criticism you are now wasting my time on the boards as well as in the music archive. Thanks."
Ish.