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Are your legs tired...because you've been running through my mind all day.
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“Suis-je au ciel? (parce que) je vois les étoiles dans tes yeux!”
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If I had a nickel for every time I saw someone as beautiful as you, I'd have five cents :P
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I like your shoes. Wanna bang?
j$ wrote:“Suis-je au ciel? (parce que) je vois les étoiles dans tes yeux!”
Honestly, if you're going to use French, you could just as easily say Il y a un canard dans ma chambre and have decent odds.
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Generic wrote:I like your shoes. Wanna bang?
j$ wrote:“Suis-je au ciel? (parce que) je vois les étoiles dans tes yeux!”
Honestly, if you're going to use French, you could just as easily say Il y a un canard dans ma chambre and have decent odds.
That's what happened to me! only it was an Australian and I didn't think he was talking about a duck.
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Generic wrote:
j$ wrote:“Suis-je au ciel? (parce que) je vois les étoiles dans tes yeux!”
Honestly, if you're going to use French, you could just as easily say Il y a un canard dans ma chambre and have decent odds.
I had a particular purpose. - http://songfight.net/forums/viewtopic.p ... 91#p186291

Also I wouldn't call this French exactly; in as much as I don't think a French person would say it - not like that, anyway.
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RangerDenni wrote:
Generic wrote:I like your shoes. Wanna bang?
j$ wrote:“Suis-je au ciel? (parce que) je vois les étoiles dans tes yeux!”
Honestly, if you're going to use French, you could just as easily say Il y a un canard dans ma chambre and have decent odds.
That's what happened to me! only it was an Australian and I didn't think he was talking about a duck.
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And yet another conversation becomes about Caravan Ray's cock.
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My work here is done.
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Congrats, Berkly Social Scene!
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Er, congrats ... for what? (confused)
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For getting the most "real" votes. I guess my attempt at sarcasm failed.

edit: AND as I just noticed, meant for the niisyf review thread. Woopsy :D
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You don't think Holly's votes were "real?" I didn't see anyone in the review thread bashing her song.
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No, her song is fine and dandy. It's amazing at what can be accomplished with the same 4 down the steps chords for an entire song with no changes. But a very sweet voice, so that makes up for it. But 35'ish extra votes from the norm? The two votes thing was cleverly organize to spread the field. It doesn't take a rocket surgeon to see it and figure it out, jon. :D

But it doesn't really matter, I'm happy to see new people in the community. I hope those extra 35 same people stick around now and vote on the Shot Down fight that Holly isn't in and many more after. In fact, I hope Jim Tyrell enters some more fights too and some others in their circles. There's nothing better than new music. ;)

Sorry if I'm being a dick. I don't even know why it's annoying me, it's not like me. I know it's not because we didn't win, because that stuff doesn't bother me. In fact, I told Dee our niisyf song is going to be sappy and not liked by many. I was actually surprised by the 21 votes we got. C-ray got a bit robbed. Probably one of the best C-ray songs I've heard in a long time. Berkly got 23 community votes, so they got screwed. It's kind of unfair for me to get whiny about it, I'm sure I'm the only asshole, so sorry Holly, you have a nice voice. We're all just trying to be the best that we can, so this is the last I'll mention it.
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Billy's Little Trip wrote: But it doesn't really matter, I'm happy to see new people in the community. I hope those extra 35 same people stick around now and vote on the Shot Down fight that Holly isn't in and many more after. In fact, I hope Jim Tyrell enters some more fights too and some others in their circles. There's nothing better than new music. ;)
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Pretty sure Holly is back again this week - but in a collab with a different name.

I voted for her song. So I have no problems with the win.
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Billy's Little Trip wrote: Berkly got 23 community votes, so they got screwed.
Community votes? Have the votes stopped being anonymous all of a sudden.

Stressing over how people got their votes to win the mighty No-Prize isn't worthwhile.
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Niveous wrote:
Billy's Little Trip wrote: Berkly got 23 community votes, so they got screwed.
Community votes? Have the votes stopped being anonymous all of a sudden.
Haven't BSS got, like 23 different members?
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We have 5 core members and 5 secondary members.
I thought C-Ray won the moral victory. I really thought he won that one.
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glennny wrote:We have 5 core members and 5 secondary members.
I thought C-Ray won the moral victory. I really thought he won that one.
Thank you Glennny. Though, because I don't have 10 members (though it may sometimes seem like I do ladies), I did try to even things up:
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it is a really good song, CRay.
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