Nur Ein XX Round Six "Dark Cove"

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Nur Ein XX Round Six "Dark Cove"

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Dark Cove
shadow by Brown Word and the Big Whine

It's summer now but I recall the winter of 01
We dragged our sled beyond the lighthouse
where the big fish run
The ice had candled we got stuck
and then a squall came up
Between us and the mainland a crack had opened up
We ran toward the island into the blinding white
fighting for our lives on Lake Superior's ice
With just our tents and tackle against the brutal winds
seemed our fishing trip was over before it could begin

Head into the gale
I know I'm gonna make it
Chiseling my way wind
nipping at the nose keep your toes
Gotta make it to Dark Cove
Dark Cove is our only hope
Together we can take it
Alone we'd never make it
Try your mind, leave your fears behind
in Dark Cove

Safe in the cafe by the landing locals talk
Watching all the crazy fishermen
come back across
Way out on the white chip your hole and hunker down
200 foot of waxed line twixt the sky
and 30 pounds
of trout, 10 degrees at the bone
Man or fish who will hold
Who's the fool, both are bold
When you see that blood on the ice
then you know that he made the lucky strike

Head into the gale
I know I'm gonna make it
Chiseling my way wind
nipping at the nose, keep your toes
Gotta make it to Dark Cove
Dark Cove was our only hope
Together we can take it
Alone we'd never make it
Ride the storm be the stuff of stories
About Dark Cove

Spoiler
Conditions in the Apostle Islands Region of western Lake Superior produce a very specific flavor of ice fishing experience in late winter/early spring along the north shore of Wisconsin once the ice has more or less formed up for the season. The ice is constantly on the move due to deep, strong currents among the islands of the archipeligo. Various conditions such as the candeling of ice (ice that is rotted, taking an unstable form), pressure cracks, and sudden shearing off of the ice shelf on which one has set up operations, these are constant threats, as is the everpresent threat of going in, or simply experiencing hypothermia out in the elements. Maybe only madness can explain it; it has meant money to set nets under the ice but the call of trophy fish called anglers into waters between 120-220 feet to seek sport catches. The science of gear and technique can and does fill a book, see Blood on the Ice by John Esposito. The ice chisel is a constant companion to the angler for testing the ice. Dark Cove is not really a place that I know of out there but there is a Hidden Cove on North Twin Island from what I can find so I loosely based my story there, which is based on one of the stories from Esposito's book about a bunch of guys taking refuge in a hunting cabin on an island during a storm. Dark Cove could also be the metaphysical refuge in the mind when faced with life or death. Also I really just wanted to shoehorn in the use of this cool weather radio sample I collected. :D
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Dark Cove
Berkeley Social Scene

Glen - Bass, Guitar
Paul - Piano, Organ
Geech - Drums, Guitar, Acoustic Guitar, Vocals
Ken - Production, Snaps and Claps


I left my hero stuck in this jam
All alone without any hope or plan
The water’s rising incredibly fast
Abandoned in this cove, has the die been cast?

My head are heart are pounding
My head and heart they feel oh so lost

Begging, pleading from all of my fans
Family, publisher and media demands
Three years on I still don’t have much
Keyboards and legal pads all recoil from my touch

My head are heart are pounding
My head and heart they feel oh so lost

Gotta find a way out of this dark cove

Pages hold their ground and resist
Subplots come armed with all their crazy twists
Is there a way to bring it all home
And save our man from wasting away to skin and bones

My head are heart are pounding
My head and heart they reel
My head and heart they feel lost in this cove

Gotta find a way out of this dark cove

Gotta find a way out
I gotta write a way out of this dark cove
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Re: Nur Ein XX Round Six "Dark Cove"

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keep your head down, and take the low road
this is where it gets you. a darkened abode.
No one to see. No to love.
Just hell below. No heaven above.

keep to yourself, your thoughts and prayers
then suffocate them in this cold, stale air
there is a light that wants to shine through
nothing's gonna change till that boulder starts to move

peel back the stone
you don't have to be alone
peel back the stone, now
this was never your home

Now you've explored every inch of your cell
Counted the cracks, and you know them all too well
You hear the echo, it's the only voice you trust
All while your purpose slowly overgrows with rust

The safer you are
The less that you live
The more that you keep
The less you can give

The longer you wait
The deeper it gets
The colder it feels
The more you forget
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Re: Nur Ein XX Round Six "Dark Cove"

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All along this broken shoreline
Out on island, point, and head
The lighthouse rose and multiplied
As the mariner’s business spread

But a hundred years and more have passed
Since the last new lamp was lit
But the winds blow hard and the salt corrupts
And the keepers have died or quit

And when at last the coast
Gives up her rocky ghosts
When that final lamp goes still and cold
And her tower smashed or sold
Will all the sails be hauled and stowed
And leave a dark cove


Every year their numbers wane
As the Coast Guard writes them off
When the sun goes down, the night more dim
And the nightwatch anchors drop

Can the sailors shoot the stars
Have the sextants gone to rust
Is a GPS and satellite
The only thing to trust
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Re: Nur Ein XX Round Six "Dark Cove"

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Dark Cove
by Max Bombast

There's a tiny little town
Hidden deep in Puget Sound
Where the sunlight doesn't pierce the fog
And right since it was made
Way back in 1858
All of the townsfolk have been somewhat odd
They're pale and they don't age
And they will tell you to your face:

"Welcome to Dark Cove!
The happy harbor hamlet
That's harboring a secret of our own
Welcome to Dark Cove!
Let us whet your palate
Can we offer you sample of our home?
It only takes one bite
So how about tonight?"

Everyone's polite
They all want an invite
Before they'll step into your house
And if they go outside
They wear SPF 99
They may try to glamour your spouse
Something's wrong about this town
It has been since the year it founded

Welcome to Dark Cove!
A small clerical error
Caused a reign of terror to this day
Welcome to Dark Cove!
It's really only fair that we inform you
Just in case you plan to stay
We should have been forthcoming
The town is really named

𝕯ᥲrk 𝕮᥆᥎ᥱᥒ

You can't escape the reach
Of the Vampires of North Beach
They're so hospitable
So predictable
They'll make you a feast
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The Friends "Dark Cave"
(yes, you read that right, we got the prompt wrong AGAIN and I sang cave and not cove....judges, do your worst!!)

I know you're trying to make me happy
I know you're trying to shine your light
but like a spinster never married
I'm not the one you need to save
Leave me in my dark cave
where the walls are mine
let me have my dark cave
where I know just what I'll find

I don’t need a family

Without them I’m just fine

And when the morning comes

I’ll just get out of the sun

No one to look at what is mine



I cant breathe insanity

Everything’s out of time

Except when I’m alone

It’s a perfect happy song

Don’t have to live in a rewind



I wanna go back home

Don’t always wanna be so alone

Just need a place without the noise

I wanna be where there’s no phone
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Dark Cove (LWRG) (shadow)

Spoken: It's 10pm, do you know where your children are?

Some kids like to pretend
Some kids don’t have any friends
Some kids roam the night, wasted youth, wasted life
Stuck on a street with a dead end

Some kids play silly games
Some kids are those led astray
Some kids will never know more than a broken home
Never ever going to graduate

CHORUS:
The kids aren’t all right, the kids aren’t okay
The kids aren’t all right, all right, okay


Some kids worry about the prom
Some kids pull the fire alarm
Some kids get hand-me-downs, they’ll never leave this town
Some kids learn how to build a bomb

Some kids grow up too fast
Some kids never get to class
There’s nowhere to go in a town called Dark Cove
Some kids just aren’t meant to last

Because the kids aren’t all right, the kids aren’t okay
I said the kids aren’t all right, all right, okay


Spoken (by different voices):
Did you see Tiffany? She got braces!
Can you go be a bitch somewhere else?
What do you mean, he’s your boyfriend?
Say hello to your son, Tristan! Hi… daddy
You never say what you mean to say.
But I thought he died in a motorcycle accident after homecoming.
He’s dating Brianna. Why would he send you that?
Me and the crew are going to go down to Scooby’s for some milkshakes. You want to come along?
Oh my god, Brian was wearing these lame-ass shades.
I don’t know how to do this anymore.
Everyone knows that you’re ten times the tramp than I ever was.
Just try it! All the cool kids are doing it.
Oh my god, bitch, get your own boyfriend!


CHORUS x2

Credits:
E. Niveous Rayside: Vocals, guitar
R. Brookes McKenzie: Omnichord, backing vocals, mixing, engineering & production
Eric Novak: Bass
Jay Ackley: Drums

Featuring the voice talents of: Eric Novak, Becks Gagnon, Glenn Case, Isobelle Novak, Oliver Novak, Elana Low, Jay Ackley, Nikki Bates, Tom Urwin, Martina Fiserova, and Clementine D. Muppetinski.


CHALLENGE:
Spoiler
We got claps in the instrumental verse, between the voices. Regarding Niv's high school project, he found his old notebook with character sheets but we let the voice actors make up their own lines with the prompt "Something an actor would say in a teen drama". We might have a VHS or two in the attic but we had neither the time nor the inclination to look for it, plus we have no VCR. Maybe some day! I am also encouraging him to revive DC as a musical!
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