hey listen to my new song (thread)

[ken]

Love it when, what I expect is, the eBow kicks in.

[roymond]

Love it when, what I expect is, the eBow kicks in.

Yeah. eBow with glass slide is my current weapon of choice.

[jack]

That was pretty cool. Cinematic. Eno loves the e-bow.

[j$]

I liked it. Maybe the crash is a little loud? What do I know? It's a good song, excellent work.

j$

[Smalltown Mike]

Here's my entry for this week's homework: I Can Read My Mind.

This is really lovely. Nice work.

[roymond]

Here's my entry for last week's Eno class homework. The theme of the week was digital detox. The prompt was to write a simple protest song, like classics from Woody Guthrie, that the people can sing. I may not fully fulfill those expectations. But it’s simple. And acoustic.

This Golden Age

i see a cleaner air, it feels so fine
i see a brighter love, and feel its shine
i see a lesson here, and it may seem
i see how everyone, might have a dream

you see a golden age, clearly not mine
you serve an empty glass, instead of wine
is there a golden rule, that fits your crime
you see what's good for me, hasn't a time

i see a playground that's, playful and joyful
i see this everywhere, drank by the cupful
i see an opening, i feel its welcome
i see connections here, and feel its hopeful

[AJOwens]

Speaking of protest songs, here's one from 25 years ago (around 9-11) that seems to have become timely again. It's a Squirrels in the Attic collaboration. I was never sure about the structure, and I've messed with it here, probably for the worse. It could be just A B C A B C A B C.

I was thinking of updating the lyrics for the current situation. Alas, my main co-lyricist Rick is no longer with us (although "They rattle their sabres and we all cower" was Shawn's). But does the song have enough legs to bother with new lyrics?

[Lunkhead]

You can now listen to Moss Palace's Nur Ein XVII Round Four winning song "June Moon" on YouTube and all the major music streaming platforms!

[jast]

Just a little less than 7 days ago, my father died, after a rapid decline that lasted just hours. I managed to be there for his final breaths but he was doped up on morphine and we couldn't talk anymore. In between all the arrangements that needed to be made and picking out music from his collection to be played at the funeral, I turned it into Cliché, The Song. In true Song Fight fashion this is a rough version. I plan to polish it up (a little, not too much) later and include it in a little synth pop album I've been working on on the side for the last two years and that I plan to finish and release this year. It will also include a song I wrote for the "They Know" fight from 2018 but never recorded.

Take care, y'all. Life is shorter than you'd think sometimes. Make the most of it.

http://static.music-jk.net/attic/safe-and-sound-p1.mp3

[fluffy]

I am sorry for your loss. May his memory forever be a blessing.

[roymond]

Jast - I’m so sorry to hear this. Your song is beautiful and very touching. May his memory be a blessing and bring you joy in the future.