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I'm also looking for comments pertaining to "pitch". In particular, I feel I've worked really hard on this track trying to hit the correct notes. So any thoughts or suggestions: mucho appreciato. I will, of course, be working on this until the deadline to improve it.
Here is what I have:
http://www.philwages.com/music/TenLies_ ... icdemo.mp3
Ten Lies by Wages
VERSE 1 (Am-C/A-C-Dm)
take me on your road
but hold back all your lies
in just moments I'll arrive
just to meet your next big lie
CHORUS 1 (F-Em-Am)
your ten lies is all I can stand
lined up like indiscretion
an unplanned plan to disband
ten lies on a mission
VERSE 2 (G-Am-C)
we had so many good times
before you turned into a cold hearted bitch
I went to your secret places,
but for all my following, you made the switch
BRIDGE (Dm-C x2, G, A)
I've had enough of your lies
each one that you canonize
your most dangerous game ends
as my new life begins
CHORUS
VERSE 3 (Am-C/A-C-Dm)
I have veared off your road
after the collision with your lies
in just moments I realized
I don't have to live with your lies