The best thing about that sig is that it looks like your girlfriend is usually drunk and finally had her wits about her enough to criticize your song.
Also, I now want to submit as Sober Girlfriend, but I'll resist.
The best thing about that sig is that it looks like your girlfriend is usually drunk and finally had her wits about her enough to criticize your song.
Pigfarmer Jr wrote: ↑Mon May 11, 2020 7:15 amThe best thing about that sig is that it looks like your girlfriend is usually drunk and finally had her wits about her enough to criticize your song.
Also, I now want to submit as Sober Girlfriend, but I'll resist.
I really enjoyed that one lol, have you ever heard "I feel Asleep on my Arm" by The Aquabats?sleepysilverdoor wrote: ↑Mon May 11, 2020 10:01 amFor what it's worth my entire entry (as COVID 19) for "Tricked Me for the Last Time" was a Jonathan Davis impression. Pretending to be Korn is fun and everyone should try it.
Lol I just did! That was completely absurd. It covered pretty much all of the big bands! Though I would have loved if they'd mocked Staind and HED (pe) a bit for good measure. (Confession, it may just me childhood nostalgia but I love that shit - it's my "workout hype music" )SweeneyToad wrote: ↑Mon May 11, 2020 10:14 amI really enjoyed that one lol, have you ever heard "I feel Asleep on my Arm" by The Aquabats?sleepysilverdoor wrote: ↑Mon May 11, 2020 10:01 amFor what it's worth my entire entry (as COVID 19) for "Tricked Me for the Last Time" was a Jonathan Davis impression. Pretending to be Korn is fun and everyone should try it.
I used to like Korn and Limp Bizkit when I was a teenager, I haven't listened to any of their albums in many many years, but I'll admit that George Michael cover by Limp Bizkit was a guilty pleasure of mine lolsleepysilverdoor wrote: ↑Mon May 11, 2020 10:25 amLol I just did! That was completely absurd. It covered pretty much all of the big bands! Though I would have loved if they'd mocked Staind and HED (pe) a bit for good measure. (Confession, it may just me childhood nostalgia but I love that shit - it's my "workout hype music" )SweeneyToad wrote: ↑Mon May 11, 2020 10:14 amI really enjoyed that one lol, have you ever heard "I feel Asleep on my Arm" by The Aquabats?sleepysilverdoor wrote: ↑Mon May 11, 2020 10:01 amFor what it's worth my entire entry (as COVID 19) for "Tricked Me for the Last Time" was a Jonathan Davis impression. Pretending to be Korn is fun and everyone should try it.
Yes it's real...
You're right, I did rewrite I Fought The Law but I don't get the SpringsteenSober wrote: ↑Sun May 10, 2020 3:07 pm
The Pannacotta Army: Nylon strings and whistles, here we go. I Fought the Law? Is that the song I'm thinking of? Maybe a little Born to Run? This is gonna kill me. Anyway, cut a lot of mids on that nylon string guitar. That might solve some of the mix issues. More oomph in the vocals. The backing vocal style feels too doo-wop. The drop chorus at the end was the best chorus. Cut the bridge altogether, do the drop chorus, and repeat with a final big chorus. Also prefer the clean guitar to the fuzzface. A lot of good pieces here, need work tying it all together.
GF: Slightly PTSD'd from this one time I stumbled upon a 70's hippie jesus band
I like her too!Toby Roktot wrote: ↑Sun May 10, 2020 9:11 pmI like your girlfriend ...
If I were 20 years younger....I’d be 50 . So, thanks for the backhanded compliment.
You seem to know a lot of technical stuff regarding the recording process, or want us to believe you do. I figure it’s the former.
Yes, I record all together since I just don’t like the disjointed feeling of all the separate takes. Been there and had some other people doing all that. Very boring , to me anyway.
Sometimes I do a live take, just for fun, and submit that. So, yeah, sometimes I do play at dives...fun, actually.
The pan stuff I kinda learned on this site. Someone once suggested to not have everything in the middle. Makes sense.
The amped acoustic is a new Takamine my sweet wife gifted me a few weeks ago. Before, I used an Ovation with an aftermarket pickup. Someone suggested I use a mic for the guitar once before so, that will be tried on my next entry.
Now for the timing.....I know but, I have an excuse....I’m a drummer first and that’s it. I beat on the guitar like it’s a drum and when I do not use a click track, I speed up...a lot.
But you know, sometimes I want to do that to actually make the song go where it should, imho.
All in all, thanks for the review. I’ll certainly think about your suggestions. Not sure I’m smart enough to use that info, but I’ll give it a shot.
Thanks
Toby
I didn't think you were doing a straight impression, I just got that flavor. As silly as Korn is, he's a talented vocalist for sure, and so are you!Paco Del Stinko wrote: ↑Mon May 11, 2020 9:35 amSober and gal: Thanks for the comments! Just want to respond to clarify, not out of thin skinned defensiveness. Trust me, I can take me some slammin'. But I had to look up who Jonathan Davis is and there's no way that was me doing an impression. I like the heavy, but Korn and all that stuff is not my thing. And no quantizing or whatever. All played by hand to a click. Genuine, hand played slop, my man!
Yeah, not my best work, but still gotta scratch the itch. And because everyone's dying to know, the song is about, uh, Rambo. Ahem.
Don't feel bad - she rolled her eyes at Starfinger's More Than Soup (I may dump her for this)SweeneyToad wrote: ↑Sun May 10, 2020 5:05 pmI am not Starfinger but I heard his song a few fights ago and he is awesome! Also, your GF's review is my sig now, ty!
Don't feel bad - she rolled her eyes at Starfinger's More Than Soup (I may dump her for this)SweeneyToad wrote: ↑Sun May 10, 2020 5:05 pmI am not Starfinger but I heard his song a few fights ago and he is awesome! Also, your GF's review is my sig now, ty!
I never expect to win any fight, for the record. I'm doing this purely because I enjoy it and to get better.Toby Roktot wrote: ↑Mon May 11, 2020 2:46 pmContinuing...
Hot pink halo - Just close your eyes and let the sound and vibe drift you away to your happy place. Maybe a bit of transcendental meditation would certainly find a home here.
I’m not sure how you made all the different sounds in your tune but, I like them.
As I’ve said before, the vocals are just a tad off but, I can certainly hear improvements. I don’t believe you’ll win this fight. Too many very good submissions. Alas, I’m in the same boat so let’s you and I kick it up a notch and keep tryin’.
Cya,
Toby
I didn't get my bass.. erm, I didn't get both of my bass guitars back until this past Friday. They were in the shop getting set up. I shall probably have more bass in the future.Lunkhead wrote: ↑Mon May 11, 2020 3:59 pm
Pigfarmer Jr: The bass is kind of non-distinct in the mix, like it could be tighter and punchier.
Pork Producer Jr: This really needs a bass guitar part (I don't think there is one at all?) to tie together the music and the drums.
Appreciate it <3 and yeah, that's a Gretsch square neck. Maddeningly difficult instrument for someone with shitty rhythm and pitch.Lunkhead wrote: ↑Mon May 11, 2020 3:59 pmSober: I'll review a sixth song, because shrts was so short and because you're whining about reviews.Really nice mandolin in the intro. Is that a dobro or something in the right ear too? You're nailing the genre and it all sounds very good and is very well played. I was hoping for some harmonizing with the main vocal in the chorus, for me that would have been cooler than the ahhh ahhh backups. The backups are kinda just doing the same thing as the piano (whole/half notes, singing the chords) so they're not adding a ton for me. Other than wishing for more in the vocal arrangement though this is real solid. VOTE!