Pre-History of My Broken Heart

roymond · Post by **roymond** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 1:22 pm

I am in the unenviable position of having a nearly completed lyric before recording one sound. This will be an uneasy re-entry, indeed.

Æpplês&vØdkã · Post by **Æpplês&vØdkã** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 2:46 pm

MosquitoBabies wrote:this is looking to be my first solo songfight submission. i actually had a hand in the kraziez submission for anomaly and i eighth-assed a submission for this one with the same guy earlier today (was submitted under "Slit Tearduct").

Hooray, Benoit is on the board.

MosquitoBabies · Post by **MosquitoBabies** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 3:08 pm

applesandvodka wrote:
MosquitoBabies wrote:this is looking to be my first solo songfight submission. i actually had a hand in the kraziez submission for anomaly and i eighth-assed a submission for this one with the same guy earlier today (was submitted under "Slit Tearduct").
Hooray, Benoit is on the board.

word, dirk.

MosquitoBabies · Post by **MosquitoBabies** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 3:34 pm

i just realized that the acronym for slit tear duct is STD

veGetar Ianra Ge · Post by **veGetar Ianra Ge** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 4:12 pm

I don't think this title is gonna produce much. How many of you actually have broken hearts? I think last week's failed blues fiasco can answer that...

Billy's Little Trip · Post by **Billy's Little Trip** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 4:52 pm

veGetar Ianra Ge wrote:I don't think this title is gonna produce much. How many of you actually have broken hearts? I think last week's failed blues fiasco can answer that...

A broken heart doesn't have to just be about a relationship that went bad. I can vividly remember things that have happened in my life that have broken my heart. I can still remember the day my Dad walked out the door with his middle finger in the air saying, "have a good fucking life" to my Mom, and never coming back. I can still remember that pain like it was yesterday. Maybe someone lost a pet, or a very dear friend, etc.
Sometimes song writing is about more than what's on the surface. But surface songs are fun too. Paco Del Stinko is the King of entertaining word play.

jeff robertson · Post by **jeff robertson** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 7:26 pm

Damn. If I was going to get anything done this week, I need to get started tonight. And I didn't. See ya'll next time.

wages · Post by **wages** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 7:34 pm

Billy's Little Trip wrote:
veGetar Ianra Ge wrote:I don't think this title is gonna produce much. How many of you actually have broken hearts? I think last week's failed blues fiasco can answer that...
A broken heart doesn't have to just be about a relationship that went bad. I can vividly remember things that have happened in my life that have broken my heart. I can still remember the day my Dad walked out the door with his middle finger in the air saying, "have a good fucking life" to my Mom, and never coming back. I can still remember that pain like it was yesterday. Maybe someone lost a pet, or a very dear friend, etc.

Harsh!

And true. 8)

Lord of Oats · Post by **Lord of Oats** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 7:52 pm

Wages wrote:
Billy's Little Trip wrote:
veGetar Ianra Ge wrote:I don't think this title is gonna produce much. How many of you actually have broken hearts? I think last week's failed blues fiasco can answer that...
A broken heart doesn't have to just be about a relationship that went bad. I can vividly remember things that have happened in my life that have broken my heart. I can still remember the day my Dad walked out the door with his middle finger in the air saying, "have a good fucking life" to my Mom, and never coming back. I can still remember that pain like it was yesterday. Maybe someone lost a pet, or a very dear friend, etc.
Harsh! And true. 8)

His response is completely true, but does absolutely nothing to refute the original point.

LSK · Post by **LSK** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 8:15 pm

I'm done. Two takes, got one I was happy with.

(Actually, I'm going to spend the rest of the week working on it, but it feels ready even now.)

And, yes, it's not as miserable as my Memphis entry.

Lord of Oats · Post by **Lord of Oats** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 8:18 pm

LSK wrote:I'm done. Two takes, got one I was happy with.

(Actually, I'm going to spend the rest of the week working on it, but it feels ready even now.)

And, yes, it's not as miserable as my Memphis entry.

Does this one have chords?

erik · Post by **erik** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 8:24 pm

veGetar Ianra Ge wrote:I don't think this title is gonna produce much. How many of you actually have broken hearts? I think last week's failed blues fiasco can answer that...

1) I didn't actually have Cancer when I wrote a song called Cancer.
2) The blues ain't about broken hearts, it's about the world treating you bad. Just because I got a woman mean as she can be don't mean she gonna be able to break my heart.
3) Have you really never had your heart broken? What are you, 12? Like everyone I know has had their heart broken.

roymond · Post by **roymond** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 8:25 pm

Mine was dangerously evocative of Genesis' "Misunderstanding". Disaster averted. This must be some weird cross-over from the prog discussion elsewhere.

guts.f.uck · Post by **guts.f.uck** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 9:31 pm

erik wrote:
veGetar Ianra Ge wrote:I don't think this title is gonna produce much. How many of you actually have broken hearts? I think last week's failed blues fiasco can answer that...
1) I didn't actually have Cancer when I wrote a song called Cancer.
2) The blues ain't about broken hearts, it's about the world treating you bad. Just because I got a woman mean as she can be don't mean she gonna be able to break my heart.
3) Have you really never had your heart broken? What are you, 12? Like everyone I know has had their heart broken.

Excuse me, f.aggot. Lift up your skirt, wipe the sand out of your vagina, and quit whining

. Everyone you know has NOT had their hearts broken and neither have you. Have you had cancer? NO. Have you had your life partner cheat on you? NO. Have you tried to kiss a girl and had her politely decline? Well fuck you because that's not good enough. SONGFIGHT! is getting worse and worse because you shit-for-brains indie kids keep writing uninspired noise. Do us a favor and wait for a title to which you can relate.

jack · Post by **jack** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 9:49 pm

well, that's an exciting debut!

guts.f.uck · Post by **guts.f.uck** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 9:52 pm

jack wrote:well, that's an exciting debut!

Thanks, Dude.

Billy's Little Trip · Mon Aug 27, 2007 10:13 pm

Hey guts, how about respecting the simple 80px X 80px avatar rule so it stops tripp'n the threads outs. Other than that, welcome to everyone is entitled to an opinion.....oh, and welcome to Song Fight! Now let's hear what you got

guts.f.uck · Post by **guts.f.uck** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 10:25 pm

Billy's Little Trip wrote:Hey guts, how about respecting the simple 80px X 80px avatar rule so it stops tripp'n the threads outs. Other than that, welcome to everyone is entitled to an opinion.....oh, and welcome to Song Fight! Now let's hear what you got

Don't single me out, ass. Erik's is clearly 100p x 90p. This is bullshit.

erik · Post by **erik** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 10:28 pm

guts.f.uck wrote:
erik wrote:
veGetar Ianra Ge wrote:I don't think this title is gonna produce much. How many of you actually have broken hearts? I think last week's failed blues fiasco can answer that...
1) I didn't actually have Cancer when I wrote a song called Cancer.
2) The blues ain't about broken hearts, it's about the world treating you bad. Just because I got a woman mean as she can be don't mean she gonna be able to break my heart.
3) Have you really never had your heart broken? What are you, 12? Like everyone I know has had their heart broken.
Excuse me, f.aggot. Lift up your skirt, wipe the sand out of your vagina, and quit whining . Everyone you know has NOT had their hearts broken and neither have you. Have you had cancer? NO. Have you had your life partner cheat on you? NO. Have you tried to kiss a girl and had her politely decline? Well fuck you because that's not good enough. SONGFIGHT! is getting worse and worse because you shit-for-brains indie kids keep writing uninspired noise. Do us a favor and wait for a title to which you can relate.

Ummm, I've had a life partner cheat on me.
Good try, though.

guts.f.uck · Post by **guts.f.uck** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 10:33 pm

erik wrote:
guts.f.uck wrote:
erik wrote: 1) I didn't actually have Cancer when I wrote a song called Cancer.
2) The blues ain't about broken hearts, it's about the world treating you bad. Just because I got a woman mean as she can be don't mean she gonna be able to break my heart.
3) Have you really never had your heart broken? What are you, 12? Like everyone I know has had their heart broken.
Excuse me, f.aggot. Lift up your skirt, wipe the sand out of your vagina, and quit whining . Everyone you know has NOT had their hearts broken and neither have you. Have you had cancer? NO. Have you had your life partner cheat on you? NO. Have you tried to kiss a girl and had her politely decline? Well fuck you because that's not good enough. SONGFIGHT! is getting worse and worse because you shit-for-brains indie kids keep writing uninspired noise. Do us a favor and wait for a title to which you can relate.
Ummm, I've had a life partner cheat on me.
Good try, though.

That's because you are a f.aggot. Children don't count anyway.

erik · Post by **erik** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 10:37 pm

awwwwww, it's cute how you think you're all hardcore

Billy's Little Trip · Mon Aug 27, 2007 10:40 pm

guts.f.uck wrote: Don't single me out, ass. Erik's is clearly 100p x 90p. This is bullshit.

I welcome you to Song Fight, give you some helpful advice, and you call me an ass? Why are you so defensive? Link me to some of your music so I can hear what you're about. This request isn't a demand, so put you guard down and chill musician style.

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