Trailer trash trash trailer (Mobile Home House Party)

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JonPorobil
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Post by JonPorobil »

Congrats to Alienboy.

And hey, Charles, there's nothing wrong with tying for second. 8)
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Post by Lord of Oats »

Did I forget to review again? I'll be brief here, since I wasn't in this one.

IAAC, bitches.

Alienboy - Pretty good, but nothing special. Not like totally upsetting that it won. Congratulations, good sir.

THEBESTSONG - HEY YOU ONLY GET TO ENTER FOR ONE OF THE TITLES...AT A TIME, ANYWAY. YOU CAN'T MAKE ONE SONG FOR BOTH, IDIOTS.

Jeff Flapjack - I really like the bass. I like the continually building dynamic, apparently fits the lyrics well. It doesn't quite reach the huge crash that I want it to, but that's okay. Vocal may be a little psychotic for my usual taste. Lead guitar is delicious. Tasty synths, too.

Jon Eric - I liked this quite a bit. Very sweet, gentle, and sensitive. I've never actually seen a poor people trailer park. I've only seen the old people kind like in the KA song. This almost makes me want to go live in one, if the people are as friendly as they are in this song.

King Arthur - I love this. I voted for this. Great groove. I love all the different sections and the way they fit together. This sounds like a hilarious show. Somebody please try to get to made this into an actual TV program. PLEASE. RIGHT NOW.

g4meboy - You really need to make better recordings, man. Are you using a computer mic in a cave or something? You've got some good ideas and stuff, and I'm not one to pick on production, but you really need to work on getting a good sound on tape. Then again, this song is weird. The other one you did this week is probably better.

Precarious Loaf - Holy man, your vocals are too quiet. Pretty good, I guess, a bit short, yum yum.

Surf Train - Uninspired chord progression, compared to the last one. This is good, but feels like a throwaway next to the epic of last week. Soloing is somehow even weirder.

Thornberry - This is really good and stuff. You wouldn't have Melvin's attention without being good. And I wouldn't say that just for that reason. This is a good, cohesive package, put together and presented well.

WreckdoM - Pretty good stuff. Enjoyable in a demented way. I'm sure you've heard that before. But that's what it is. You guys really know how to groove. Ooh, and cursing...I love that.

I got interrupted several times doing these. OH WELL.
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