Okay, I've finished listening to the whole episode. Here are some responses to the things that Mike, Ben, and Abigail said.
Ben, don't feel like you let me down by publishing last week's episode too late. There is no universe in which I would have used Dawn as a proper name in the final round. I noticed that it was a possible interpretation, predicted (correctly!) that some shadow entries would do it... But I never even considered taking that approach myself. Couldn't bring myself to do it.
Abigail: "If you had asked me to predict the top two after listening to all the 'This is Fine' songs, Jon Eric would not have been one of my predictions." HARD SAME.
There is no ukulele in my song. Crazy, right? It
sounds like ukulele should go in there! I sat down to record a uke part at one point, but couldn't fit it around the existing arrangement (the banjo took its place). I'm pretty sure the instrument you identified as the ukulele was actually my mandolin.
The comparison to Train's "Hey Soul Sister" was apt. It was one of a small handful of upbeat indie-folk songs I'd had in mind when doing my arrangement. (I bet you can guess at the other two without burning through too many wrong guesses.) I'll hastily point out, however, that I was doing the upbeat-vaguely-swingy-indie-folk thing before Train turned in that direction and made that type of sound inescapable.
You and a couple of reviewers pointed out the juxtaposition of the serious, personal lyrics against the upbeat sonic texture of the song. I get that it's not for everyone, and I did consider it a bit of calculated risk as I was writing my song, but I think of that as "a feature, not a bug" when it comes to my music. I suppose we'll have to agree to disagree on it. It made a lot of sense to me this round, to work in my "genre comfort zone" to focus my energy on polishing the piece as much as I possibly could, as opposed to "Homestretch," where I spent half the week basically teaching myself how to do synthpop. It's strange to me that some of the listeners and judges actually didn't have the context of what my music used to sound like most of the time, but that was also part of the risk, I suppose.
(For a much less-polished version of Jon Eric singing in a similar genre to this, here are some quick hits: "
Back From Juvie," Song Fight 2008; "
Schadenfreude," Nur Ein 2009; "
Rhymes with Lucia," Song Fight 2006, reworked for an album in 2009; "
Surrender (Peace)," album track from 2009).
It's been a great year, and listening to The New Ugly each time a new episode was published was definitely a highlight of the whole thing. Please let me know if you'd like me to be a guest on next year's podcast! And any of you will be welcome to be a guest on my podcast if you'd like. (Mike, in particular, I'd
love to chat about a Cake album with you.)