Here's my entry for last week's Eno class homework. The theme of the week was digital detox. The prompt was to write a simple protest song, like classics from Woody Guthrie, that the people can sing. I may not fully fulfill those expectations. But it’s simple. And acoustic.
i see a cleaner air, it feels so fine
i see a brighter love, and feel its shine
i see a lesson here, and it may seem
i see how everyone, might have a dream
you see a golden age, clearly not mine
you serve an empty glass, instead of wine
is there a golden rule, that fits your crime
you see what's good for me, hasn't a time
i see a playground that's, playful and joyful
i see this everywhere, drank by the cupful
i see an opening, i feel its welcome
i see connections here, and feel its hopeful
Re: hey listen to my new song (thread)
Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2025 3:54 pm
by AJOwens
Speaking of protest songs, here's one from 25 years ago (around 9-11) that seems to have become timely again. It's a Squirrels in the Attic collaboration. I was never sure about the structure, and I've messed with it here, probably for the worse. It could be just A B C A B C A B C.
I was thinking of updating the lyrics for the current situation. Alas, my main co-lyricist Rick is no longer with us (although "They rattle their sabres and we all cower" was Shawn's). But does the song have enough legs to bother with new lyrics?
Re: hey listen to my new song (thread)
Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2025 11:06 am
by Lunkhead
You can now listen to Moss Palace's Nur Ein XVII Round Four winning song "June Moon" on YouTube and all the major music streaming platforms!