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I guess I must have been in a bad mood when I was listening to this fight because in retrospect my reviews seem very harsh. I tried to tone them down a bit; bottom line appears to be these are all good songs, but there does seem to be a little complacency in the approaches. Then again, it's not like I bring anything exciting or new to the table, so probably best just to ignore me!
Bob & Buggles – messy, silly but it has a lot of charm. I really like the voice and the synth-reedy thing. It’s a good mix, just a few things slightly out of time not quite in tune with each other? Anyway, it’s a song that reaks of potential and while I’m not sure it stands up to repeated listens on its own - lyric’s not strong enough? - if this came up on an album of your stuff, I think it would fit right in.
Bombernauts – Well, hello, the 80s, how you been? The synth-bass being louder in the mix than the vocal is a bit weird but nothing distracting. The vocal is great. Crying out for a big 80s synth-pop chorus, though the bit I’m calling the bridge (with the overlapping harmonies/BVs) kind of hints at it. Yeah, that was a fun listen. I would listen to it again and wouldn’t switch the radio if it came on so that’s a big compliment from me.
Go Kups – synth claps float my boat so you almost have me even before the song comes in. Ah, boo, to these ears those ‘falsetto’ harmonies in the chorus are a bit sour and importantly drown out the overall melody. Actually you could probably just get away with mixing them quieter than the lead vocal at that point. Great overall atmosphere / feel. Also that’s a fine guitar solo. – you obviously think so as you play it twice

But yeah, I just can’t hear past the over-loud BVs. I can’t hear the chorus melody, how can I sing along?
Ian Martyn – those a cappella Bvs are a bit off at times, I think - or at least clunky in their execution. The vocal on the other hand is gorgeous. The music, when it kicks in, though efficient, doesn’t interest me too much. Like the lyric very much. Sounds like it could have come from the Rocky Horror Picture Show

The bass line is very sexy which is probably why it’s mixed a little loud ? Yeah, this is probably one of those ‘the song doesn’t grab me personally but that’s no bad thing given my personal taste’ moments. I have a few of those, as you’ll see from my other reviews this fight. Bridge is probably my favourite part.
Klausse – Did you just say ‘songfight … 1234’? Ugh. I love me some grindy metal fun. The music is great. The vocal, though well done, not so, IMO – it’s just the dragged out phrasing, like you don’t have enough to say? I know that may be unfair but hey, that’s what I was thinking and then it was over, so what else can I say? Do more of this, please; but take a bit more care with the words? Whether or not we can hear them, we can hear when they don’t feel like a good stylistic choice, would be my harsh criticism …
Big Mac Attack- pretty! That’s a weird (but excellent) choice on the accordion-y synth at 0.45. Actually adds something intriguing and new to what could be a ‘good but nothing new’ melody / chord progression. I’m starting to think at 1.30 you’ve forgotten to write a chorus. I like the ‘improvised’, jazz-rock feel to the arrangement; but not If it’s trying to hide that the song doesn’t really go anywhere … ah, Ok at 3.05 I realise that what I thought was the bridge is the B-part … erm, this is too long, very smooth listen but too long.
Magnetic Letters – Did anyone actually ask for the 90s Dance revival? Was there a petition I missed? Tee hee. Yeah, this is impressive but I didn’t like this sound first time round so you’re probably gonna struggle to win me around. The whole ‘rhythm in Heaven’ is not an approach that I am going for. Sorry, this is coming over much meaner than I intend it to; this is a very good song, very well put together and full of charm; but bottom line it feels a bit pastiche-y to me- then again I still have nightmares of the 90s music scene…
Overambitiousness – OK so deliberately over-cruel review time - Sensitive piano? Check. Gorgeous vocal singing words that don’t actually mean anywhere near as much as they appear to want to? Check. Slow drums starting and stopping to give much need dynamic? Check. All we need is for this to gear-change up in the last minute and we will have Gary Jules … oh there we go. A minute early! Brilliantly done but I just feel like I’m hearing an identikit ‘sensitive chart-stomper’ construction not a strong song in its own right, right down to the false end. Sorry that’s not helping, I know. I’ll say again, brilliantly done but not my bag. *shrug* it’s not like I know what I’m talking about, right?
Paco – Loving the chord progressions as always – flirting with the standards and taking them into slightly off-kilter places. Vocal sounds good and top indulgent fun guitar solo-ing as usual. I don’t think the chorus is strong/different enough to lift this up into a Paco great but it is of a quality I have come to expect.
Pepper John – that’s me and Pepper Jane. I’m glad that people don’t seem to mind the mix too much, given the four hours in which I did all my parts and mixed before the deadline. I don’t drive but I kind of heard a somehow chilled-out Mad Max / Road Warrior post-apocalyptic vibe, which is what I went for. The vocal sample is part of a ‘How to Start a Happening’ recording. Hey you didn’t want to hear a guitar solo by me there, right?
Praise Musak – Great lyric! I love me some lo-fi bonkers. I can’t decide whether I like or hate the backing vocals but I love the trumpety thing. I would have ended it at the French fries couplet. Or rather on ‘than living without you’ and cut the rest of the end and possibly dropped a verse or two earlier on. But I guess that wouldn’t fit the approach.
Micah & Pepper – Nice accordion – is it real?

The vocal is a little quiet in its performance? It’s hard to hear on occasion. Maybe the bass is getting in the way slightly. The Bvs sound great. It’s a lovely song overall.
I'm voting Bob & Buggles, Bombernauts and Praise Musak. Work that one out, right?
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