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Please Scream Inside Your Heart
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How on earth can you expect me to spell my damn band names properly? Also, where have I heard about screaming in my heart recently? I know it's like... Current pop culture vernacular... But can't place it... Too fdrink to Google. Help a fellow Song Fighter out.

ujnhunter wrote: ↑

Sun Jul 19, 2020 1:33 am

How on earth can you expect me to spell my damn band names properly? Also, where have I heard about screaming in my heart recently? I know it's like... Current pop culture vernacular... But can't place it... Too fdrink to Google. Help a fellow Song Fighter out.

https://www.npr.org/sections/coronaviru ... ll-seekers

crumpart wrote: ↑

Sun Jul 19, 2020 1:34 am

ujnhunter wrote: ↑

Sun Jul 19, 2020 1:33 am

How on earth can you expect me to spell my damn band names properly? Also, where have I heard about screaming in my heart recently? I know it's like... Current pop culture vernacular... But can't place it... Too fdrink to Google. Help a fellow Song Fighter out.

https://www.npr.org/sections/coronaviru ... ll-seekers

Thank you! I knew I had seen a headline in the past week or so...

Pigframer Jr reporting for duty.

All of my ideas are depressing.

Hi. Been a minute. I wrote lyrics for this song, but I won't have time to set it to music much less record it. Anyone who wants to use these lyrics, go for it and just let me know!

Please Scream Inside Your Heart

VERSE 1
Please scream inside your heart
cause my ears can't bear the sound
the drums of caring are broke
for now there's just no care around

CHORUS
please scream inside your heart
however much it may hurt
you gotta keep it together for us
cause one of us has to
and I choose you
Please scream inside your heart

VERSE 2
sneeze into your elbow please
or better yet, please isolate
I might hate your inner demons
still I'd like to see you again some day

CHORUS
please scream inside your heart
however much you are wrong
we gotta keep it together for us
cause together's the only way
and all you have is me
so please scream inside your heart

BRIDGE
you may or may not wonder
about the inner workings of others
what I definitely don't know
is why the hell do I care so much?

I guess it's cause I feel responsible for others
and I keep screaming inside my heart
cause you just don't get what it's really about
and that's what really tears me apart

CHORUS
please scream inside your heart
and learn to let feelings out
we gotta get it together for each other
cause together's the only way
and all we have is.. you know...
so please scream inside out your heart

sleepysilverdoor wrote: ↑

Sun Jul 19, 2020 7:37 am

All of my ideas are depressing.

Only one of my ideas is depressing, another one is kinda creepy, and the third one I don't have enough experience with to really make it work.

In. Sorry.

sleepysilverdoor wrote: ↑

Thu Jul 23, 2020 3:44 pm

In. Sorry.

I'm excited about your lyrics.

In with my idea that is also depressing.

Listening Party for 'Please Scream Inside Your Heart' will be in 2 Mondays - 8/3 at 9:00 pm EDT.
I'm a little tied up this Monday with my 58th birthday, which I conveniently forgot while scheduling.

Drop in and chat with the other artists!



https://youtu.be/Bh4k97j0n80

Iceland is not down with this. https://lookslikeyouneediceland.com/

Going all out, peak Art School for this one.

Brown Word in with an even more barebones approach than last time, and more serious (depressing?) too. I enjoyed this title however.

In with something depressing only if you let be.

I think I will miss this one. I have a nice melody that I a fond of, but I haven’t got anything down on tape yet...

In once more and with reggae again.....well sort of - it's in 6/4 time

Kicking myself as I should have dropped this into my entry -

https://www.samsung.com/se/audio-video/ ... cream/eng/

but I'd already submitted before I saw it

I would like to thank both Gizo and The Panna Cotta Army for their unwitting contributions to my song.

In with a 2/4 space song and some art. Toshiro has reviewed it as "cheery"!

crumpart wrote: ↑

Sun Jul 26, 2020 2:33 am

I would like to thank both Gizo and The Panna Cotta Army for their unwitting contributions to my song.

it's my pleasure