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Better check for rabies (Odd Or Irrational reviews)
Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2023 11:40 am
by Pigfarmer Jr
but it's probably just fleas.
Re: Better check for rabies (Odd Or Irrational reviews)
Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2023 11:42 am
by Pigfarmer Jr
Letters can be used to make words. Words can be used to make lines. Lines can be combined into a lyric. Your lyric goes here:
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Re: Better check for rabies (Odd Or Irrational reviews)
Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2023 5:32 am
by Pigfarmer Jr
Future Boy: Maybe just a bit too on the nose for my taste but I cannot complain that everything sounds solid. I think it's mostly that I'm in the mood to be antagonistic and there's just too many good vibes (between the nice melody and the sentiment in at least part of the lyric) for my state of mind. (BTW, you can put the lyric in the lyric thread: link above.)
Lady H: I'm not sure how you got away with rhyming irrational with irrational but it seems to work. I like the contrast in vocals between verses and chorusesses. And the counting/countdown bits are a tasty touch.
LYNKEN: I like those guitars at the beginning. The first two notes/strums reminds me of 'Indianapolis' by the Bottle Rockets which is one of their better songs, imo. There's an almost pop goodness to the melody, an almost sing along vibe, that isn't really in contrast to the guitars but is maybe a tasty combination that I wasn't expecting. (Listening back, that bass line has a lot to do with it.) I like this lyric quite a bit, really getting into the title/theme. This is probably my favorite of the fight after a second listen through.
Pigfarmer Jr: About someone(s) who will remain nameless.
Re: Better check for rabies (Odd Or Irrational reviews)
Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2023 8:59 pm
by Lunkhead
LYNKEN wins!
Re: Better check for rabies (Odd Or Irrational reviews)
Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2023 7:12 am
by private_ale
Wow! Thanks everyone! Something to cross off the bucket list.