heine - no offense intended, but I’m guessing the singer is possibly a non-native English speaker? The pronunciation of “object” like the verb, not the noun, is kind of distracting throughout, because I cannot think of any possible context in which the verb form of the word could make sense here. (...

Immovable Object - reviews by heine A strong fight, not one song I don't like! Add : Oh, a waltz! I like the Neil Young-ish distorted guitar sparks. This is well executed and very well sung. All sounds are carefully chosen. Dead Ambassadors : Right-into-your face-music. Cool! Maybe a bit short, but ...

Just submitted a raw something.
It's the first song with my new and very cheap Les Paul copy.
Metrically quite a sloppy breakup.

Immovable Object by heine How, how would you describe our relationship, our mutual trip? Our journey was once so much fun. But the feeling's gone. - Where is it gone? The years used to slip so quickly away. Now an hour with you seems like a whole day. I don't know where we lost our track, got stuck ...

Late song added from ... Carol Cleveland Sings! Belated Review... Carol Cleveland Sings : This is very well recorded! I did not expect the change; after half of the song it changed tempo and turned into a funny Sparks kind-a tune! Even vocals-wise! So, I have to vote! (Oh, I wished that it was just...

Heuristics Inc. : The longest song in this fight? Synth pop. A little doughy but okay. I would prefer to hear this one in a smaller fight. ... Let me just point out that my song is 4:20, hardly a long prog track? For some reason, though, it appears that with some players the SoundForge mp3 conversi...

A Grand Parade reviews by heine A great battle in terms of quantity and quality! It seems everybody did an extra mile to submit a good production. Due to the sheer mass of songs there will be only some short initial thoughts I had while listening. Abjure! : A uke-song. Nice vocals harmonies. Well d...

Lunkhead wrote: ↑

Tue Mar 26, 2024 10:06 am

Heine's entry has been fixed.

Yeah! Thanks for caring, everyone!

Chumpy wrote: ↑

Mon Mar 18, 2024 11:57 am

Heine wrote: ↑

Wed Jan 24, 2024 2:28 pm

So, please wake me up again when #1000 comes around.

Wake up! Time to write!

Yeah, thanks! Already submitted!

Submitted.
I always wanted to do something that is a little bit Lou Reed-ish. And here it is!

A Grand Parade by heine Watch out! There's a grand parade Can't you hear the drums? Watch out! There's a grand parade Don't you hear how the brass hums? You'd better be home before nightfall Or you will never come back at all Watch out! There's a grand parade They try to steal your heart Watch out!...

Heine One of my favorite Robin Hitchcock songs is "My Wife and my Dead Wife." You should listen to it if you're not familiar. Thanks for your kind review! And thanks a lot for introducing me to Mr. Hitchcock! (At first I thought his voice belonged to a britisch indie band called Garlic [h...

heine : I hear a lot of traditional Vietnamese and Thai bamboo flute jams, often soaked in rich plate reverb, in restaurants. Sometimes they mix it up with Western music, and this is kinda what this sounds like ... for the first 17 seconds. No bamboo flute, it's supposed to be the spherical sound o...

I think I am going into an SF!-hibernation to pimp my social life and family and things...
So, please wake me up again when #1000 comes around.
(What about a little reminder email from fightmaster to everybody?)

Just posted my own little Lady D'Arbanville...

Wake Up Again by heine Stop sleeping, the sun is shining You look so pale today I couldn't sleep because you were whining But now there is no sound, no word you say Sleep is so close to death Wake up again, get up now Sleep is so close to death Wake up again, get up now Stop sleeping, here's some c...

Strong fight! Seems here are the first reviews... Add : The writing isn't that bad that it needs a lot of gimmicks and effects. A proper chorus with a straight beat (4 to the floor) would have been nice. It is firmly recorded and mixed. Basement Bunburies : You found your own niche. Always a pleasa...

Each and every song I post, I ask myself how heavy and annoying my accent is. I try my best to avoid/reduce it. But I can't listen with native's ears. So - if not for Songfight! - I prefer writing and singing in German language. I don't find it annoying at all. It is a trait that distinguishes you ...

Suprise, Arizona as Double Me Double U Lyrics by CynicalMonkey Packed up my last box, taped, labelled and sealed Saved time for one last look, take a break from what's real Drove away, saw you wave in my rear view Wish I could stay; I’d give it all to be near you Our entwined rivers no longer run c...

... When you sing close to the mic it accentuates all the low harmonics in your voice and gives it a deeper tint, which is great but I think works against you in this particular "summer fun" kind of song. So sing a few inches back from the mic, change the key so you can sing it in a highe...

Pigfarmer Jr : A short punk rock song. I like most parts musically. ... Thanks. I wonder which parts you didn't like musically. In general I like the genre very much. In this particular song I like the verses most. The chorus is good, it grows on me. The bridge inbetween could be a bit stronger. Bu...

No idea for lyrics this time... I have no real musical talent beyond occasionally stringing together some nice sounding words. Happy to give it a try if you have a basic melody in place, no obligation to use/like/do anything with what I come up with. You can find me lurking around discord ;) Thanks...