Hope You're Okay
- Plat
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Hope You're Okay
Hope U R O K
by The Cow Exchange
V1
A, L C..... U R not R N M E
R T's N E Z from U R X D C U's
M E lost a friend..... 2 O P M
N we think it's time that U face D truth
PRE-CHORUS
2 D fence, make M Ns, start all over again (x2)
CHORUS
we're feeling M T with U gone
it's been an I C path 2 cross
we've all been many things
I hope U R O K
don't... get ... S T with me
quit X S D V N C
U mean so much 2 me
I hope U R O K
V2
A L C.... U give me E B G B's
N D D feels F L from U R last surprise
M R U's 2 look up 2 U now no 1 knows just what to do
it's time U C's this folly, open up U R I's
(Chorus)
OUTRO
start N U in U R R K D N ways
no 1 likes B N left behind
N take some shortcuts, I don't mind
please don't live an abbreviated life
by The Cow Exchange
V1
A, L C..... U R not R N M E
R T's N E Z from U R X D C U's
M E lost a friend..... 2 O P M
N we think it's time that U face D truth
PRE-CHORUS
2 D fence, make M Ns, start all over again (x2)
CHORUS
we're feeling M T with U gone
it's been an I C path 2 cross
we've all been many things
I hope U R O K
don't... get ... S T with me
quit X S D V N C
U mean so much 2 me
I hope U R O K
V2
A L C.... U give me E B G B's
N D D feels F L from U R last surprise
M R U's 2 look up 2 U now no 1 knows just what to do
it's time U C's this folly, open up U R I's
(Chorus)
OUTRO
start N U in U R R K D N ways
no 1 likes B N left behind
N take some shortcuts, I don't mind
please don't live an abbreviated life
Poor June
lyrics and music: me
someday we'll look back on all that we've done
and realize
(and realize it's just)
something we can't hold onto anymore
it's not something
(it's not something)
that i want to remember
to make it all apparent
i hope you're okay
with all i've said
and all i've done
it's not represented
in happiness
it's not what you want
please look back at me
as somethin' slowly passed
a face that meant
(everything to you)
to you, to not see it go away
not let it go
(not let go of)
this thing we had for such a long long time
it makes me feel
(it makes me feel as if)
nothing will change for the better
and nothing will...
i hope you're okay
with all i've said
and all i've done
it's not represented
in happiness
it's not what you want
it's not what you want(4x) it's not
lyrics and music: me
someday we'll look back on all that we've done
and realize
(and realize it's just)
something we can't hold onto anymore
it's not something
(it's not something)
that i want to remember
to make it all apparent
i hope you're okay
with all i've said
and all i've done
it's not represented
in happiness
it's not what you want
please look back at me
as somethin' slowly passed
a face that meant
(everything to you)
to you, to not see it go away
not let it go
(not let go of)
this thing we had for such a long long time
it makes me feel
(it makes me feel as if)
nothing will change for the better
and nothing will...
i hope you're okay
with all i've said
and all i've done
it's not represented
in happiness
it's not what you want
it's not what you want(4x) it's not
"You haven't been really bad in a long time." - jim of seattle
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- jack
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Hope You're Ok
words by jack
music by Hedefine
2 years to the day
hope you're ok
probably don't think about it much anyway
we made our peace and we moved along
but every now and then i hear that song
and i go back
to a different time
and a different place
when i wouldn't have to wonder
if you were ok
or if you were gonna call today
my partner of crime
you gave me the rhyme
don't need a reason
conventional wisdom
just seemed like treason
then you called me
just before christmas day
well it made me want to cry
but i have to say
that it made me smile
just to know
just to know
you're ok
words by jack
music by Hedefine
2 years to the day
hope you're ok
probably don't think about it much anyway
we made our peace and we moved along
but every now and then i hear that song
and i go back
to a different time
and a different place
when i wouldn't have to wonder
if you were ok
or if you were gonna call today
my partner of crime
you gave me the rhyme
don't need a reason
conventional wisdom
just seemed like treason
then you called me
just before christmas day
well it made me want to cry
but i have to say
that it made me smile
just to know
just to know
you're ok
Hi!
- drë
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<B>Hope you're ok</b>
Children of the devil
music: Dre
lyrics+rapping: Denyer
hope that you are okay
Even if I shot you in your face
I hope you're okay
You were in the wrong place
hope you're okay
Even if I shot you in your head
Even if I shot you in your head
Well I'm really sorry that I shot you in the face
But you should have let me get to second second base
My old P.E. teacher was a guy named Rob Mase
And he told me how to run better in a swimming race
But I misunderstood him and I thought he said go get a gun
So I did get a gun and then I went and got a gun
Now I've got one and I want to shoot my mother's son
Aa ee aa, blam!
You see that tree over there? (where?)
I think he's making fun of my hair (hair?)
Shut up bitch, or I'll turn you into furniture
Look at me (aah), I'm burnin' ya (damn)
I gotta use a pen when I write (right?)
I gotta use my teeth when I bite (right?)
I sleep in a bed at night (right?)
When I wanna drink I drink Sprite (wrong)
The police came and hit me with their guns (that's the sound of da police)
I'd like to breathe air but I haven't got lungs
I changed my name legally to
Hey check it out, I've got my own flag
When I'm riding and I'm sliding and I'm hiding and I'm striding
I'm abiding by the rules of the game
But I'm playing cricket with the rules of baseball
But who cares, it's all the same
hope that you are okay
Even though I shot you in the face
Even though I shot you in the head
Sorry 'bout your face and I hope you're okay
I was tryin' to shoot that man from San Jose (Hey!)
Illegal business control America
I live with a girl named Erica
She always leaves the toilet seat down, what a clown
But I keep my fish in there when she's not around
I live in a pinapple under the sea
I'm always getting got by the LAPD
Hey check it out, I got Eminem on the track
"Guess who's back with a brand new rap"
Oh wait, we've all been tricked
Winona Ryder just stole the music
Ahh here it is, thank God for that
The beats been slapped back on the fat track
Did you know that I'm really Kelly Clarkson?
I wax my car everyday to keep sparklin'
David Parkin was a coach for years and years
He wasn't very good but he had a big beard
I seen Goodfellas twice in one day
And I seen Fat Albert, hey hey hey
I'm not saying I'm number one, oh I'm sorry, I lied
I'm number one in the KFC line
'Cause I gets mine fool, I'm like that
When I ride my bike I ride my bike on a bike track
hope you're okay
Even if I shot you in the face
hope you're okay
Oh and I shot your cat too. he's dead
Children of the devil
music: Dre
lyrics+rapping: Denyer
hope that you are okay
Even if I shot you in your face
I hope you're okay
You were in the wrong place
hope you're okay
Even if I shot you in your head
Even if I shot you in your head
Well I'm really sorry that I shot you in the face
But you should have let me get to second second base
My old P.E. teacher was a guy named Rob Mase
And he told me how to run better in a swimming race
But I misunderstood him and I thought he said go get a gun
So I did get a gun and then I went and got a gun
Now I've got one and I want to shoot my mother's son
Aa ee aa, blam!
You see that tree over there? (where?)
I think he's making fun of my hair (hair?)
Shut up bitch, or I'll turn you into furniture
Look at me (aah), I'm burnin' ya (damn)
I gotta use a pen when I write (right?)
I gotta use my teeth when I bite (right?)
I sleep in a bed at night (right?)
When I wanna drink I drink Sprite (wrong)
The police came and hit me with their guns (that's the sound of da police)
I'd like to breathe air but I haven't got lungs
I changed my name legally to
Hey check it out, I've got my own flag
When I'm riding and I'm sliding and I'm hiding and I'm striding
I'm abiding by the rules of the game
But I'm playing cricket with the rules of baseball
But who cares, it's all the same
hope that you are okay
Even though I shot you in the face
Even though I shot you in the head
Sorry 'bout your face and I hope you're okay
I was tryin' to shoot that man from San Jose (Hey!)
Illegal business control America
I live with a girl named Erica
She always leaves the toilet seat down, what a clown
But I keep my fish in there when she's not around
I live in a pinapple under the sea
I'm always getting got by the LAPD
Hey check it out, I got Eminem on the track
"Guess who's back with a brand new rap"
Oh wait, we've all been tricked
Winona Ryder just stole the music
Ahh here it is, thank God for that
The beats been slapped back on the fat track
Did you know that I'm really Kelly Clarkson?
I wax my car everyday to keep sparklin'
David Parkin was a coach for years and years
He wasn't very good but he had a big beard
I seen Goodfellas twice in one day
And I seen Fat Albert, hey hey hey
I'm not saying I'm number one, oh I'm sorry, I lied
I'm number one in the KFC line
'Cause I gets mine fool, I'm like that
When I ride my bike I ride my bike on a bike track
hope you're okay
Even if I shot you in the face
hope you're okay
Oh and I shot your cat too. he's dead
So, I did this nasty thing. I accidentally wrote the song to the title, "Hope you're alright," instead of "okay." So, it's submitted, and will likely be at a great disadvantage for this reason, but ah...here are the lyrics, anyway
I can't believe it's done
What we had was so right
You were the one
Who I held in my arms last night
This mornin' when we woke
You tried to eat my brains
Now, I know that you were broken
And that I should not complain
But you tried to eat my mind
You darinly deigned to dine
Chorus:
I hope you're alright, cause you're already dead
I love you despite all the holes in your head
This flesh rotting blight has ruined your legs
I'd go fly a kite, but you're a fucking zombie
My heart really bled
When you joined the ranks
Of the walking undead
Had to stab you with a shank
Couldn't take it anymore
I cried from the strain
Of bludgeoning your
Reanimated remains
It wasn't meant to be
Zombies just aren't for me
Repeat chorus
Weird bridgey thing with an Army of Darkness soundclip
Scat part
Repeat chorus
But I really do hope you're okay.
So yeah...I shamelessly added that last line in to tie the song into the title after I realized my blunder, because I didn't have time to rewrite and rerecord, as it was due in 5 hours and I had to go to sleep so I could wake up for work.
I can't believe it's done
What we had was so right
You were the one
Who I held in my arms last night
This mornin' when we woke
You tried to eat my brains
Now, I know that you were broken
And that I should not complain
But you tried to eat my mind
You darinly deigned to dine
Chorus:
I hope you're alright, cause you're already dead
I love you despite all the holes in your head
This flesh rotting blight has ruined your legs
I'd go fly a kite, but you're a fucking zombie
My heart really bled
When you joined the ranks
Of the walking undead
Had to stab you with a shank
Couldn't take it anymore
I cried from the strain
Of bludgeoning your
Reanimated remains
It wasn't meant to be
Zombies just aren't for me
Repeat chorus
Weird bridgey thing with an Army of Darkness soundclip
Scat part
Repeat chorus
But I really do hope you're okay.
So yeah...I shamelessly added that last line in to tie the song into the title after I realized my blunder, because I didn't have time to rewrite and rerecord, as it was due in 5 hours and I had to go to sleep so I could wake up for work.
Re: Hope You're Okay
Heh, I really like your approach to the song.Plat wrote:Hope U R O K
by The Cow Exchange
V1
A, L C..... U R not R N M E
R T's N E Z from U R X D C U's
M E lost a friend..... 2 O P M
N we think it's time that U face D truth
PRE-CHORUS
2 D fence, make M Ns, start all over again (x2)
CHORUS
we're feeling M T with U gone
it's been an I C path 2 cross
we've all been many things
I hope U R O K
don't... get ... S T with me
quit X S D V N C
U mean so much 2 me
I hope U R O K
V2
A L C.... U give me E B G B's
N D D feels F L from U R last surprise
M R U's 2 look up 2 U now no 1 knows just what to do
it's time U C's this folly, open up U R I's
(Chorus)
OUTRO
start N U in U R R K D N ways
no 1 likes B N left behind
N take some shortcuts, I don't mind
please don't live an abbreviated life
- Sober
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It was a long time since we'd been apart
And time can heal the wounds
That pierce and rend your heart
But time can't quench the thirst for love
For better, for worse
You said you're sorry
The last time we spoke
But how does that make things right?
When all that I wanted was you?
But you were strong and turned
Away from me for good
That was long ago
The rain has turned to snow
I thought of you today
I hope you're okay
Love can be funny, it fades and it grows
It makes a wise man blind
And deaf men hear a song
A tune which lovers know
We sing it right....
And time can heal the wounds
That pierce and rend your heart
But time can't quench the thirst for love
For better, for worse
You said you're sorry
The last time we spoke
But how does that make things right?
When all that I wanted was you?
But you were strong and turned
Away from me for good
That was long ago
The rain has turned to snow
I thought of you today
I hope you're okay
Love can be funny, it fades and it grows
It makes a wise man blind
And deaf men hear a song
A tune which lovers know
We sing it right....
- c.layne
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hope you're ok
i don't remember waking up being so hard
it's becoming more of a pain every day
i can't even count the times i wish
i could stay in bed
it's like a war between my body and my brain
sometimes i pray that they will just
make a magic pill
so i can go unconcious throughout the day
going through the grind would seem more
like a gentle rub
things are so much easier
when you don't have to think
i would love to blame this on
somebody else
even though it's nobody's fault
but my own
i'm you're not here
to see me fall apart
but i hope you're ok
even if i'm not
even though i'm here
it feels like i'm somewhere else
my words aren't very clear
my sentences all melt
i calmly sit and wait
for night to end the day
and i repeat to myself
"i hope that you're ok"
i don't remember waking up being so hard
it's becoming more of a pain every day
i can't even count the times i wish
i could stay in bed
it's like a war between my body and my brain
sometimes i pray that they will just
make a magic pill
so i can go unconcious throughout the day
going through the grind would seem more
like a gentle rub
things are so much easier
when you don't have to think
i would love to blame this on
somebody else
even though it's nobody's fault
but my own
i'm you're not here
to see me fall apart
but i hope you're ok
even if i'm not
even though i'm here
it feels like i'm somewhere else
my words aren't very clear
my sentences all melt
i calmly sit and wait
for night to end the day
and i repeat to myself
"i hope that you're ok"
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It pays to pretend we're talking like friends
Who have grown and can say anything
Working towards an ends Where advice is taken
Its no match for experiencing
I didn't say anything about your mistakes
I didn't say anything
I didn't say anything about your mistake
I didn't say anything worth listening
but I hope your Okay
You'll do it again making amends
to those who'll forgive you always
We'll give counsel and send
supportive feelings, while we countdown the days
Who have grown and can say anything
Working towards an ends Where advice is taken
Its no match for experiencing
I didn't say anything about your mistakes
I didn't say anything
I didn't say anything about your mistake
I didn't say anything worth listening
but I hope your Okay
You'll do it again making amends
to those who'll forgive you always
We'll give counsel and send
supportive feelings, while we countdown the days
- Caravan Ray
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Hope You're Okay - deshead
(Some back story)
I knew a girl from Athens, Georgia, back when I was free.
She'd sing her songs and carry me away.
She liked the homemade wine and dancing in the field,
she was happy in her shiny way
Back, where there's glitter on the highway
the fire hardly left a thing at all.
Kate, oh God I hope you're O.K.
The rusted tin roof doesn't ever have to fall.
On 80 acres back up near the Jackson Country line,
wearin' next to nothing, she unfurled.
In an old shack with a tin roof, everybody gettin' down.
In her big old car we roamed around the world
I spent weekends looking for the road-side faded sign.
But the only thing still standing is the frame
Back, where there's glitter on the highway
the fire hardly left a thing at all.
Kate, oh God I hope you're O.K.
The rusted tin roof doesn't ever have to fall.
The rusted tin roof doesn't ever have to fall.
The rusted tin roof doesn't ever have to fall.
The rusted tin roof doesn't ever have to fall.
(Some back story)
I knew a girl from Athens, Georgia, back when I was free.
She'd sing her songs and carry me away.
She liked the homemade wine and dancing in the field,
she was happy in her shiny way
Back, where there's glitter on the highway
the fire hardly left a thing at all.
Kate, oh God I hope you're O.K.
The rusted tin roof doesn't ever have to fall.
On 80 acres back up near the Jackson Country line,
wearin' next to nothing, she unfurled.
In an old shack with a tin roof, everybody gettin' down.
In her big old car we roamed around the world
I spent weekends looking for the road-side faded sign.
But the only thing still standing is the frame
Back, where there's glitter on the highway
the fire hardly left a thing at all.
Kate, oh God I hope you're O.K.
The rusted tin roof doesn't ever have to fall.
The rusted tin roof doesn't ever have to fall.
The rusted tin roof doesn't ever have to fall.
The rusted tin roof doesn't ever have to fall.
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Hope Youre Okay -
Me$$iah
I know you were treated so bad
Paid up, fucked up, washed up and had
Left in a corner nursing your soul
paid the price of livin rock n roll
Never out of things to do in New York
in Paris, France or doin the Hollywood walk
pushed to the limits then pushed a little more
you wish yous aske dfor more before they pushed you out the door
But I hope youre Okay
You know Ive sometimes seen you round
but I aint got the courage that I once found
Id like to ask how your doin these days
but we both know i cant - no way
I still think 'bout how it could have been
That it was good when it was you an me
we had songs, sun, sex and cigarettes
but like all good things it ends
But I hope youre Okay
Me$$iah
I know you were treated so bad
Paid up, fucked up, washed up and had
Left in a corner nursing your soul
paid the price of livin rock n roll
Never out of things to do in New York
in Paris, France or doin the Hollywood walk
pushed to the limits then pushed a little more
you wish yous aske dfor more before they pushed you out the door
But I hope youre Okay
You know Ive sometimes seen you round
but I aint got the courage that I once found
Id like to ask how your doin these days
but we both know i cant - no way
I still think 'bout how it could have been
That it was good when it was you an me
we had songs, sun, sex and cigarettes
but like all good things it ends
But I hope youre Okay
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"I hope you're okay with the games that we play - this must stay our secret, what would grandmother say?
Treat me like dirt, make sure that it hurts, Kick over my sandcastle cos I'm such a squirt
And you hope and pray that I'm Okay
Don't worry baby, because I like it that way - I hope you're Okay
I do have a clue what we can do To stop you feeling guilty as you beat me black & blue
You can break both my legs and Leave me for dead, just Say 'hope that you are okay' as you kick in my head
And you hope and pray that I'm Okay
Don't worry baby, because I like it that way - I hope you're Okay"
Treat me like dirt, make sure that it hurts, Kick over my sandcastle cos I'm such a squirt
And you hope and pray that I'm Okay
Don't worry baby, because I like it that way - I hope you're Okay
I do have a clue what we can do To stop you feeling guilty as you beat me black & blue
You can break both my legs and Leave me for dead, just Say 'hope that you are okay' as you kick in my head
And you hope and pray that I'm Okay
Don't worry baby, because I like it that way - I hope you're Okay"