Nur Ein XIX Round Zero "For Your Consideration"

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Nur Ein XIX Round Zero "For Your Consideration"

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For Your Consideration
Pigfarmer Jr

Acoustic guitar: Yairi six string acoustic
Electric guitar: Modern Player Fender Telecaster
Acoustic piano: Grand Piano samples
Synth: Union VSTi


Consider the smile of sweet innocence
Consider the rainy day
Consider the lies we tell ourselves
To make the fear go away

I will smile for you
I will lie for you
I will die for you
Just bring me home

Consider the tears you wouldn't let fall
Consider the times that you prayed
Consider the time we spent on regret
The choices we all have made

I will smile for you
I will lie for you
I will die for you
Just bring me home

Raindrops on the window
Raindrops against the wall
Raindrops all around us
Carry us away from it all

I will smile for you
I will lie for you
I will fight for you
I will cry for you
I will die for you
Just bring me home
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For Your Consideration - Frankie Big Face

Dear Guinness Executive Director
I am writing with a story
For your consideration
I’m setting a new world record
Without even trying!
Here’s a brief summation:

I jumped through a million hoops
Bent right over backwards
Dug myself the deepest hole
Then climbed myself right out
Made all the greatest moves
And uttered all the right words
Did more than anyone else
But I still didn’t get that girl!

Dear Ripley’s Believe It Or Not!
I am writing with a tale
Of pure imagination
I was floating on the highest of clouds
But I fell to the earth
And just kept going!

I crashed through the outer crust
Directly through the mantle
Nonstop through the core
And out the other side
Walked from Australia
Straight back to Philadelphia
Did more than anyone else
But I still didn’t get that girl!
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For Your Consideration
Hjólhýsi Geisli

For your consideration
Here’s a little presentation
A simple demonstration of just what you need
Give it your contemplation or cross-examination
And I think that you will think of taking me into consideration

I play acoustic guitar
I play electric guitar
Got electrical car
I'll be a superstar
I spend Kuwati Dinar
I smoke the Devil’s cigar
How am I doing so far?

...and in continuation
I’ve had all my vaccinations
Allergic to crustaceans
and when I'm cut I bleed
I got an odd fixation with astro-navigation
I hope this information brings me into consideration

You're considerate with every move
With your kindness I find my groove
With gentle words that soothe and prove that we can still improve
This world where hearts grow cold
Our love will still unfold

Do do do do do do
Do do do do do do
Do do do do do do
Do do do do do do
Do do

My dreams are high in the sky
We’ll reach them if we try
Every strum every chord
I'll make you dance, make you soar
So don’t just pass me by
Give me a chance to shine
I'll make you shine like you’ve not shined before

For your consideration
Here is the simple declaration of love and dedication I offer you
It’s my consideration you’re the personification
Of everything I need - remember me...for your consideration
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In but it's not my best work so hoping that we don't hit the threshold for eliminations in Round Zero. Limited for time this weekend so its essentially just a verse and chorus and that's your lot. Had the idea of starting with a piano motif that gradually fades out as the same loop on synth fades up and absorbs it, and that transition from real to fake got me thinking about AI and specifically how much Hollywood seems to be making overtures towards embracing it.

For Your Consideration by The Lowest Bitter
don't take me for a fool
data scraped my every waking thought
there's nothing new at all
just selling me what I already bought
I've seen this film before
but the remake left me sickened and appalled

for your consideration,
another hallucination,
it's another CG nightmare
but the crowd gives an ovation
I despair of crying out
"there's nothing there!"
to an audience that doesn't care
oh god, I'm telling you there's nothing there

there's nothing there at all
don't take me for a fool.
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For Your Consideration by Vom Vorton

Challenge element - acoustic and electric piano.

for your consideration
the complete disintegration of the heart
why does the body keep moving
when it’s missing such a fundamental part?

why is he walking around?
how can she hold a conversation?
how can they eat and sleep
amid this total devastation
for your consideration
the complete obliteration of the heart

now for your information
there's a new communication on the streets
before you enter conversation
with a stranger ask for proof
to ensure their heart still beats

it seems surreal
it seems outrageous
we can’t rule out
that this might be contagious
for your consideration
the complete annihilation of the heart

now we’ve fixed the situation
see the regeneration taking place?
as the blood begins to flow
you see the smile returning to the face

the repair is complete
we’ve reversed the demolition
but it’s only fair to warn you
it’s a recurring condition
for your consideration
the rehabilitation of the heart
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# For your consideration - Starfinger

I am a good boy
I think you know that
But some times we don't see
Eye to eye

Like for example
My boring dinner
I'm eating kibble while
You're having pie

And so I offer you
This reminder
Of my boundless love

i offer it and so much more
in lieu of a thank you card

I present for
Your consideration
This treasure that I dug up
In the yard

i get confused when you are
screaming and yelling
i only know a handful of
your words

and by the way i left it there on purpose
why are you picking up all of my turds?

you are the alpha dog
even though you are a man
you are god and I am your
lowly vessel
your lowly vessel
you are my shining star

and i present for your
consideration
this rodent i chewed up in the car
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For Your Consideration by chewmeupspitmeout

You lost yourself
And fell down a rabbit hole
Gave up the ghost
Lost all sense of reason
Whatever conforms
To your agenda
Delusion embraced
All sense surrendered

Its not your fault
That you can't think critically
No-one ever taught you how
So ignore all mitigations
Presented for your consideration

Desperate to feel
Like you have some agency
To feel special
To know the real truth
You feel powerless
In a powerful world
Take comfort from
Your secret knowledge

Its not your fault
You can't think critically
No-one ever taught you how
So ignore all mitigations
Presented for your consideration
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Since I write silly Minecraft songs, this title was a little difficult to find an angle for. Then I decided to write a song as a compliant to Hypixel staff about how their updates generally don't seem to give the community what they ask for & how they just don't communicate in general.

A quickly thrown together music video if that helps. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-lFft_Shoek

(Verse 1)
You promised a grind, we waited a year,
We got a hotel, it took us a week.
You say you checked in, but it don't seem so,
Do you actually hear us when we speak?
We fight about nicks, and overlay use,
We want Bed Wars duels, we got a doorman,
Some people want ranked, a reason to grind,
And all we get is a rippoff Batman,

(Pre-Chorus)
For your consideration,
I'd like to make a tiny suggestion,
One for better communication,
More community participation,

(Chorus)
You missed the biggest complaints,
So now it's time to connect,
We point out problems daily,
When the answers aren't perfect,
The problem is just ignored,
And this has a side effect,
Seen in the forum and game,
Of never-ending conflict,

(Verse 2)
We will give feedback, that garners up votes,
Not in the update, no longer a shock,
We're always ignored, it's become a meme,
Don't even respect us enough to talk,
If there's a question, or legit concern,
We'll get no answer, at least not from you,
You dip and dodge us, like we're 2 K stars,
And we just joined when it's your prestige queue,

(Chorus)
You missed the biggest complaints,
So now it's time to connect,
We point out problems daily,
When the answers aren't perfect,
The problem is just ignored,
And this has a side effect,
Seen in the forum and game,
Of never-ending conflict,

(Outro)
We want new achievements and challenges,
To spend less time on the ticket machine,
A little less spam in our in game chat,
New rotational items would be keen,
We want less team griefing in castles now,

For your consideration,
For your consideration,
For your consideration.
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14hundredjoules - For Your Consideration

this is a note you may never receive
this is a note you may never read
but if you have
but if you are
this is for your consideration

what follows here is truth
distorted through memory
tinted with familiarity
faded with time

maybe it's no use
it's no objective view
but you can stand where I stood
and watch the decline

maybe we'll see it through
and some day make amends
I don't know where this story ends
but it began with you

I had a choice to make
I chose you
I chose patience
this is for your consideration

this is a note you may never receive
this is a note you may never read
but if you have
but if you are
this is for your consideration

challenge approach:
Used both acoustic piano and e-piano

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Spoiler
This song is meant to be an introduction to other songs to be written and released as part of a concept album about a failing marriage, directed toward the child born of that marriage, as a way of explaining how everything ended up the way it did.
I am definitely too square for how experimental this is, but I can imagine that if I was in the right state of mind, the section starting at 2:20 might transport me to another dimension - jeffhenderson
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Spoiler
This guy put a flyer through my letterbox last week asking me, an immigrant, to vote for him in the local council elections. Yeah nah M8.

In the past few years there have been rising incidents of accommodation earmarked for asylum seekers being set on fire by those who have fallen prey to the rhetoric of the right wing, with politicians like yer man up there fuelling the flames, so to speak. Plus some riots.

Woodbrook House is an estate house in my county, believed to be one of the main places where Jonathan Swift wrote Gulliver's Travels.

This song uses an acoustic piano I sampled late last year, an acoustic piano setting on a digital piano, and an electric piano.
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For Your Consideration
Hot Pink Halo

***

On the steps of Woodbrook House
They come a-knocking
Seeking kindness, seeking safety
Seeking shelter from the storm
Lives upturned, the future spurned

You want my consideration
But for that to be an option
You would need to make some changes
To your thoughts
Your actions lead to anger
And that anger isn't welcome
Burning buildings aren't the answer
It breaks my heart to see
Your poison run its course
So please take that on board
For your consideration

Swiftly go the Lilliputians
When we come looking for
A little help
Stranded on shores, tied up in conflict
Faced with minds that are so small

You want my consideration
But for that to be an option
You would need to make some changes
To your thoughts
Your actions lead to anger
And that anger isn't welcome
Spreading hate is not the answer
It breaks my heart to see
Your poison run its course
So please take that on board
For your consideration

Is it “we ourselves” or “ourselves alone”
Together we’re better
Or we’ll be forever undone
By bad decisions leading to a place
So dark you can’t return

You want my consideration
But for that to be an option
You would need to make some changes
To your thoughts
Your actions lead to anger
And that anger isn't welcome
Slamming doors is not the answer
It breaks my heart to see
Your poison run its course
So please take that on board
For your consideration
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Liner notes:
Spoiler
This song is based on a true story! Two weeks ago, students at Portland State, along with other community members, occupied the library on campus with barricades and tents. Out of curiosity, I visited the site multiple times, and every time I visited, people were being fed and taken care of. Now that it's all over, the media has been reporting only on the instances of property damage, so this song came pouring out of me, to remind myself and others of the profundity of caring for one's community.
***
For Your Consideration
Heid

***

For your consideration
Best Lentil Curry of the Year,
I present the lentils granted by the people
at the library of Refaat Alareer

They were seasoned well,
and they warmed me up inside
They were served on the steps
that the students occupied
They were made in the honor
of a poet who died,
and they stood opposed to genocide

For your consideration
Best Lentil Curry in our Town,
I present the lentils granted by the people
on the day before the cops came round

They were made with love,
served by people having fun
And the laughter of the cooks
rang out louder than the guns
And they'd feed you,
whether you'd stay and fight the cops, or whether you'd run,
for the food was there for everyone

For your consideration
Best Lentil Curry of the Year,
I present the lentils granted by the people
at the library of Refaat Alareer

[instrumental]

For your consideration
Best lentil curry that you'll see,
for no one cooks things better than the people
when they're cooking in a place that's free...
Even temporarily.
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glennny

challenge element:
Acoustic guitars vs electric guitars
acoustic drums vs. electric drums


For Your Consideration
Although we have reached the end
I intend to see this through
You may try to make amends
Still, I intend to murder you

For your consideration
With your last breath
You may choose your death

I’m not one to play the fool
It isn't cool to lie to me
Despite your wit, there’s just one rule
It’s not a duel, only my victory

For your consideration
The end of your life
Has arrived tonight

I can shoot you in the head
I can stab you in the heart
There’s a hole outside
To bury you alive
You can suffocate in the dark

I can make you high
With a lethal dose
There’s a bridge close by
We can see if you can fly
So tell me what’s your vote?

For your consideration
With your last breath
You may choose your death

For your consideration
The end of your life
Has arrived tonight
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Cavedwellers

challenge:
Glen's Rickenbacker Electric 12-string vs. Truth's Acoustic 12-string
acoustic drums vs. electric drums


For Your Consideration

Verse One
Well I’m about 5’7”
But I got all my hair
I pull down six figures
And I’m climate-aware
And if you’d like to
Meet, meet
Well I invite you
To meet, meet

Pre Chorus
Before you swipe left
And leave me bereft
My cards are on the table
I’m willing and able

Chorus
Well I’m not here
Just to rattle the bones
it’s just coffee
not a weekend alone

And I’m not here
On extended vacation
I'm just here
For your consideration

Verse Two
So many witnesses I’ve beaten up
When put under oath
I spent a long time reading up
On personal growth
And if you’d like to
Meet meet
Well I invite you
To meet meet

Pre Chorus
Before you swipe left
And leave me bereft
My cards are on the table
I’m willing and able

Chorus
Well I’m not here
Just to rattle the bones
it’s just coffee
not a weekend alone

And I’m not here
On extended vacation
I'm just here
For your consideration

Bridge
We can jog down the silver strand
Hand in hand
But it’s running away with me
Or fly to Puget Sound
Lost and found
After spending a day with me

Pre Chorus
Before you swipe left
And leave me bereft
My cards are on the table
I’m willing and able

Chorus
Well I’m not here
Just to rattle the bones
we don't need another
weekend alone

And I’m not here
On extended vacation
I'm just here
For your consideration

Well I’m not here
Just to rattle the bones
it’s just coffee
not a weekend alone

I’m sincere
With subtle variations
I’m just here
For your Consideration
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For Your Consideration by Kamakura

Here's a song for your consideration
Lots of words and lotsa information
That the world is flat is not disinformation
Join the club with loads of abrogation

Oh yeah that's the way things are
Oh yeah just a step too far
Oh yeah I ain't got the time
To pen lyrics with beauteous rhymes
Oh no
Oh no
Oh no

Here's a song for your consideration
Written with the cat's collaboration
Cups of coffee the only inspiration
No time for the usual vacillation

Oh yeah that's the way things are
Oh yeah just a step too far
Oh yeah I ain't got the time
To pen lyrics with beauteous rhymes
Oh no
Oh no
Oh no
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Balance Lost

It's not a day for major revelations
I got too much to do
Fax it in for your consideration
But you already knew what I'll say

You said it was a metaphor
You never warned again
You said it was a metaphor
You said it was a metaphor

Dawn came up fast behind the station
I walked back along the tracks
30 minutes left in isolation
You never looked between the cracks until they fall

You said it was a metaphor
You never warned again
You said it was a metaphor
You said it was a metaphor

You never gave another thought
You left the liquid out on the asphalt
You said it was a metaphor
You said it was a metaphor
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For Your Consideration - Brown Word and the Big Whine

For your consideration on this musical occasion
the thoughts at 4am of a lady with a guitar
this is just a little ditty for the big and dirty city
a million miles an hour stop - pick a couple tunes

it's just our jubilation and and our collected up elation
we're gonna make it out alive!

for your consideration
as we drive this crazy world around the sun


I was born solid state cut my teeth on a record player
and I'ma rock a geetar like a fuckin' pussy riot
the six string machine kills fascists, can't buy us if we become priceless
All we got is our own hide - or maybe not

and if it's either here or there then buddy it's probably everywhere
break your back or lay on it, they'll screw you either way

for your consideration
the overthrow of all our illegitimate assumptions


for your consideration just a bit of recreation
this spare experiment in the form of a woman and guitar
well this was just a little ditty from the big and dirty city
just give me one thing that I can hold onto

flying through the cosmos on a rock that something stuck to once and grew....
we're just whizzing thru the cosmos on a rock that something stuck to once and grew...
hurtling thru the cosmos on a rock that something stuck to once and grew...
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For Your Consideration
The Ujn Corporation

Whispers drowned in static
The silence of the screams
A new world record, in the hum of the machine

The lies are automatic
Dreams lost to routines
For your consideration, another data stream

A chorus that grows louder, with another false refrain,
A new world record, in the ignorance we feign.

When the parasite is host and the code has been misread.
For your consideration, the truth is all but dead.

In the resonance of progress, a new world's dawn,
We're the ghosts in the circuitry, never moving on.
At the pinnacle of progress, a new dawn awaits,
We're the phantoms in the grid, opening the gates.

For your consideration, another data stream
For your consideration, another data stream
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Cybronica

This song is about the woes of dimishing yourself to meet others’ expectations or desires of you. In this case, I’m thinking my opera career, but it could just as easily apply to my short lived marriage. Take what you will from it.

The challenge is met with a piano and a synth


For your consideration
I offer on a plate the things that make
Me who I am: a bit glam
And something raw- unfiltered power full of awe
The very best of my creation
Sure to earn your ovation

Is this enough?
Is this enough?
Is this enough for you?
Did I display enough of me
To be enough for you?

For your consideration
I promise not to make the same mistake
It’s worth the wait- feel free to take
what you need of mine and leave behind
The parts you’ve deemed are unrefined
I won’t be caught with them I swear
I won’t again be unaware

Is this enough?
Is this enough?
Is this enough for you?
Did I disguise enough of me
To be enough for you?

For your consideration
I debased myself, erased myself
Diminished and effaced myself
To fit within your expectations
Curated a reputation
Cutting off the imperfections
You said won’t fit your direction

Is this enough?
Is this enough?
Is this enough for you?
Did I destroy enough of me
To be enough for you?
“It's like opera for toddlers or something.” -furrypedro
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Siebass
A New Player
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Joined: Wed Apr 05, 2023 11:38 am
Submitting as: Siebass
Pronouns: he/him

Re: Nur Ein XIX Round Zero "For Your Consideration"

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New to this whole thing; had 2.5 hours after putting the kids down tonight to do everything, so really rushed for me, almost a skirmish. Improvised lyrics, no time for flex pitch T_T, trying to read submission rules at 11:57 pm on Sunday and figure out how to bounce an MP3 instead of a wav file. I went to the forums just now, and it also seems that there is a not-stated-in-the-challenge rule to use the title as a lyric in the song? So this may be a short exercise for me; thought I just had to meet the challenge. Oh well, it was fun at least.

Acoustic guitar/Electric Guitar
Unplugged Bass through condenser mic/Plugged in Electric Bass
Piano/Synth(s)
Normal voice/robo voice

MechaKarp - For your consideration

Goodbye / Hello

Goodbye to this restless body
Goodbye it's clumsy and snotty

I just want to sleep at the edge of the world
when the sun explodes my heart I'll smile and burn

Goodbye to this restless body
Goodbye it's clumsy and snotty
I'll get something new

Hello to this metal body
Hello it's not clumsy, it's not snotty

I don't feel a thing if my heart explodes
I don't feel a thing if I fall into the sun
and I know, and I know it's more fun

Hello to this metal body, it fills me with thrlls
Why do I feel the sudden urge to kill?
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Lunkhead
You're No Good
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Joined: Sat Sep 25, 2004 12:14 pm
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Re: Nur Ein XIX Round Zero "For Your Consideration"

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"For Your Consideration"
By Moss Palace

I'm walking a straight line to you
No twists or turns come into view
And it's clear that you feel the same
Don't pretend to forget my name
Where do you think you're running to?

My love's a constellation
Across the night we shine
Don't need an invitation
To know that you are mine

You try and play a little coy
I don't believe in that my boy
And I'm tired of the hesitation
I'm not here for your consideration
I know something we'll both enjoy

My love's a constellation
Across the night we shine
Don't need an invitation
To know that you are mine

My love's a constellation
Across the night we shine
Don't need an invitation
To know that you are mine
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Adam!
Ice Cream Man
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Instruments: Drum 'n' Bass (but not THAT Drum 'n' Bass)
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Re: Nur Ein XIX Round Zero "For Your Consideration"

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For Your Consideration
by Max Bombast

There's a shiny new invention
That's caught all of our attention
And it's causing a suspension
Of our disbelief
It scans your mind and body
And makes a photocopy
A philosophic zombie
To swap you with a thief
That speaks the way that you do
The nest's infested
Cuckoo clock is ticking
Don't you know these clones don't even breathe?
So order up a blood test
To see what beats in my chest
Hell, let's make it a contest
They can't copy my technique

For your consideration
Accept no imitations
Demand the genuine article
For your consideration
Reject the replications
Go and make something incomparable
Oh yeah!

They can take your words but not your heart
They can copy works but not your art
So the only way to prove just who you are
Is to shred your sickest riff on this guitar!

For your consideration
Accept no imitations
Demand the genuine article
For your consideration
Reject the replications
Go and make something incomparable
Oh yeah!
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glennny
Jump
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Instruments: Guitar, Bass, Mandolin, Dobro, Banjo, E-Bow, Glock
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Submitting as: Berkeley Social Scene
Location: Castro Valley, California

Re: Nur Ein XIX Round Zero "For Your Consideration"

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Berkeley Social Scene

Electric Team: Geech on1988 Simmons Drums, Glen on Electric Mandolin, Ken on electric guitar, Ken on Electric Piano, Martin on electric Bass
Acoustic Team: Geech on acoustic drums, Glen on acoustic Slide and acoustic Mandolin, Martin on acoustic vox



For Your Consideration

I’m just a series of photos and statements
A figment of (your) imagination
Unless you swipe me the right way
We can’t begin our flirtation

I’m here for your consideration
Applied to be your one and only
I’m here for your consideration
Hoped to be less sad and lonely

I’ll send you a private message
If our connection seems promising
Let’s hope the conversation continues
And interest keeps blossoming

I’m here for your consideration
Applied to be your one and only
I’m here for your consideration
Hoped to be less sad and lonely

I’m the idea of infinite potential
Until we see each other for real
I can keep our meeting confidential
Give you time to see my appeal

I’m here for your consideration
Applied to be your one and only
I’m here for your consideration
Hoped to be less sad and lonely
Phillipso, Older Brothers, Semolina Pilchards, Zipline , Thank Glennny for the Frisbee, The Odoriferous Valley, The Worldly Self Assurance, Berkeley Social Scene, Very Gentle Knives, Daddy Bop Swing Set, GUNS, The Kraken Lives, Cavedwellers
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