possiblyTheWilsonHeightsGang wrote:I'm in for moonshine. Who's with me?
Shaving in the Moon Light prefight
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I might not be in this week after all. I'm building a new PC for recording, but it's sitting in pieces on my floor. I swapped in the new mobo, but it turns out I need a new power supply. I'm too lazy to re-assemble it with the old mobo just to record a song.
Dang, that would have been 25 weeks in a row.
Dang, that would have been 25 weeks in a row.
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Hi kids. First post! Think I might enter the moonshine fight. Can't guarantee that the song will be any good, but I think it has a sort of weird and nice energy. Though no chorus of any kind yet and I've gotta work this weekend. Gah.
I'm determined to make it happen, though. Wrote a couple of verses today, so we'll see what happens.
You all rock very hard indeed.
I'm determined to make it happen, though. Wrote a couple of verses today, so we'll see what happens.
You all rock very hard indeed.
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ehh if i don't get around to re-doin' it... i'll probably send it in anyway then... but i really actually wrote another moonshine song on my guitar that i can't do till i get my guitar fixed... oh well... haha...TheWilsonHeightsGang wrote:You should submit it anyway. My first song was shit and I knew it. At least we all know that you've got talent. Plus, if the verses are really good, it might make up for sub-par chorus.Poor June wrote:(if the choruses don't get better... i may not enter... it depends...)...
Love,
The Wilson Heights Gang
just don't like the chorus at all... and the drums i added... ended up messin' up... and i was too tired to notice till later haha... so yea a lil' enduring... i may re-do it though if i get an urge
"You haven't been really bad in a long time." - jim of seattle
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I'm in the one Josh isn't in. 
OR MAYBE I'M NOT??!!! MUAHAHAHAAAAHHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAAAH!!!!
One! One pickle candy! Two! Two pickle candies! Three! Threeeee pickkkllleee caaaannnnddiiieesss!!! WUAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!! (lightning flashes, thunder crashes, Sven checks himself into local nuthouse)

OR MAYBE I'M NOT??!!! MUAHAHAHAAAAHHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAAAH!!!!
One! One pickle candy! Two! Two pickle candies! Three! Threeeee pickkkllleee caaaannnnddiiieesss!!! WUAHHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!! (lightning flashes, thunder crashes, Sven checks himself into local nuthouse)
* this is not a disclaimer
ok... i just did a dif. song for moonshine... i'm not sayin' it's much better... had a sudden burst of inspiration to do a drunkin' songlove song for moonshine haha...
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Moon Shine
Doing Moon Shine - sounding drastically different than anything else I've done (not expecting any Biafra references this round). If anybody is interested in giving any constructive criticism so I can try to get it patched up before submitting it, it's here: http://www.nagodadesign.com/robdog/Astr ... nShine.mp3
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Re: Moon Shine
uhm... the vocals seem kind of out of place in the mix... don't know if that makes sense... either there needs to be more filling in the music... or less in the vocals... or make the vocals carry a bit more...astrolamb wrote:Doing Moon Shine - sounding drastically different than anything else I've done (not expecting any Biafra references this round). If anybody is interested in giving any constructive criticism so I can try to get it patched up before submitting it, it's here: http://www.nagodadesign.com/robdog/Astr ... nShine.mp3
(don't know if that makes any sense at all)... i could show you better then i could explain haha

all and all it's not too bad i like certain parts of it quite a bit
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Re: Moon Shine
Yeah - the vox . . . I tried effects - reverb and such - but it sounded really bad. I tried EQ-ing it and it helped but not a lot. Any other suggestions you have would be greatly appreciated though.Poor June wrote: uhm... the vocals seem kind of out of place in the mix... don't know if that makes sense... either there needs to be more filling in the music... or less in the vocals... or make the vocals carry a bit more...
(don't know if that makes any sense at all)... i could show you better then i could explain haha
I cleaned it up a tiny bit, brought the trem'd guitar down a tad and pushed the lead forward. It helps. Maybe I'll try singing it again tonight and see if I can push out a better performance.
Thanks.
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