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She's a Stone Cold Fox (Iron Goddess of Mercy Reviews)
- rone rivendale
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This is my top 3 for Iron Goddess. These are the 3 songs that I dl'd to listen to over and over again because they were far and above the best of the bunch.
Goddafeddabuttaflya
This sounds alot like a 70's-80's rock sort of thing. I like it, although I don't think it's something I'd listen to constantly. My Dad would love it though.
Lonbobby
Your song has a nice soothing sound to it. It's something I could imagine listening to after a hard day to get my mind at ease.
Melvin
It's close but I have to give you the vote this week. Another high quality effort. I like the lyrics, especially "Don't call me a plagurist because I make the songs you already like" I think that describes your style of songs very well.
Most of the songs for Iron Goddess were well done. So props go out to everyone I didn't mention as well.
Goddafeddabuttaflya
This sounds alot like a 70's-80's rock sort of thing. I like it, although I don't think it's something I'd listen to constantly. My Dad would love it though.
Lonbobby
Your song has a nice soothing sound to it. It's something I could imagine listening to after a hard day to get my mind at ease.
Melvin
It's close but I have to give you the vote this week. Another high quality effort. I like the lyrics, especially "Don't call me a plagurist because I make the songs you already like" I think that describes your style of songs very well.
Most of the songs for Iron Goddess were well done. So props go out to everyone I didn't mention as well.
From spoken word to actual singing, I can screw up any style with style. 

- nyjm
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damien everrett
+++ interesting sounds and rythm +++
--- unwavering high-pitched tones ---
--- indistinguishable lyrics ---
destruction enterprise
--- emotionless low-tone vox ---
/// need to tighten the vocal rythm ///
+++ interesting tones and decent beats +++
godda-feeda-butta-flya
+++ nails the late-60's hard-rock vibe +++
/// i appreciate the irony, but it doesn't do anything to raise this song above a mere pastiche ///
+++ fake fade +++
lonbobby - download
+++ opening; great swell +++
+++ vox arrangement +++
+++ overall arrangement with its ebbs and flows +++
luke henley
+++ vocal harmonies +++
/// should be on the "last days" soundtrack///
--- too purposely sloppy ---
melvin
+++ the smirk behind the power chords +++
+++ the vox harmonies of the bridge +++
--- awkward chorus ---
overnight cobra
/// serious early metallica vibe ///
--- indistinct/indistinguishable vox ---
/// there's a lead guit part in there somewhere other than the outro solo, but it also needs to be more distinct ///
paragraph un(i)t
+++ cool music +++
--- lame vox ---
--- too long ---
phunt your friends
/// interesting mix of carousel and industrial thrum///
--- raw vox ---
--- uneven arrangement ---
the psychotic skinks
+++ vamp +++
--- vocal drone ---
--- monotonous arrangement ---
+++ outro +++
sonofsupercar
+++ great groove +++
/// i don't know if the rythm guitar tone is the best for this song; it's a little thin and/or brittle ///
+++ rising riffs on the chorus +++
+++ interesting sounds and rythm +++
--- unwavering high-pitched tones ---
--- indistinguishable lyrics ---
destruction enterprise
--- emotionless low-tone vox ---
/// need to tighten the vocal rythm ///
+++ interesting tones and decent beats +++
godda-feeda-butta-flya
+++ nails the late-60's hard-rock vibe +++
/// i appreciate the irony, but it doesn't do anything to raise this song above a mere pastiche ///
+++ fake fade +++
lonbobby - download
+++ opening; great swell +++
+++ vox arrangement +++
+++ overall arrangement with its ebbs and flows +++
luke henley
+++ vocal harmonies +++
/// should be on the "last days" soundtrack///
--- too purposely sloppy ---
melvin
+++ the smirk behind the power chords +++
+++ the vox harmonies of the bridge +++
--- awkward chorus ---
overnight cobra
/// serious early metallica vibe ///
--- indistinct/indistinguishable vox ---
/// there's a lead guit part in there somewhere other than the outro solo, but it also needs to be more distinct ///
paragraph un(i)t
+++ cool music +++
--- lame vox ---
--- too long ---
phunt your friends
/// interesting mix of carousel and industrial thrum///
--- raw vox ---
--- uneven arrangement ---
the psychotic skinks
+++ vamp +++
--- vocal drone ---
--- monotonous arrangement ---
+++ outro +++
sonofsupercar
+++ great groove +++
/// i don't know if the rythm guitar tone is the best for this song; it's a little thin and/or brittle ///
+++ rising riffs on the chorus +++
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Thanks everyone for the votes! Here are some late reviews now that my tests are over.
Damien: I love your opening. Really good bass line. I'm not into your voice, but I think this a fun song. Great job.
Psychotic: Cool guitar sample. I don't like the speak-sing vocals. Great guitars towards the end.
SOS: I really thought you were going to win this one. This is a cool song and has a great live feel. I'd like to see your live performances.
Luke: Meandering guitar and voice. Hard to get into it because it seems to lack structure.
Melvin: I was wondering if this is a dig at me also? Haha, great job, I can take the joke
The "only you can save me" is an awesome bridge part. My favorite of the week.
Phunt: A tad crazy for my taste. Hard to listen to, but a good experimental song.
Paragraph: All over the place, but some interesting parts. It just doesn't gel well together though.
Gotta: Reminds me of the White Stripes. Great guitar line and solo towards the end.
Overnight: Not the type of music I like, but I can tell it's good.
Destruction: I like your opening a lot. Really atmospheric. Erg, bad rapping. Great instrumental though.
Damien: I love your opening. Really good bass line. I'm not into your voice, but I think this a fun song. Great job.
Psychotic: Cool guitar sample. I don't like the speak-sing vocals. Great guitars towards the end.
SOS: I really thought you were going to win this one. This is a cool song and has a great live feel. I'd like to see your live performances.
Luke: Meandering guitar and voice. Hard to get into it because it seems to lack structure.
Melvin: I was wondering if this is a dig at me also? Haha, great job, I can take the joke

Phunt: A tad crazy for my taste. Hard to listen to, but a good experimental song.
Paragraph: All over the place, but some interesting parts. It just doesn't gel well together though.
Gotta: Reminds me of the White Stripes. Great guitar line and solo towards the end.
Overnight: Not the type of music I like, but I can tell it's good.
Destruction: I like your opening a lot. Really atmospheric. Erg, bad rapping. Great instrumental though.