Here's a small sample of where I was going until the string (and I) snapped... This tune could be a hint more mellow (ala Pink Floyd channeled through The Mars Volta covered by QotSA) than what I've indicated here. Or if someone wanted to take the music another route, that could be interesting and I'm open to it. I was originally thinking a psychedelic rock sound, but I don't know how to write the music for that!
I don't want to play my horrible guitar tone and try to find drum loops that fit, so anyone who is remotely interested, PM me (even if you can only provide drums; if I could get drums, the guitar is passable if I work hard on it). As to the melody and guitar work here... NOTHING is set in stone. I was working out the chord progression when the A-string died (you can hear when it happened at the end of the track).
Anywho, PM if you wanna collab on this:
http://www.philwages.com/music/tsws_firstdemo.mp3