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Pigpen
I don’t usually watch movies like “Tuff Dolla$â€
He won the election (Last day of free speech reviews)
And i can see no day when you get laid or move out of your parents house but i dont go cursing you out over the interweb over it, do i?Dan-O from Five-O wrote:Besides, what I wrote was twice as fucking mean.
And I meant to be mean about it. Pigpen, your shit sucks. And unlike the overly kind Fistula, I can see no day when your shit gets any better.
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short version: enunciate more clearly, especially the chorus.Furrypedro wrote:I was wondering when the folk'd kick in, protest song stylee. but this is not so much Dylan as the Calling, and they suck sooo bad. This would be a mile better if you weren't singing in the club style, hum-nph-frm-nemen-whooouuuuu-meshmergle.
a shaker would be good, just for a little rhythm. i think i agree with the long. could cut the chorus in half. the kicker is trying to shorten the lead-in the second and third versus b/c the phrase on the guitar is pretty long and assymmetrical.j$ wrote:nice folky protest song style thing. Thanks for not adding drums at the last moment Could do with a shaker or something though. A little long.
melvin wrote:I like some of the melodic and harmonic aspects of this, but I just can’t listen to super-earnest folk music without feeling like I’m going to puke. Or fall asleep. Or fall asleep with vomit all over my shirt. I don’t like to be so negative, so I perhaps I can soften the blow with that wonderfully useful term, “genre biasâ€
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nyjm wrote:short version: enunciate more clearly, especially the chorus.Furrypedro wrote:I was wondering when the folk'd kick in, protest song stylee. but this is not so much Dylan as the Calling, and they suck sooo bad. This would be a mile better if you weren't singing in the club style, hum-nph-frm-nemen-whooouuuuu-meshmergle.
That's what I meant to sayWeaselSlayer wrote:B - No, it sounds like fucking Creed.
Well that's fair enough thennyjm wrote:as much as i think Creed has some of the most cookie-cutter songwriting, i do like the sound of his voice and the vox production for their stuff.
