OK - here they are... Also - I don't know if the caliber of songcraft is going up on songfight, or I'm just getting more used to the type of stuff on here, but this week's fight was awesome.
SFO
Cool Segment.
Ryan Rickenbach
Cool, laid back vibe. Great production. 1st verse sounds a bit contrived. Something sounded out of synch at around 1:12. Actually, in a few spots. Has kind of a Monkees vibe.
Spudy Malone
OK?
Smalltown Mike
The guitar part has a Nirvana Unplugged thing happening. In it coming in it coming you me in it coming you me for.
Stolar Skye
Sounds rock radio ready. I like to hear the ROK!! Great voice.
Loyalty Day
Damn! Like it already... ohh pretty voice - like it more. Love the rhodes. Shit this is good. Really like the acoustic tone... sharp. On my iPod, Thanks!
Hans Gruber
Nice descending progression! Vocals could come up. I like the harmonies too!
One Man's Hat
Its a cool riff - i would have loved to hear a chorus. Love that buzzy guitar!
Dr. Awkward
Yeah! Skate/snowbard videos. Charged up, ROK. Not the kind of music I can personally get into, but well done nevertheless.
DJ3XHC
UGH. Really not my thing.
Eddiebangs
Like a lid on a pot cooking lobster that's about to boil over... K, now it's spilling on the stovetop. The lobster just jumped out of the pot and is crying. He climbed back in. I like this! I'll collab anytime.
Luke
Awesome harmony! Reaching / unsyncopated in spots but awesome nonetheless. I haven't been on here in a while and your recordings are getting much better. You rok... I dig how you can be screamin one song and mellowed out and rargh!
Beatnik Turtle
I'd like it much better if the vocals were less whiney, makes it sound like a joke song. The music was awesome though!
Johnsonic
My vocs are too low, too much verb on them too. I agree with all the input given here.
Smalltown Mike said: "But again—and I hate to be a stickler—why is it called What’s in it for me?"
I was thinking along the lines of genetics, heredity, apples and trees and whatnot...
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