Ned Plimpton Orchestra: Not the kind of music I expected from a Wes Anderson fan. Really... cheesy I guess, but sweet too I suppose. Really theatrical voice, you sound like you’ve done musical theater. This is a lot of flash without much substance, I’m afraid. totally spot on, i was just going ...

LMNO, thanks for the feedback. lyrics are my shortcoming so i appreciate the help.

granted, this is none of my business, but i come here for feedback that will be beneficial to my craft. i dont come here to listen to what appears to be 14 year old bickering over who's dick is bigger. 'Do you really expect me or anyone else to believe this P.O.S. wasn't composed by you, Egg, or any...

those guys are friends of mine. everytime claudio has talked to me about the plot of his music, he's been very drunk and i dont really listen.

Frank Zappa & the mothers - Dummy Up

"Smoke the tapes??"

"Smoke the tapes of your group. You can REALLY get off..."

huzzah.

woo!

lego beats the crap out of playmobil anyday.

crates, i just think you're a closed minded jerk. no offense.

i dont get it.

Ned Plimpton Orchestra: Zappaesque, but I bet you know that. Tebreeze is like a couch or something, huh. Songfight has the most talented instrumentalists, it’s just astonishing. i appreciate the kind words. tabriz refers to a type of persian rug. one of the pricey persuasion, as the lyrics imply.

seriously man, our quantum waves are in phase.

dude you just dont understand it. it's too deep for you. he obviously takes music very seriously. those lyrics are so meaningful. i relate to them on such a profound level. i mean come on, god hates penguins and he hates ME too! AHHHHH!!!! genius. he is a big success and i suck! how could he know so...

damn i'm usually pretty on top of that kind of thing. well, what can i say, you caught me.

i hate it when people say uncomfortability. THE WORD IS DISCOMFORT.

i took this tune a little more seriously than i did bad cat. and i got a hair cut for the first time in 3 years today. i feel like 10 pounds lighter.

ouch

well that's it, my Am I Forgiven is submitted. i like my tune this week.

ken wrote: Ned Plimpton Orchestra - Well played, recorded and a great arrangement. Lyrics just aren't my cup of tea.

thanks. lyrics have always been my shortcoming. i took this week's fight a little more seriously, lyrically. doesnt mean they're any good, just a little more serious.

look, the rampant ignorance is starting to grate, so maybe we could discuss songs.

please exuse my flip response, it was a little rude i admit.

the structure is basically ABABABAB. so is what your saying that the instrumental section is good and the lyrics/vocals are garbage? because musically, the beginning is the same as the rest of it.

DJ Big Dick wrote: Ned Plimpton Orchestra - The music at the beginning rules, rest of it doesn't.
5/10

so some of it rules some of it doesnt. thanks, i'll use that in next week's fight. very helpful.

Ned Plimpton Orchestra I think the track is trying a little too hard. Somehow the rhythm doesn’t really swing like it could. I think things need to be simplified a bit. Obviously there is skill here but it feels somewhat self-conscious. I don’t mean it can’t be sophisticated just a few less n...