Le Chic Sonique Mon dieu! Two cats are on sort of the same wavelength(Regard le chanson de Max Le Chat) Nice squeeze box, good tune a tad short.

Luke Henley I was forced to check out other Henley entries to see if I was listening to what I call, “a work of deconstructionâ€

PiGPEN wrote:

max the cat wrote:I can’t find my way in here.. Some deconstruction works for me some doesn’t. this doesn’t

Anyone mind explaining to me what "deconstruction" refers to?

It’s just my way of describing work that sounds raw, grainy( jeans with holes in the knees) “distressedâ€

Book Club I love the ice cream truck kid beginning, but things seem to sag towards the middle production a little too monochromatic for my taste. The nerdy vocal works (David Sadarisish) but I’m not sure this is metaphorical or a commercial for the ice cream makers of America. Chorus sounds a lit...

Cow was the answer weird. Thanks for all the input.MTC

Tried that twice, still have "Don't want to be Your friend,"" Up all Night" "Peppermint Patty" strange, If I remember correctly those songs aren't even in the same fight.

The reviews are coming in on the new songs A tear etc. They are not showing up on the home page in my browser I have old songs Peppermint Patty etc.
I gather some people have the new songs I don't, please advise.

Kweep wrote:sweet! congrats max!

Thanks back. Victories always seem so random. humans as a collective are very unpredictable.

Yeah, that looks real neglectful. :roll: I am looking for enlightnment not oblique defensive answers. After re-reading your review as you so ordered I found nothing there to enlighten me but your reference to neglect.So let me start again and ask why do you want hair on your vocal? So it cuts throug...

The Sober Irishman wrote:

max the cat wrote:Missed this so my question would be why?

Because. Read my review of myself for more.

Neglect?

The Sober Irishman wrote:Notice:

The vocals in my song aren't clipping, they're overdriven. On purpose. Ok, I guess that's technically clipping.

People will still mention it as if I had no idea.

Missed this so my question would be why?

Kweep Delightfully whiney, love the ring modulated intro. Everything works together the little stories, the low techish track, the vocals . Very hooky hook. Nothing wrong here. Beatnik Turtle kinda cute, I assume that the lo tech is a matter of economics. I like the nasal backgrounds, uniquely perv...

Jolly roger Interesting, mix feels to polite for the genre, It may be intentional but I don’t think it works. Drums need to pop. The guitar sometimes feels out of the pocket. Mama the Funktress and Mary Jane Trick Delightfully wanky, estrogen packed macho boob ya, rhyme a little pointless but I g...

Sufficiently Intoxicated I am sufficiently intoxicated intoxicated with you. I’m a little bit over stimulated So here’s lookin’ at you I’m sufficiently intoxicated Your touch has gone right to my head. Yes I’m totally inebriated so I can be completely misled. I’m drunk on your eyes, hig...

I feel that I have been remiss in not giving back feedback . So many of you writers give generously of your time and opinions. I keep my paws under the bed always lurking, never participating. I have gotten so much good, bad, wise, ignorant, insightful, cruel, feed back. I must return the favor. I w...

I Don’t Want To Be Your Friend I want to be an against your will thrill, a delicious skill that will make all four of your lips tremble from the chill my fingers will coax from the round edges of your thatched hill. I want to speak with a silent moist voice in tongues that give your thighs rise to...

I'd like to thank all for the kind words. In our little corner of the net(SF) The Big Easy won this one. MTC

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I just don't believe you mean it, man.

I mean it, MTC

Bioluminescence She got bioluminescence Woah, woah, woah She got the incandescence It’s an animal glow. When she’s in a high skirt the light’’ll make your eyes hurt she is solar energy. Got the glitter got the spark, never keep you in the dark Cause she’s got the luminosity. Bioluminescence, she’s t...

Chance Listen to the cannonade of six billion four hundred million seven hundred thousand one hundred and ninety seven... ninety eight human hearts beating. Listen to the cascades of corpuscles roaring through a million miles of arteries. The swarms of eye lashes that could blink a wind strong enoug...

The breath of Tane a sureal, smooth groove that winds the winds into sweet pain. The breath of Trane that blows to places we will never reach wired, inspired, insane. Now here are the facts He got taken so soon because he got to God with his sax. Such a short life Trances, dances, romances, taking c...

Seed Of Janjaweed You dance with devils in Fallujah streets You horsemen of the apocalypse You bring the heathens to their knees The word of God upon your lips Your Bradleys growl a freedom song they crush Korans beneith their wheel In Jesus name you fight for peace No mercy til they come to heal Yo...

[his isn’t really the place but to finish my point I have to say I think what’s going on there shouldn’t be blamed on them, or they, or any other singular group or country. It’s all of us that have failed, as a race, the human race is failing as a whole. And pointing fingers does no good, nor does i...